AkDha FF- Tu Jahan Mein Wahan *Chapter 28 updated* pg 130

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Az3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: SShreShthA
Superb... Fabulous... Beautiful update...
Though feel bad for pinaz begum bt happy dat rukaiya is indirectly helping jodha...becoz pinaz is out and after rukaiya is exposed she will be out too... Making our jodha only begum (though salima is also there bt her equation is different)... 😆 😆

Bit worry abt jalal that ruku is planning to spell next on him...
Excellent work dear as always... 👍🏼 👍🏼
Nd as said above ruku cn do nothing other than dreaming nd spelling... No problem with her dream... I hope soon u'll show us in reality with our Akdha...

Thanx for updating nd pm...

I love how perceptive you are hun!! That was my exact motive for getting rid of Pinaz!!👏👏👏 Thank you for the wonderful review😳... I'll try to update soon

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diksha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#342

superb updat. but Ruku is getting more scary every time.

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lourel24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#343

it was just awesome.ruquaiya is becoming dangerous more n more.eager to watch how she will spell upon jalal n how jodha will save him👍🏼.plzzz update soon

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Hi Azra sorry for the late comment ...

But 1st of all I juz wanted to let u know that I LOVED this chapter !!!! As a matter of fact I love all of the chapters ... 😆

Ok back to what I wanna say ...

The love scene of both dream Jalal and Ruku was HOTTT !!!! ☺️

Adham and Maham's scene were great too

I personally loved the part where Jalal walked pass Ruku and went to Jodha . 😊

Oh and the hug was awesome !!! 👍🏼

P.S. Juz wanna let u know and well I'm sure u know this but still I wanna juz tell u ...

16th Oct 2013 episode of JA was the best episode I've ever watched in my life !!!! 😆

Because the Mandir scene happened !!!!

That was 1 of my fav scene in ur story esp the part where Jalal bends down and puts his head on Maa's feet ... It was like a wish come true ... ❤️❤️❤️

Well keep up the good work and am looking forward for what's gonna happen between Jalal , Sher Shah Suri and Jodha ... Oh and also Ruku ...

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Az3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#345

@VincyAnne- Thank you so much for the review hun!! Better late than never🤗... I didn't watch the episode yet... I'll watch it tonight... We one episode behind in SA and I don't watch it online because I can't understand without subtitles😭😭... But thank you!!❤️ I'm glad about the Mandhir scene!! Aanchal and I should open up a psychic booth😆

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litty thomas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#346

this time i am the late one to comment dn't blame me...😭my net isn't in a gud mood...anyways lovely update dear

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Az3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: littoos
this time i am the late one to comment dn't blame me...😭my net isn't in a gud mood...anyways lovely update dear

Aww it's all right hun!!🤗 Thank you😛

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prachi153

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Posted: 12 years ago

#348

👏good one please continue soon

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philantus01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#349

heya!!!!!!

sorry for replying late...

my question for u...R u in touch wid da CV's ?😆😆 ok dont give me dat expression😲...i ll tell u y i asked dis question... in ur previous update der was a part wher jalal bows down in front of the goddess for jodha to fulfill her wish... its actually happening in dis show wher he bows down in front of the goddess to complete her wish..😆😆

ok coming back to ur update...amazing...

u dint mentioned nything abt d sack which he brot alongwith the corpses of the tigers...

the characterization was perfect...both understud each others pain...it comes to proving the intensity and depth of feelings and care for the each other. jalal's character took my heart away...i loved d way u penned down d feeling...awesome

coming to Rukayah.,...i dont hate her character...its understud dat she loves him a lot n wants d same from him...its but obvious dat she wud feel jealous of jodha...being d first wife she dint get d love which she was craving since long...poor soul...her possessiveness took her to a wrong lane...😭😭

whn u wrote it was 18+ i tot finally jodha n jalal will consummate their marriage...but it was rukayah's dream sequence...i hope to get sum intense romance between jodha n jalal...

i loved dis update...finally jalal ll b relieved...i was happy whn she consoled him...n he cried in her arms...😳😳

do contuniue soon dear...

hw was ur Eid?????

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Az3003

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Posted: 12 years ago

#350

@1234philli23

You're Priyanka right?😛... Thank you so much for the wonderful review!! I know I left the sack for the next update... There was a reason for that😆... lol no I'm not in touch with the CVs... I just knew this would happen after the very first time Jodha took the vow to bring Jalal's head to Devi Maa!😛... Aanchal had it in her story as well that's why I said we should open a psychic booth😆 Law isn't working for me anymore🤣... I also predicted the suicide so I was freaked out😳... Thank you so much for the wonderful review love!! Next update coming soon!!❤️ Lots of love to you!! And my Eid was rocking thanks for asking!! But I had to come back early because I wrote a test this morning😭... It went well though😛... Thank you once again!!