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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome, amazing part
loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow love it 
me on holidays yepieee 
awesome update 
love 
she is geet aur her duplicate 
waitng for their meet 
jaldi say 
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Posted: 9 years ago
 awesome update maan see geet now they will meet face 2 face lovely
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update 
so maan saw her but didn't get chance to talk to her 
good she feels maans name firmiliar 
can't wait to see what happens next when they meet 
will she recognise n if not will he try to remind her ????
Thanks for pm plz keep em coming  N continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

It's superb. Main has seen geet's one glimpse and he is sure that she is his geet. But suddenly she disappeared from the party.priya is the girl who seems like a geet or she is maan's geet.what is mystery behind this. She is herself going to meet maan. Waiting for next dear


thanks dear

u know soon

priya is his geet or not 
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jayshu17

Superb update!!!👏👏⭐️Priya as Geet😲😕how is it possible???something fishy😕now Geet and Maan face to face...its very interesting...loved it...waiting for the next update


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Posted: 9 years ago

 

Part 8

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Priya phone buzzed, she excused ...

Priya : dad

Di ka call hai

Mein abhi aayi

Aap dono chalo

Dad : ok

Jaldi aana

Hum conference room mein jaa rhe hai

Priya : ok

               *********

Priya : hey di

Ridz: kaisi hai tu

Sb thik hai na waha

Priya : ha di

Aap aur jiju kaise hai

Ridz : kaun jiju

Priya : fir se fight huya hai

Armaan snatched phone from her...

Armaan : cutie

Tujhe pata hai na

Meri koi galati nhi hoti

Ye basket thodi crack hai

Ridz : you called me crack

Mr. Armaan Malik

Mujhe ab baat bhi mt krna

Armaan : suna cutie

Ab toh sch khehna bhi mushkil ho gya hai

Priya : shant ho jaayo dono

Jb dekho ladai

Armaan : cutie mein toh kuch bhi nhi krta

Ridz : ha ha

Tumhara bhoot krta hai na sb kuch

Priya : di aur jiju

Jb aapki fight khtam ho jaaye

Tb call krna mujhe

Ridz : priya

Apna dhyan rakhna

Koi bhi baat ho toh turant mujhe call krna

Priya : di dad hai mere sath

Aur sid bhi

Aap itni tension mt liya kro

Armaan : yhi mein isse khta hu

Par ye tension queen

Subh se mera dimag kha rhi hai

Ridz : you idiot

Priya : buy both of you

.

Priya turn to go, but she stop sees her... actually priya standing near window at corner side...

Priya : ye cutie pie idhar kya kr rhi hai

Where is her parent

Koi ase choti si bachi ko akela chodta hai

.

She goes towards her, she not knows why she feeling connect to her...

Priya : maahi

Maahi turns & so happy to see her...she threw ball & hugged her legs...

Priya take her in arms & kissed both cheeks...

Priya : mahi

Aap yaha kaise

.

Kiske sath aayi ho

Mahi : dadda

Priya : ase koi chodta hai apni beti ko

Kaha hai wo

Mahi pointed towards door...

Priya going take her with own but maid stops her...

Maid : chodiye bachi ko

Mahi came here

Kissi anjaan se baat nhi krte

Mahi hugged priya tightly, don't want go with maid...

Maid : mahi mein aapke dadda ko bhol dungi

Aap meri baat nhi maanti

Priya : aap hai kaun

Koi ase datata hai chote si bachi ko

Maid : madam aap mere kaam mein dakhal bazi mt kriye

Mujhe iske dadda ne appoint kiya hai

Iski dkeh baal ke liye

Priya (mummer) : khud bachi ko smbhal nhi sakte

Rakh dete hai

Kissi ko bhi

Priya : mahi

Mahi eyes full of tears...

Priya : baby kya huya aapko

Kyu ro rhi hai aap

Mahi : mu...maa

Maid : mahi beta

Aunty ke pass aayo

Mein aapko dadda ke pass le chalti ho

Mahi : mu..mma

Priya : shant mahi

She kissed all over her face...

.

Chalo hum aapke dadda ke pass chalte hai

She nodded...

                          ************

Sushant , sid , Maan, sasha, adi discussing some points for project ...

Same time priya entered with mahi & kavita (maid) ...

Priya : mahi

Aapke dadda kaha hai

Mahi : dadda

Maan looks towards mahi & shocked to see mahi in geet arms...

Maid : sir

Sorry

Maine mahi baby ko lene ki bhut koshish ki inse

Par mahi baby pe mere pass nhi aayi

Maan(whispers) geet

Sushant : priya bte

Kaha rh gyi thi aap

Priya : dad ye mahi hai

Jiske baare mein maine aapko bataya tha

Ye mujhe yaha bahar dikhi

Sushant : now give her to her dad

& come sit here

Priya : ji

Mahi dadda ke pass jaayo

Maahi : na

Priya : mahi

Another side adi & sasha too shocked geet here...

Priya : mahi beta

Maan : usse rhehne do tumhare pass

Priya (mummer ) khud toh apni beti ko smbhal nhi sakte

.

Jb smbhal nhi sakte

Toh office kyun leke aaye

.

Us maid ko dedi smbhalne ke liye

Maan : geet

Priya : dad mein mahi ko bahar leke jaa rhi hu

I hope you have no problem Mr. Mahi Dadda

Maan : geet suno toh

His voice is so low...

Priya left...

Sushant : Mr. Khurana

Don't worry

Mahi priya ke pass safe hai

Sid : can we continue meeting

Sasha : sorry Mr. Sighaniya

Can we discuss in another meeting

Adi : sorry for inconvenience

I feel Maan sir not feeling good

Sid : ok

Bye mr. khurana

                    **********

Sid : kuch smjh nhi aaya

Achanak mr. Khurana ko kya ho gya

Jbse unhone mahi ko priya ke sath dekha

He behaving different

Pata nhi kya bol rhe the

Sushant : ho jaata hai

Mein chalta hu

I have some work

Tum priya ko leke hotel chale jaana

Sid : ok

                       *************

Maan rushed towards geet...

Maan : kavita where is geet

Kavita : sir kaun geet

Maan : mahi

Mahi kaha hai

Kavita : wo perk mein us lady ke sath

                             **************

Priya : mahi caught kro ball

Mahi try to catch ball, but fall too caught most time...

She pouted cutely...

Priya : oh my baby

She bent on her knees & opened the arm...

Priya : come mahi

Mahi runs slowly- slowly & hugged priya...

Maan feels so happy to see mahi in her arms...

Maan come near to both & bent to her level...

Maan : geet

.

Geet

Meri taraf dekho

Mahi : dadda

.

Mu..maa

Priya : ji aap yaha

She stands & takes step back, but mahi held her finger...

Priya : mahi

Ab mein chalti hu

Hum fir milenge baby

Maan : geet tum ase kaise jaa sakti ho

Priya give confused look to him...

Priya : kya aapne mujhse kuch kaha

Maan : tum asa kyun kr rhi ho

What my mistake

Priya (think) : oh unhone khi meri baat sun toh nhi li

(khud toh apni beti ko smbhal nhi sakte

.

Jb smbhal nhi sakte

Toh office kyun leke aaye

.

Us maid ko dedi smbhalne ke liye)

.

Par maine inke sath toh asa kuch nhi kiya

Aur na kha

Fir

Ye

.

Suniye Mr.

Maan : why you behaving so different with me geet

Priya : geet

I think aap mujhe koi aur smjh rhe hai

I am priya singhaniya

Sid : priya

Ab chalo bhi

Priya : ha sid

Bye mahi

Mahi : na

Priya : baby abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai

Hum fir jaroor milenge

Priya left with sid...

.

Mahi : dadda

Mu..maa

Maan take her daughter in arms...

Maan : mahi

Mumma se mein baat karunga

.

.

His phone ringed.

Detective : sir aapne Dr. Sushant ke baare mein pata krne ko jo kaha tha

Maan : hmm

Bolo

D : sir wo paris mein rhte hai

Apni do betiyo ke sath

Ridhima & priya

Wo yaha aajkal India ek project ke karan aaye hai

Aur us din wo party mein

Apni choti beti priya ke sath party mein aaye the

Maan : priya Sighaniya

Ke baare mein mujhe sb kuch janana hai

D : ok sir

                    ********

Maan : kavita

Mahi ko ghar leke jaayo

Mahi : dadda

Mu..ma

Maan : jaldi wo humare sath hongi

Mahi ab ghar jaayo

Kavita aunty ke sath

.

.

Sasha : Mk

Wo geet nhi ho sakti

Geet us accident mein mar chuki hai

Maan : sashaaa

Sasha : Mk

Sorry hurting you

But please try to understand

Adi : maan sir

Sasha is right

.

Ydi wo geet hoti

Toh hum sbko jaanti na

Par aapne dekha na

Wo aapse ajnabi ki tarah mili

Aur hum dono ko dekha tk nhi

Maan : I don't want hear anything now

Leave

Sasha : but Mk

Maan : sasha

Adi : sasha hume chalna chaiye

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Maan

My heart knows she is my geet

Wo khi nhi jaa sakti

Mujhe yu akela chodke

.

Fir wo kyun mujhse baat nhi kr rhi

.

Par mahi se toh krti hai

Mujhse nhi

.

Mujhse ajnaabi sa behavior kyun

.

 

Kya mujhse koi galati ho gyi geet

So tum apne maan se itna naraaz ho

Usse ek baar pyaar se dekh bhi nhi sakti

.

Usse itna ajnaabi kyun bna diya

.

Geet tumhe jwab dena honga

Is baar tum durr nhi jaa sakti mujhse

.

2 saal bitaye hai maine aur mahi ne akele

Ab aur nhi

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
i believe geet had problem of memory loss that's why she wasn't able to recognize any of them
awesome part
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

i believe geet had problem of memory loss that's why she wasn't able to recognize any of them

awesome part



thanks dear

😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update
Maan saw geet