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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RekhaDayan5

oh wat a story...πŸ˜›πŸ‘
Superb...πŸ‘πŸΌ
keep it up...⭐️
i like the papa-beti bonding...
nd also rishi's dreaams

thanks rekha.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: designersaini

haan...mua dupatta...but dont worry kabhi na kabhi to inshi mil hi jayenge.


haan firr unko toh milna hi hain 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

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haan firr unko toh milna hi hain 😳

offcourse milna...na milna hota to likh kyun rahi hoti mai ye😳...
New dp...hmm...hmm...🀣.
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Posted: 10 years ago
CHAPTER-8

Rishi opens d door of his car.He put his hand on his head.he feels dizzy n falls.Zara who is coming towards her taxi sees Rishi.She runs towards him...Zara tries to wake him up..Rishi look upto her...Zara shakes him from his shoulder...Rishi holsd her hand n calls her name...Indira...n holds her hand tightly as dont want 2 let her go..while Zara gets startled at his dis reaction..She looking at him and in her subconscious mind calls his name...Rishi..n tears roll from her eyes...She cups his face n tries to wake him up..she consoles him n says 'kuch nahi hoga aapko'...Rishi smiles at dis n gets unconscious.
Zara shakes him up but get no response frm him..she with d help of others make him lie on d back seat of the car n herself drive him to d hospital.Doctors takes him fr d check-up.
Zara gets confused of why she is crying for some stranger...why she beacame restless on seeing him and why she is so worries about him.
After a while..Zara calls Rishi's family from his cellphone and inform dem about the incident.
She in her mind thinks-
kyun inhe aisi haalat mein dekhkar mujhe takleef ho rahi hai...kyun mai apneaap ko inse door nahi le jana chahti...kyun dil baar baar ye keh raha hai ki mai inke paas rukun...kyun aisa lag raha hai ki maine inhe pehle bhi kahin dekha hai...aur jab unhone mujhe Indira bulaya to ek pal ke liye mujhe aisa kyun laga ki jaise mai hi indira hoon...lekin mai...mai to Zara hoon...to phir unhone wo mujhe Indira kyun bula rahe the.Na jaane unki aankhon mein dekhke aisa laga jaise mai unhe bohot achche se jaanti hoon.

[while these thoughts were going on in her mind,Rishi's parents arrives in the hospital.Zara decides to leave from there seeing that Rishi's parents are now there for him...n also she feels disturbed due to d incident n the ongoing thoughts in her mind..she decides to leave frm dere to have some rest.]
Doctor after checking-up Rishi come out.Rishi's parents asks him about what happen to him.Dr. tells them not to worry as it was just due to fever n weakness n due to some stress dat he got fainted...now he is alright n if u want,u can take him home.n also advice dem about Rishi to get him complete rest till he recovers.

After few minutes,Rishi ko hosh aata hai and he looks around for Indira but couldn't find her.Her parents comes dere.

Simmi- Ricky...kaisa hai beta tu ab.Tujhse kitni baar kaha tha na ki aaj aaram kar.Dekh kya haalat bama li hai apni.Ab jab jab tak tu puri tarah se thik nahi ho jaata tab tak tu bilkul bhi office nahi jayega...samjha tu..

Rishi- Maa...Dad..wo kahan hai..

A.D.- kaun beta...kaun kahan hai..

Rishi- Dad Indira...Indira kahan hai..wo hi mujhe yahan lekar aai thi...lekin ab pata nahi kahan chali gai.pls..use dhundo na,mere paas lekar aaiye.
[Simmi n A.D. gets worried about him]

Simmi- Ricky tu kya keh raha hai.Indira yahan kaise ho sakti hai.ye tera wehem hoga.

A.D.- haan Ricky...shayad stress ki wajah se aisa hoga.Tu ghar chal aur jab tak puri tarah se thik nahi ho jayega tab tak tu kahin nahi jayega.

Rishi- nahi dad...maa maine sachme Indira ko dekha.Maine unka haath pakda tha aur unhone mera naam bhi liya tha...aur unhone mujhe ye bhi kaha tha ki 'wo mujhe kuch nahi hone dengi'...wo meri Indira hi thi..

Simmi- (looks at him n in a worried tone says) Ricky kya ho gaya hai tujhe...kaisi baatein kar raha hai tu.Indira yahan kaise aa sakti hai.tujhe pata hai na ki Indira 5 saal pehle mar chuki hai.phir sab jaante hue bhi aisi baatein kyun kar raha hai.aur ek baar zara Ahana ke baare to soch.agar wo tujhe aisi haalat mein dekhegi to us maasum bachchi par kya gujregi..apneaap ko sambhal.

[Rishi after all dis calms down n thinks for a while on what her mother just said]

Rishi gets discharged from the hospital and Simmi and A.D. takes him to home.After reaching there,Simmi tells him to take some rest till then she prepares lunch for everyone.Rishi leaves for his room.

On the otherside Zara reaches the hotel where she is staying.She is in the deep thoughts of the incident which happened a few minutes before.She couldn't understand why she can't divert her mind from him,why she feel attached to him.

Kahin to kahin to hogi wo duniya jahan tu meri sath hai
Rishi gets into the flashback when Indira called his name and he held her hands.

Jahan mai jahan tu aur jahan bus teri meri jajbat hai aur
Jahan subha teri palkon ki kirno me lori jahan chandki sone de baho me
Jane na kahan wo duniya hai jane na wo hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan  meri zindagi mujse itani khafa nahi
Tears trickles down his eyes.He cant believe that after so many yars Indira was infront of him.He dont want to believe that 5 years back Indira died..After so many years...dont no why but somewhere in his heart he had a belief that Indira has not gone anywhere aur aaj wo vishwaas phir se majboot hua hai...phir se ek umeed jagi hai and now he can feel that she is there...
Jane na kahan wo duniya hai jane na wo hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan  meri zindagi mujse itani khafa nahi
chahe uske paas na ho par kahin na kahin..aas paas hai...lekin pata nahi kahan.

Sanse ho gayi hai kiski ahome mai kho gayi hunhu jane kiski baho me
Manjilose rahe dundati chali aur kho gayi hai manjil kanhi raho pe
Zara tries to engage herself in some work but couldnt as her mind takes her to the flashback of the incident.

Kanhi to kanhi to hai nasha teri meri har mulakat me
HOtose hotoko chumti wo rahete hum har bat pe
he remembers how he n Indira met eachother n in their every meet they had dere as usual nok-jhokn how they used to manofy each other with hugs n kisses
Kaheti hai fiza jahan meri jamee aasma  
Kahan hai tu  meri hansi meri khushi meri  jahan
Jane na kahan wo duniya hai jane na wo hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan  meri zindagi mujse itani khafa nahi he remembers how his life took a drastic change after Indira was gonehis life,his happiness all are becoz of herhe gets confuse dat whatever he is thinking about indira is true or it is just his imagination.he asks himself dat why dis happened to him.Jane na kahan wo duniya hai jane na wo hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan  meri zindagi mujse itani khafa nahi

He stands near the window.
Ahana returns from her school.She notices that her Dadu is at home so she thinks that might be her father too had come home early.She asks his whereabouts.At that time Simmi comes there.

Simmi- Beta tu school se aa gai.Tere papa ki tabiyat theek nahi hai.isiliye wo upar aaram kar rahe hain.Mai uske liye khana lekar ja rahi hoon.itne tu bhi change karke aaja aur phir hum sab lunch karte hain.

Ahana- dadi mai Papa ke liye khana lekar jau.

Simmi- beta tu kaise lekar jayegi.Chal ek kaam karte hain mai bhi tere saath chalti hoon.aur saath mein tera khana bhi isi mein daal deti hoon.tu itne jaldi ja aur change katke aajan mai itne kahan lekar aati hoon.

Ahana nods her head n goes from there.In 2 minutes after changing Ahana come in d dining hall.Simmi takes Rishi n Ahana's lunch to his room with Ahana.
Simmi enters Rishi's room n sees him standing near the window.

Simmi- Ricky tu yahan window ke paas khada hokar kya kar raha hai.Maine tujhse aaram karne ke liye kaha tha na aur doctor ne bhi kaha tha ki 2 din tak tujhe complete bed rest ki jaroorat hai.Ab jaldi se idhar aakar lunch karle aur phir uske baad apne bistar se mat uth jana..

Rishi is about to say something but he sees Ahana standing beside her dadi.

Rishi- arey...Ahana tum school se aa gai.
But Simmi interupts him n says to Ahana- Ahan beta zara apne papa ko dekhna ki wo khana khane ke baad aaram kare.Ok.

Ahana- Ok dadi.
Simmi leaves from there.

Ahana- Papa ab jaldi se aao mujhe bohot zoro se bhuk lagi hai

Rishi- hmm...to chalo lunch start karte hain.
n both sits on the bed for there lunch.Rishi is about to feed Ahana but she stop him...
Ahana- papa ruko...aaj mai aapko khana khilaungi..aap bimar ho na.jab mai bimar hoti hoon to aap mujhe khana khilate ho...isliye aaj mai aapko khilaungi.

Rishi- Ok...ek kaam karte hain ki aap mujhe apne haatho se khana khilana aur mai apni princess ko apne haatho se khilaunga.Ok.

Ahana nods her head n both father-daughter start feeding each other n finish their lunch.

Rishi- hmm...ab lunch finish ho gaya.chao ab papa aur Ahana bahar ghumkar aayenge.

Ahana- papa aap bhul gaye dadi ne kya kaha tha ki lunch ke baad aapko rest karna hai.

Risji- wo beta actually kya hai na lunch karne ke baad ab mere andar bohot power aa gai hai aur dekho abhi to fever bhi nahi hai.

Ahana- (stands at her place and put her hands on her waist) Papa aap karenge ya nahi (n stares at him)

Rishi- (looks at Ahana who is staring at him n standing jst like her mother.He gets terrify at her avtar n in fearful tone) are mai kar raha hoon na rest...mai to hand wash karne ki baat kar raha tha.mai hand wash karke aata hoon (n murmurs in his mind...kya beti hai..mujhe hi daant laga deti hai..gusse mein bilkul apni maa ki carbon copy hai infact usse bhi khatarnaak)
Rishi returns back washing his hands n lays on his bed to sleep.

Rishi- beta ab mai so gaya hoon.Ab aap jao.

Ahana- no papa...aap pehle apni aankhen to band karo...tabhi to mai jaungi.warna aap phirse cheating karoge.

Rishi- Ok..meri maa...(n closes his eyes).

Ahana- (looks at him to confirm if he has slept or not n den kiss on his forehead n leaves from there).

NEXT DAY

Zara wakes up with a fresh and new feeling.She spreads her arms and smiles and then goes to freshen up and gets ready

IN DIWAN MANSION-

Rishi gets ready for office.He sits on the sofa and takes Indira's photoframe and cares it.A.D. arrives there and knocks at the door.Rishi looks in that direction and stands at once.

Rishi- Dad aap...aap yahan...Aapko kuch chahiye kya.Mujhe bula liya hota mai khud aa jata.

A.D.- wo mai office ja raha tha to tujhe dekhne aaya tha.ab teri tabiyat kaisi hai.aur itna taiyaar hokar kahan ja raha hai.

Rishi- dad mai bilkul thik hoon to isiliye socha ki mai office chalta hoon aapke saath.

A.D.- Office...no..bilkul nahi.Kal dekha tha na kya hua tha.Ab jab tak tum bilkul thik nahi ho jaate tab tak no office.Abhi tum aaram karo.Mai office jata hoon.

Rishi- Par dad.

A.D.- par war kuch nahi...

Rishi in disappointment places Indira's photoframe on the table,A.D. who was going to turn to leave looks at the photo and stops.

hope u all like it😊

Edited by designersaini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

πŸ˜›SUPERB>...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RekhaDayan5


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thanku rekhaπŸ˜ƒEdited by designersaini - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update

never cry upon or be happy publicly for your creativity otherwise it'll never let you go up n yes praise it in ur mind i hope you understand πŸ˜‰

agar ye ss hai to speed baraao story ki ya fir ff banado.
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Mje kehne ki zarort h ki kesa tha..ek dum fantastic tha..awsm.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Paulomi-

nice update

never cry upon or be happy publicly for your creativity otherwise it'll never let you go up n yes praise it in ur mind i hope you understand πŸ˜‰

agar ye ss hai to speed baraao story ki ya fir ff banado.

thanku n samajh gai.
Nahi FF nahi banana mujhe ise SS hi kafi hai.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: samiksha050992

Mje kehne ki zarort h ki kesa tha..ek dum fantastic tha..awsm.. πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ

thanku Sami.waise jo kehna hai kehde...yahan sab kuch welcome hai ji.