OS:MY LOVE....PREVIEW IN Page6 - Page 3

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Wow advitha nimmolgu obba adbhut kaviyitrI. Tumba chennagide. Thumbs up especially priya's everlasting beauty description.

Yenu doctre malegu preetigu vihshesh Nantide alva. ganesh movie thara aagoytu.😊
I really liked the way u described nature n its bliss, priya her posture her eyes n cherry lips (adbhuta kalpane) her charm n ram loosing himself in her eternal beauty just to know whom she I waiting why she is sad feeling very sad seeing her sad face. His disappointment of not getting the Focourge n bechaini fabulous advitha.
Story start superb, description amazing n end shocking n lil consfued but hopes alive just bcoz of 100 missed calls.
I feel ram is waiting for her only bt just lost himself in her.
Continue soon.
I started reading b4 u pm. Thanku for. The pm.
I happily and humbly accept your dedication. It's an honour for me thank you dear. Thank u so much.
Bareeeta iri. Naavu ododikke sada siddha. 😊

thank u very for commenting dear i wil continue soon...full kannada comment super malthi...thnks dear

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Hey Advitha..good to see u writing.. 👍🏼
Nice start...little confusing though..may be picture will get clear in next..
Beautifull description of nature, Priya's beauty nd Ram's thoughts nd feelings.. 👏
Looking forward to it..
Cont soon nd thanx for pm..

thnks for commenting viro...i wil answer to all ur confusion in next part..

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

interesting ...update soon...

thnks for commenting dear,i wil continue soon

Originally posted by: 123fiza1

interesting ...update soon...

thnks for commenting fizaEdited by Sakshiram - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: name2saakshi

thnks for commenting dear

Originally posted by: lpsakshi

hai very nice nd lovely starting but what about the night waiting for next one👏👏👏

thnks for commenting dear i wil continue soon

Originally posted by: peeyara

hey advitha... good start doesnt look like that r writing for first tym😛

jab aap itna accha likhte ho y didnt u started writing before😕

continue soon and thank u for pm😊

thnks for liking dear and really i dont no how this s but i tried to write it..but i cant do keep up like you dear...thnks for commenting

Originally posted by: Mini1991

Nice..

thnks for commenting alya

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

superb updt dear
its ur own but u have written it like a experienced wrriter
so cutely written
waiting for suspense to unfold
thanks for pm
cont soon

thnks for commenting sangeeta,i m really happy tht nice writers like u people comment ...i wil soon continue dearEdited by Sakshiram - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

superb updt dear
its ur own but u have written it like a experienced wrriter
so cutely written
waiting for suspense to unfold
thanks for pm
cont soon

suspense wil be unfolded in nxt partsEdited by Sakshiram - 10 years ago