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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Superb update
How sweet NK being the loving big bro figure teasing his little sis about her love her crush . His words r so true falling in love has no time limit it can happen first sight or over time.
Their walk together was beautifully written
Loved how u described khushi holding the wee boys hand & Arnavs arm made me think of a happy family walking together
Got goosebumps when Arnav told her
nothing just watching you make the impossible possible ...
Being more beautiful in my eyes than you already are
Khushis right he is bold but that's part of his charm for her
Loved how Arnav became frustrated when his friends interrupted n took him away from her
Wonder what his father wanted
Looking forward to next update
Thanks for pm plz keep em comin n continue soon

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Great update! Aww they are both smitten by eachother!

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deeptha93

@deeptha93

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

jus now read the story :) loving this mysterious arnav a lot!

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

Okay, so I don't know if Arnav not seeing NK and Khushi together that eve was a good thing or a bad thing 😆

But what I loved was that NK is just so sorted out. He makes Khushi realize her feelings and nullifies her apprehensions about the pace of the relationship. He is definitely a very good friend.

Hmmm, Adhira is trying her best eh? Well atleast Kanan is there to handle things should they go out of line.

LOVED HER OUTFIT!

Sigh, so it is finally time when Khushi's thoughts get naughty! That was needed dear, I am just waiting for the intense love that you promised this would be when you wrote The Thief's Series. Cannot wait for that!

Ooohhh major eye candy alert! I might have melted into a puddle if I had been in her place. So madame has a feeling that he has been waiting for long and I so hope that it's true. 😳

Just imagining those two walking together makes it a perfect picture! They complement each other damn perfectly and the way you picturized that whole scene with the kids crossing just brought this out even more..

Finally, he speaks! Don't get me wrong I love the intense thing going on, but it just eats at me that we haven't gotten any real "rabba ve" moment yet... pouts

Awww, he drops her off every day! The little acts of love...

OMG am so glad you will update every mon/tue!

thanks for the PM dear. 😊

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suji5

@suji5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

Is Adhira doesn't like Arnav?

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Ravneet (RKV)

@Mendesarmy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

i luv your story i stopped reading stories on If till i found out you started this ff so I started reading arhi ff thanks to you and ur ff i got my interest in arhi back

<3 Ravneet btw does this story only have 7 chapter ? :O

Edited by arhi6 - 11 years ago

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: arhi6
i luv your story i stopped reading stories on If till i found out you started this ff so I started reading arhi ff thanks to you and ur ff i got my interest in arhi back
<3 Ravneet btw does this story only have 7 chapter ? :O

no lol theres about 60 but the first 7 chapters are on this first thread. i'll be opening another soon. 😳

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JCJS

@JCJS

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

Just read all the chappy in a go really loved it. Nice interesting concept. Arnav is really a charismatic character. Khushi so cute sweet and innocent. Nana wow really like a good buddy. Hmm loved Nk and khushi bond. So love in air. Excited for the next update. Pls do pm me if ur comfortable. I wish to read more of it.

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: JCJS
Just read all the chappy in a go really loved it. Nice interesting concept. Arnav is really a charismatic character. Khushi so cute sweet and innocent. Nana wow really like a good buddy. Hmm loved Nk and khushi bond. So love in air. Excited for the next update. Pls do pm me if ur comfortable. I wish to read more of it.

Thanks alot for your super sweet comment😳

If your a silent reader please just bookmark the thread to follow it. no problem.

And if your a bubbly reader ( I'm making up this new term for those who read, like and comment,lol. About time!😆) then I would be totally honoured to pm you!😃 but to do that you need to buddy me and wala! All done. 😆😳

xxx

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vinothini

@glv_15

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#490

hi read all ur updates in one go...
wonderful n interesting story line...kushi as librarian n arnav as soldier.
loved arnav s approach to kushi for coffee .n all d time...
loved it

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