Rishbala SS: Marriage Trilogy 1: The Last Minute Groom [Complete Pg15] - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice update, waiting eagerly for the next update, pls update soon, fantastic story👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update...
Loved caring RK...
plz will u turn it in to SS of more parts than just trilogy 😊

Edited by madhu21.k - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: pantil

Awesome part.waiting for next.update soon


thank you so much... will be updating it in a bit.

Originally posted by: aDarkAngel

Un Res😛

Yippee!! Am 2nd again 🥳.congratulations😊. Haha it's become new 1st😉!!! LOL
OMG !! Newly weds... Ahem ahem What a way to wake up ☺️ !! Sigh if only everything was right between the couple, it would have been so romantic😉!! yes... very romantic it wud have been☺️ Aren't they cute...she initially decides against whatever he tells only to end up doing exactly how he tells 😆. yeah😆😆😆 he has tht commanding power and underneath all tht outrage she is still an indian girl brought up with strict believes in marriage vows.
And Rishabh ah I love this Rishabh ..he is so caring, nice , protective and patient guy !! Guess I love all the RK's from your fics Lazy...foodie RK...akshay kumar-RK ... Dark hero- RK .and now this RK he takes away the cake😳..he is a Gem ☺️!! AWWW so glad u love all my versions of RK... i am confused with this RK and akshay-kumar RK, don't know which one i like best😆😆😆Once when she realizes this, Madhu will come running into his arms!! hahahaha she will😉 Please continue soon Lazy..can't tell you how anxious am here to read the next😛 so sweet will update in a bit



Originally posted by: sriramlaxman366

😭😭 iam third ,congrats😊 its ok late hogaya , guess what lazy , mera lappy teek hogaya , main aaram se reply karthi hoon ,wow awesome🥳 nice story dear , thank you so much hunbus 3 parts this will have 4 parts , and i love this story also as always😊 so glad u love this story hun😊



Originally posted by: livelyrose90

aww lovely part thank you😊..rk is gem of person yes, he truly is😊and madhu is so cute..thinking not to do what rk wants but ends up doing the same she is after all an indian girl with indian values😉😆..thnx 4 pm no probs😊



Originally posted by: Janani24

oh oh i hope somehow malik makes her see n understand that rishab is not a cheat poor rk at first he had to marry her n now he also has the blame for the mistake he didn't do but poor madhu too shock after shock n rishab seems a villian to her continue soon


let's see what all changes in the next update😉 will update in a bit😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: rg0782

Read both the parts right now...I must say lazy that u should consider a writing job OMG!!! tht is one of the best compliments i got... thank you so so much hun😊...newys...it was really fabulous thank you😊...pls continue soon will update it in a short bit😊...



Originally posted by: mannu_minnie

hey do u have any common thread for the links for ur all stories..

if not please permit me to stalk u. i wanna read more..


hehehhe so glad u want to read my stories... will make a post in this thread with my Madhubala fics😊

Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Loved how rk is making madhu come in terms with the sudden unexpected relation so glad u are liking RK's treatment of Madhu😊. Hey... I'm on your buddy list but i'm not geting the pm's. Hope you would send them next time you were not in my pm list... will be sending you from now on😊.



Originally posted by: punam2712

RISHAB IS TRYING HARD TO MAKE HER ACCEPT THIS MARRIAGE yes he is trying his best to make her come to terms with it😊

HE FEELS GUILTY AS HIS BROTHER BROKE HER HEART he doesn't feel guilty just outrage at his brother's callous behavior
BUT TILL THE TIME SHE KNOWS HER PARENTS WERE PART OF THE DECEPTION, SHE WILL KEEP BLAMING HIM yes she will😉



Originally posted by: kg15

IT WAS FABULOUS...
LOVED THE ENTIRE UPDATE TO THE CORE..!! thanks hun... so glad u loved the update😊

AWWW... POOR RK.. HE IS TAKEN WRONG EVERYTIME & NOW, HE IS A VILLAIN FOR MADHU yes he is... but then not for long😉.. LOVED THE WAY RK IS TRYING TO SETTLE DOWN THE THINGS now tht they are married, RK wants it to work😊.. AND MADHU... EVERYTIMD SHE DECIDES TO GO AGAINST HIM BUT ENDS UP WITH THE OPPOSITE ONE.. LOL.. yeah... she is an Indian girl with Indian values😉😆 THE ENDING WAS SUPERB.. THE AUTHORITATIVE HUSBAND.. i am a sucker for such things... so you can find it a lot in my fics☺️😆😆

I WAS EXPECTING IT TO NEVER END & YOU KNOW, BEFORE MAKING MY COMMENT, I'VE READ IT 5 TIMES & STILL CRAVING FOR MORE... tht is so sweet of you... so so glad u enjoyed it so much... will update it in a bit

NOW, EAGERLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE..!!



Originally posted by: sanghita0000

WOW!! amazing update...I loved this RK , stubborn & caring...& madhu is so cute...thinks not to do what RK wants & ends up in doing so...😊


thank you sso much hun... so glad u love this version of RK and Madhu😊😊

Originally posted by: Shree.123

Lovely Update 😳

When will Madhu understand that Rishbah did not cheat her? 😔


she will know tht soon😉

Originally posted by: Clara20

nice update dear... thanx hun😊

nw am xcited to see hw Rk handle her...hw he wl make her fall for him...hw madhu wl except him... he is not going to have much difficulty making her fall in love with him as he is kind of awesome😉😆😆😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: lailapnj

Gud one. Eagerly waiting for the next


thanx hun.. will update in a bit😊

Originally posted by: nshahtalati

Wow again mind blowing update. Loved it very much, and hungry for more soon.


thank you so so much hun.. will update in a bit

Originally posted by: anjali0111

poor madhu sultan has already hurt her now she thinks RK cheated her n married her without her consent...she will completely broken when she will come to know that her own father lied to her...hope she will understand rk n will come back with him.


let's see how she reacts once she finds out the truth whether it will make her strong or breaks her😉😆😆

Originally posted by: Shazzie

Super amazing update! Loving the story


thank you so much.. so glad u r loving the story.

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

Aww my poor rishabh bcoz of that idiot
He is being blamed wanna punch sultan but because of Sultan he got the girl too😉
Hope mallik tells madhu truth n she understand rishabh otherwise i ll hate her let's see how she reacts once she finds out the truth
Well nice update thank you😊
Continue soon will update in a bit




thank you hun😃

Originally posted by: sonnal_17

RK is just amaazing...really how he accepted her awesome...and he wants to give them a chance...loved the whole update thank you


so glad u like this RK... thank you so much hun... hope u will continue to like the remaining stories too.

Originally posted by: pooja1210

nice update thank you. I hope malik would clear that rishabh was not at fault , anyway it would be interesting to see how RK handle madhu. let's see what happens next😉 continue soon will update in a bit




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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

lovely update lazy 😊 thanks alot for the pm 😃 please update the next part soon & pm me 😊


thanx hun.. will be updating the next part soon and will pm you😊


thank you😊


thank you so much hun

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Awesome update... Read both the chapters nw n they both are vert good...
Waiting for the nxt one... Update it soon


thank you so much hun.. so glad u liked both the parts, hope you will continue to like the remaining parts too. will update it in a bit

Originally posted by: 4ever4love

I am at a loss for words. oh☺️😳Your version of RK is so amazing! He is smart, understanding and mature. he cares for her and is honest. yes, this RK is a truly good guy😊



I want to shake Madhu and tell her she is so much better off but then you can't blame her for feeling cheated. yeah, but she is going to realize soon that she got the better end of the deal😆😆😆

I am curious what their relationship was like before? How they got along or what they thought of each other. I maybe reading too much into RK's dialogue but I thought there might have been some past feelings for Madhu. no no nothing like tht, before when i was planning the story i thought of ending with RK thanking Sultan for running away as it was their plan as RK was in love with her, but then changed my mind as I wanted this RK to genuine and straight forward guy and not a manipulative one. They just knew each other, met each other once or twice, as it was an arranged marriage, Madhu hadn't met Sultan also all tht much.

Any flashbacks maybe??? no flashbacks hun.. there is not much back story to it😳

Can this SS be longer then a trilogy???? this is just four parts hun.. when i meant trilogy, i meant 3 fanfics and not parts.. i think some of you guys got confused.. sorry for tht😳i have no story for this one to stretch it hun.. sorry



Originally posted by: uma88

Very nice update, waiting eagerly for the next update, pls update soon, fantastic story👏👏


thank you so so much... so glad u liked it so much.. will be updating it in a bit😊

Originally posted by: madhu21.k

Awesome update...thank you so much hun😊
Loved caring RK...so glad u love this RK😊
plz will u turn it in to SS of more parts than just trilogy 😊
this one is only 4 parts hun... i have not much story line to stretch it further... the trilogy is as in 3 fanfics and not 3 parts hun.. sorry ffor confusing u😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
My Madhubala Fanfics

Something Wonderful
That Perfect Someone
In Her Love (One Shot)
Once & Always (Short Story)

Marriage Trilogy (Short Stories)

The Last Minute Groom
Marriage Most Scandalous (Will Start Soon)
Married To A Stranger (Will Start Soon)

Edited by book.worm - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey r u n pkyek forum 2? Nd u write dr ryt? I read both da parts nd dy r awesum! Da way rishu bwaoy s tryng 2 make da situatn easy fr madhu s awesum. Update soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...amazing update. Good RK is trying to make the marriage work. I couldnt help smirking on RK calling madhu as Biwi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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