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smitar

@smitar

IF-Rockerz

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen
Oh that was beautiful! I loved how effectively you used the lines from the show!

Fantabulous!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

Wow, that was so beautiful and amazing, yet very emotional and heart breaking.

Honestly you wrote this one shot exceptionally well and it was a fantastic read from start to finish.

Loved all the dialogues you used they complemented the update perfectly.

Reading the one shot, honestly it made me cry every time Arnav asked Khushi to come back.

At least we got a happy ending as Khushi showed signs of movement at the end.

Loved the one shot, amazing writing.

Thanks for writing this, it was a pleasure to read.

Also i don't think you should be nervous, this was an outstanding piece of writing and you should definitely write more OS.

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 10 years ago

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monsi08

@monsi08

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

awww... it brot tears and smile to me both at the same time 😊
Lovely OS !

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annieK

@annieK

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

My dear girl , if you don't do this , you should. It is exceptionally well written . Liked it immensely and love that it ended on a positive note ...can't see A and K unhappy .

Great job and looking forward to more of the same .

Thanks for the pm.

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

beautiful os

loved it

it was hearbreakingly wonderful

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pree2605

@pree2605

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

amazingg...
i jst loved it...
thnxxx fr pm

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tinsel

@tinsel

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Absolutely Beautifully written OS!👏

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

No words to explain yar... you did damn good job.

The feelings and words are too beautiful 😊👏

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Paridhi

@kparidhi

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

oh my God !!! this was absolutely brilliant..maybe you could write a part 2 ?!?!

all the emotions are soo well put across..i was totally into the story..you should try and write more of os's...thanks lot for the pm and feel blessed and fortunate to have read this !!!

according to me , this is one of the best os on IF.

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reshkn

@reshkn

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

beautifully written...

the lines from the show was like icing on the cake..

loved it.😊😊

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