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CID Written Update: Baby in Danger (August 25, 2013)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Before I start the update, let me tell you that there are certain scenes I'll be skipping over. I watched them once. I can't watch them again. Not even to do an update. 😆 So bear with me. 😉 Anyways on to the update. 😛 And look out for my comments in red. 😉


The episode opens with someone entering an operation theatre and giving a baby an injection.

The scene changes to a lady running down the street when a tampo comes and hits her. The crowd on the street come over yelling for police and ambulance as the tampo speeds off.

Here enter our CID team (Daya sir, Freddy, and Shreya). (Ab CID hit-and-run cases bhi solve karne lag gayi hai? Toh local police kya ghas charne chali gayi?) The 3 bend down and Shreya comes to the conclusion that she is dead and Daya sir tells Freddy to phone an ambulance. Daya sir asks what happened here. A bystander says that he saw the lady running from that side when a tampo came and hit her. Freddy says that maybe the lady got shocked on seeing the tampo, but Daya sir says that at least the tampo driver should have known what to do. The bystander says that the tampo driver came at full speed and left at full speed. Another bystander says that he saw a child with the lady, but the first bystander says that the lady wasn't carrying any child. (Wah! Kya bystanders hain! Ladai karne ko tyar the iss baat pe ke koi bacha tha ya nahi tha. 😆) Freddy says that maybe the lady left the child somewhere. (Freddy ko aise hi rakho. As a detective. Not as a joker!) Daya sir agrees.

The 3 start searching for the baby in the nearby area. Freddy hears the baby crying and on going near a fruit seller's cart finds the baby. Daya sir and Shreya come running over. Daya sir lifts the baby up and holds him and then questions the fruit seller when he gets back. The fruit seller doesn't know anything. Daya sir says we'll take the baby with us and we need to find out who the baby belongs to. (Well as long as the baby was staying with you everything was fine. But then, of course, it needed to be ruined with the introduction of someone else into our lori scene. 😡)

In the bureau, Daya sir tells ACP sir that we haven't found anything about the lady yet, but Dr. Salunkhe did tell them that the baby's DNA and the lady's DNA do not match. (This is told in flashback by the way.) ACP sir thinks this means that the lady had kidnapped the baby. He says that we need to find out if there are any missing reports. Daya sir says that Dr. Salunkhe told them that the lady had blood on her slippers, which was that of the baby's mother. (Again told in flashback.) ACP sir says that this means that the mother has been badly hurt and Freddy says that maybe the lady hurt the mother and stole the baby. (I'm sorry to say, but it could be that the mother is dead and this lady saw this happening and to save the baby ran away with him. Or maybe the lady saw the baby getting kidnapped and being a good friend of the mother's attempted to save the baby. Or it could be...well you get the point. It's not right to jump to conclusions so fast. Not my words. Sherlock Holmes once said this to Dr. Watson. 😉) Daya sir continues saying that even the license plate number wasn't registered.

At some godforsaken place, a goon removes the fake number plate from the tampo and says now no problem boss. Boss yells saying that when our boss phones then we'll have problems as we didn't finish our work.

Freddy brings the lady's clothes and says that there is a tag on this of the laundry. ACP sir says to find the laundry and Daya sir says that he'll take care of the baby in his house.

Skipping this scene...don't mind huh.

Rajat sir and Purvi reach the laundry shop and show their badge. Purvi shows the clothes and the man understands that they are asking who the clothes belong to. Rajat sir says you're smart. The man checks and says that these are Gopi's clothes. An assistant says that Gopi came here and gave them trouble when she was giving the clothes because she wanted them in 2 days when they usually take 5 days. Rajat sir gets the mobile number. (Surprisingly this was probably the best scene from the episode. The above one would have been if I didn't have to skip it because of an eye sore. Anyways, this scene was good because firstly the two were very professional. Secondly, there was no OTT yelling or threatening. And thirdly Vikas sir seemed to ask everything just with the way he looked at the laundry shop owner.)

Back at Daya sir's house, he gets a call from Rajat sir about Gopi. That's when he hears the door from behind and when he comes out with his gun drawn he sees 3 masked men holding guns to Freddy and Shreya's head. They tell him to drop his gun else he'll get shot. Daya sir says "Aapni jaan ki parwa karne wale kayron ko hum aapne CID main bharti nahi kiya karte hain." 👏 (I like the confidence Freddy showed at that line. Proves that he is a real CID officer unlike the other person who had fear written all over her face.) Daya sir pretends to put his gun down and signals to Freddy and Shreya. The 3 goons escape.

Back in the bureau, ACP sir says that why would anyone want to hurt an innocent baby. Shreya says that the goon's name is Shammi, who is a contract killer. Sachin comes in and says that the address Gopi gave was incorrect. Freddy's phone rings a classical tune and the baby stops crying all of a sudden. They think that the baby may have been hearing classical music since birth. ACP sir says to find out at Kavi Nagar. (Aww the baby is so cute.)

Daya sir, Freddy, and Shreya reach Kavi Nagar and talk to a Master there. Daya sir asks the Master if he recognizes the baby, but he doesn't. He does recognize the lady as being from next door. The 3 go next door and a lady recognizes the dead lady as Gopi, an aiya there. She also recognizes the child as Bobby and his mother is Juhi. She lives in LSD Society. (Wah! Bina pooche hi isne sab kuch bata diya. 👏 😆)

Sachin, Nikhil, and Purvi are searching Juhi's flat where Nikhil finds Juhi dead. Sachin sees that she was shot in the neck and stomach and has been dead for a while. Nikhil seems to recognize Juhi when Purvi sees footprints on the windowsill. Sachin feels the footprints match Gopi's slipper. Nikhil sees a photo and thinks it's Juhi's husband, but Sachin corrects him saying he's dead as he saw a photo with a garland on it outside in the hall. (Chalo kum se kum iss baat ko loophole toh nahi banaya inhe logon ne. Every detail counts guys. Every detail counts.) The 3 start searching the house. Purvi finds a portfolio and that's when Nikhil remembers seeing her in a Punjabi movie. Nikhil shows a few things which show her name as Sheetal and also that she was living in an ashram for the past 5 years. Sachin notices that Sheetal's father's name is Dr. Ravikant. (Umm...what was the whole point behind this? Like really?)

ACP sir, Rajat sir, and Purvi reach Dr. Ravikant's house to find newspapers and letters outside the house and they reach the conclusion that the house has been closed for quite some time. Rajat sir and Purvi head into the house to search it, while ACP sir takes a look at the letters. Inside, Rajat sir and Purvi find the house in a mess and Rajat sir says that someone else has already searched the house before them. They still look through everything. Outside ACP sir sees a neighbour and questions him. The neighbour says that Dr. Ravikant is dead. Rajat sir and Purvi also come out and the neighbour leaves. ACP sir looks at that notice and sees that Dr. Ravikant's house is being auctioned. Purvi wonders that the notice came really fast as Dr. Ravikant died just last month. (Just hold a minute! I say wait right there! Okay so as far as I understand Purvi and Rajat sir were in the house right? And the neighbour told ACP sir outside that Dr. Ravikant died. Then how did Purvi find out all of a sudden? BLOOPER!) ACP sir says that there is something in all this because first Dr. Ravikant died, then Sheetal, and now Bobby's life is in danger. ACP sir says we'll need to meet Dr. Ravikant's advocate.

Rajat sir and Purvi reach Dr. Ravikant's advocate's place. He says he made the notice. Rajat sir says that Sheetal is dead as well and they want to know who gets the stuff after Sheetal's death. The advocate says that Bobby would. Rajat sir asks who gave the idea of auctioning. The advocate says Rakesh, Dr. Ravikant's younger brother, did. He continues that Rakesh got a lesser share of their father's property and because of which he was really angry and broke all relationships with Dr. Ravikant. Then on Diwali he made up. Purvi thinks that Rakesh wants to kidnap Bobby. Rajat sir says we'll find out on meeting Rakesh. (Why does every other case need to have the cliched family drama of a rich family with two brothers who are at loggerheads due to property? WHY?!!)

At Dr. Ravikant's lab, Abhijeet sir and Pankaj question Fanish, the funder of the researches in the lab. (Ah chalo finally Abhijeet sir ke bhi darshan ho gaye. Inke toh darshan hi durlab ho gaye the.) Fanish says that we're all shocked with Dr. Ravikant's death. Pankaj says that we think he was murdered. Abhijeet sir asks what was he researching. Fanish says that they don't know. Another assistant says that he was quite scared and kept his research in a locker and he would change the password basically everyday. Abhijeet sir asks to have a look at his cabin as he thinks that the murder happened due to this research.

ACP sir, Rajat sir, and Purvi reach Rakesh's house. After ringing the bell several times, Rajat sir finally opens the door himself and the 3 enter with their guns drawn. They search the house and they find Rakesh having a bath in the washroom. (Err why do we always get these awkward scenes?) A few moments later, ACP sir tells Rajat sir and Purvi to search the house, while Rakesh is asking what he did. Rakesh is shocked when ACP sir says that Dr. Ravikant and Sheetal are dead. ACP sir says he is lying and shows Gopi's photo. But Rakesh doesn't recognize her photo and says that he didn't know do anything. ACP sir says he did everything for the property. Rakesh says that he did want the property, but he didn't kill anyone and neither did he want to kidnap Bobby. ACP sir asks if he has any proof. Rakesh shows a check of 50 lakh rupees that he was going to give to Dr. Ravikant's charity trust. Rajat sir comes downstairs and tells ACP sir something in private.

Abhijeet sir and Pankaj are checking the cabin with Dr. Salunkhe. The assistant finds the locker is empty. Dr. Salunkhe shows burnt papers and the assistant recognizes them as the research papers. Abhijeet sir asks Pankaj if he found anything on the computer and he finds only one file. Dr. Salunkhe recognizes it as a virus test, which Dr. Ravikant was testing on a human. He says that it is polcok virus, which is rare and isn't heard of much. (Polcok? Where does FW come up with these names from?) Pankaj asks who he was testing it on. Dr. Salunkhe all of a sudden understands and says he'll tell them in an hour in the bureau.

In the bureau, ACP sir, Sachin, and Freddy are waiting for Dr. Salunkhe. He comes in and says that there is a tension. Dr. Salunkhe says that there is no virus named polcok. But when he tested the child's blood again he found that he had hexlexia, which is a problem in breathing, which has no cure. But when he tested the blood again he found that hexlexia was reducing and that there were a lot of viruses in the blood stream, one of which is polcok. (Okay I'm totally confused. This virus, that virus, this disease, that disease. Someone please bring me a scientist who can solve this confusion!) ACP sir says that everything happened because of this polcok virus. Sachin says that the sample is only in Bobby now and ACP sir says that his life is in danger.

At Daya sir's house, ACP sir calls Daya sir and tells him about everything. Daya sir and Shreya are taking Bobby to a hospital as he is very sick. On the way there a few goons follow them and one tries to shoot Shreya, but Daya sir saves them. There is a gunfight on the road as Shreya phones one of the senior officers, but her phone drops from her hand. They reach a deserted site where Daya sir realizes that his gun is out of bullets. Just as the goons catch them, Abhijeet sir shoots two of them killing them and Daya sir knocks out the others. Abhijeet sir makes his entry saying "Sher ka shikar karne nikle the gidar log" and demands the remaining goon to speak up. (Ah the duo...friendship truly is awesome. The two are there together to help each other out in problematic situations.)

Fanish gets a slap and Daya sir, Freddy, and Shreya surround him. He says he spent a lot of money on Dr. Ravikant's inventions hoping that his company would prosper. Daya sir says Dr. Ravikant was going to give his formulas to the government though and not to you. Fanish agrees and says that he wouldn't get any money from the government. He tried to explain this to Dr. Ravikant, but he didn't listen. Freddy asks if Bobby's kidnapping plan was his and Fanish agrees. He sent Gopi to kidnap Bobby, but she ran away with Bobby on learning of his plan. Daya sir says that he should be punished in such a way that people's souls get shaken.

At the hospital, Daya sir tells ACP sir says that we should do something for his future. ACP sir agrees and then Rakesh comes in and says that Bobby will now be his child. Daya sir says that if he needs anything ever then let him know. (Aww so sweet Daya sir. That's what sets this team apart from all the rest. Because it's not just about professionalism, but about emotions and making sure everything is okay for everyone.)


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The Whole Credit of Writing this goes to SHERYA...👏
Thank You for Your Classic Comments...😳
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And this is fantastic!! The comments i mean.. No way taking the efforts away to see the unwanted scenes but then again you did a great job! 👍🏼 👏
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Thanks for the written update
Loved all your comments
You should be a rugular updater
Just keep amusing us 😆
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Thanks for the lovely written update shreya di.
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thanx for the update
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Superb WU & 👏⭐️👏

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Like button not working Shreya. Thanks for the WU. 😊
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Thanx Sri for lovely WU 👏
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I love your WU majorly because of  your comments... Love reading it Thank you 😃