Hats off Ujjaini. the beauty of your writing is u keep in mind the tiniest things and highlight it so nicely so that it blends well with the story . Like Shamiyaana, arrangements , girls shopping, saumya with her lehenga for matching jewellary , rishabh n Saumya together selecting Mangalsutra, Neha inquiring about Nutz sasuraal , priya sar pe pallu leke dehleez pe jhukna and ram noticing it and admiring, ram n krishnaji asking saumya's parents if they have anything else in mind finally priya noticing ram when saumya's parents praised him ye sab koi achha pita hi kar sakta hai and priya feeling so much proud of her man and getting convinced he surly will be the best father of the world just fabulous they add so much value to the story n make it beautfiul. U describe so well. i m amazed.
Convo of ram n Priya this time was so touchy assuring each other i m their for u. Taking a step ahead ram telling his Gudiya is with him and priya taking out ram's insecurity or doubt of being a good father. Just beautiful. Ye rishta bahot khaas hai jaha do insaan apne saare insecurities ,care,love,affection,darr jo bhi ho share kar lete hai and find someone at his/her side always n feels strong. Kehte hai na to be loved is a real blessing. Inki yahi openness aur ek dusre ko compliment karne ki saadgi hi iss rishte ko khaas bana deti hai and i love it.👏👏👏
Aur mujhe aise FF padh ne ka muaka mila i feel lucky n proud too.so thanks.
Fantatsic.
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