itna bhi dard na de tu kisi ko (a poem) - Page 2 | Writers Corner: Books, Stories & Poems

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ridzi123
amazing..
wow..m gonna find ur other stuffs to...
want to read them all
they r simply fab👏

😊😊😊 awww dil se big wala thank u ridzi ...

i m so glad that u love my writing so much 😊😊

well i have scrapped u d link of my writing gallery .. u wont have 2 find it .. u can get all my stories n poems in that link ..

thank u so much 4 ur lovely , precious comment 😊...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05
Awesome😛

thank u so much dear 😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: velvetrose
awesome

thank u so much dear 😊

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Shanae

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Posted: 10 years ago

aww... awesome poem didu... i loved it alot... par itna bhi kya khafayi khuda seh? i loved it but koi problem hai toh do share with me! ❤️

love u alot lot lot lot lot lot lot!! muaah!!

and this was my fav line!

Originally posted by: chinudolly
aankho main ashk (aansoo ) bhi na ab bachein hain,
sab sapno ko sang lekar ab aansoo bhi beh gaye hain,

LOVED IT! ❤️

keep writing and shining didu :)

muaahz! 🤗

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Ayesha Hasan

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Posted: 10 years ago

Di!!! How do you write Such emotional stuffs..

Di, You are alright na??

Everything is fine na??

I really loved the poem..

it depicted so much of pain..

And that anger of not being able to get what you want..

Perfectly expressed..

ab yaadein dhundhli padne lagi hain,

vishwas khone laga hai ,

chaahatein gum hone lagi hain ,

chal- chalkar kadam thakne lage hain

aankho main ashk (aansoo ) bhi na ab bachein hain,

sab sapno ko sang lekar ab aansoo bhi beh gaye hain,

palke bhi ro rokar ab sukhne lagi hain

par nayi umeedain sajane se ab ye darne lagi hain

itna bhi dard na de tu kisi ko

These Lines.. I was having tears in my eyes...

Very beautiful, di😭

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Posted: 10 years ago

It was really good!!🤗

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