SWARON OS:My heart will remain his forever

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey guys..dis is my first OS/post..so pls bear wid me..
 
 
 
It was night time.She walked into the room, her feet touching the floor as if it were a bed of lotuses.Moonlight lit her face as she walked into the room making the tears running down her face look like streams of silver.She sat by the window gazing upon the moon which reminded her of the person whom she missed the most...her Swayam.He was the only one for whom she,Sharon Rai Prakash,felt so deeply.She sat thinking about the sweet moments they had shared when they had been together..not hat they wernt now..they were still,emotionally..but physically were separated by a door..door called death.Only Sharon knew how mus0ch she yearned to open that door.But Swayam had made her promise that she wouldn't.She was lost in her thoughts when TING!TING! the clock went.She saw the clock,it was midnight.She walked to the table ,her heart drowning in emotions and wrote ,draining her emotions through the pen-
 
 
 
i remember the days my heart beat for him
the days it shouted his name
i wonder if now it baets at all
or does it think he is just playng a game?
 
 
it searches for him wherever i go
stupid heart, doent accept the fact
the fact that he is miles away from me
that he is just a fragment of my past
 
 
and when i say 'no he is with me'
my heart contradicts me without skipping a beat
says 'he is gone leaving us alone'
giving me pain which no ends meet
 
 
i still yearn for his love
like a bee yearns for a flower
and i can say whatever come may
my heart is his and will remain his forever..
 
Sharon put he pen down her eyes still on the last line.A smile crept on her face as she rememberd what Swayam always used to say "My heart is yours Sharon,and it will always be..so take care of it...I love you Sharon" She held back the tears which were threatning to flow and went to bed, wondering,like evryday, how she had spent another day without him..
 
dats all guys..so how was it?? pls leave ur comments and criticism is always welcome..😊
-nishi

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome os!!!👏
swayam is dead...😭
the poem was really very good...
great work...👏👏
keep it up..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks!!!😊😊
and sorry had to kill swayam..trust me i didnt like it too
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Posted: 10 years ago
a really nice OS
wow !!!
but tumhne swayam ko maar diya 😡
main tumhe maar dungi 😆
lovely 
good one !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
adorable OS 👏
loved it
but swayam ko maar dala 😭😡

.nerfherder thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you so much!!!😊😊
i was dead nervous while posting this..joined the forum just yesterday..
n again sorry for killing Swayam..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey beautiful OS 👏
I had goosebumps when I read the poem...
Great work dear 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful os 👏👏
the poem was really good..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
the poem was damn superb and the os was nice and good it os... 😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
is dis srsly ur first OS?? :o
u r too gud!! its such a beautiful story... luved it to d core
u shud write more often. i luved d way u wrote Sharon's Diary.