RaYa OS - phir le aaya hoon.........updt last part pg 5 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
Just one word- beautiful. Loved the way u mixed past and present sequence.. And liked the concept "love is sacrifying for ur lover " most.
I m the fan of happy ending story so it is the perfect OS of my type..
Thank you..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs




firstly thanks for liking the OS...yes both RaYa couldn't confess their emotion to one another, Priya didn't say because she didn't want to complicate the thing, moreover she was shattered to hear Ram has his fiancee as Meesha, on the other hand when ram wanted to confess his emotion Priya outrightly told him that she consider that night to be her worst dream, hearing this Ram was left dumbfounded though he can see her love in her eyes but he wanted some time to sort out things but Priya's drastic decision left him speechless, he wanted to give time to their relation but he couldn't do that...I hope I have able to answer your doubt...once again thank you for the comment


Ujjaini thx for clearing my doubts. But one thing here i found was , they realized their love afterwards i  mean after spending a night. Bcoz before the party there were no such feelings for each other. The feelings started in Ram the day when he saw her in the party.  but priya realized it at the later stage i feel.
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice story, short and sweet :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
sry 4 late reply wonderful OS loved every bit of it 👏👏 finally Raya married perfect ending thx 4 PMEdited by Dsudipa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3


Ujjaini thx for clearing my doubts. But one thing here i found was , they realized their love afterwards i  mean after spending a night. Bcoz before the party there were no such feelings for each other. The feelings started in Ram the day when he saw her in the party.  but priya realized it at the later stage i feel.



yes both realized afterwards, though Ram liked Priya but he couldn't understand his feeling till before the party but that night he understand but Priya realized later, more precisely after knowing about Meesha, that's the reason she left Ram and her job
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 1
awww awesome start loved Priya is alone child of Sharma's so she had past with Ram at lest i felt with that look Priya gave to Ram... & story is progressing so nicely so moving on to read next to know more abt RaYa's past that what had happen which made RaYa seprated...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 2

awww awesome no doubt u r gud writer u have all the the gud tactics which can make readers amezed with story... ya it was some where kind of filmy but when it was on RaYa i completly enjoyed it... the way story progressed was its USP it goes in one way no loops anywhere & fast forward lovely... do write more waiting for them more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 1
Superb dear
Just mindblowing
Everything is so beautifully writren
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow dear
take a bow
so beautifully written
priya did nt marry becoz she loves ram and vice versa
but they wasted 7yrs by hiding their loves
but at last they became 2 bodies 1 soul
everything is written so beautifully
just loved it
thanks for pm