SS~ MARZ ~ LAST PART/NOTE pg/105/114 sept 26th :) - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mani24

Oh di u never fail to amaze me di aur I LOVE U INSANELY meri jaan se bhi pyari di muahhh di read the update aur di could actually feel geet's pain of what she went thru during the time she had to marry saket out of the helplesness she had then waiting for maan aur thinking tht she was just a s**t or more worse a wh**e who just slept wid someone aur married the other di cried when geet said all these😭 aur di me too wondered ke why maan did not call geet in the 7 years aur for him geet did not change her number either but he did not call😭😲 aur then saket died but left her & her daughter wid earnings to survive for a year aur phir geet had to come to the city for her child's future aur di my most loved scene when khushi was a child aur geet's tears fell on her she kinda wiped her mother's face not letting her cry she is truly maaneet's love di aur for me khushi is maan's replica di coz even maan would never let his geet cry lekin situations forced them to be apart but now they r together hoping to solve there mu aur di also loved geet more ke when khushi asked for her father aur his picture she never wanted to lie to her by showing saket's picture coz for geet too maan is everything for her aur when she could not make khushi understand in the present she fainted di aur maan came to her aur dadi too is wid them aur let khushi know ke the man she saw is her father aur her parents need to sort things out btw them di me dying for the teaser aur also di dying for maan to tell geet ke actually wht happened ke he did not call her aur di me scared ke aapne kaha ke next part will have something worse lekin di I trust u aur will wait for the next part eagerly aur hoping ke by the end of this next part our maaneet together FOREVER aur di mujhe yeh next part abhi ke abhi chahiye bas mere liye to aap doge na di yeh next part abhi 😳



aaj milega 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidhi24

There was a relief to know that there was someone to take care of geet during her pregnancy, saket was a friend indeed, truly a good friend who gave her life or else I just feared what would have happened if people came to know about her out of wedlock pregnancy, but what happened to saket, how did he die?
Finally maan babu ki entry ho hi gayi, lets see what he has to say...
Lovely update dear, thanks...



ull get ur answers dear screw up to the story 🤢😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

I still somewhere feel tat Maan is wrong here

geet though she married but she had to as she could not let society to say bad things abt khushi and saket he did a good job.

though he loved geet but he never ever told her and as a true frd

and now why did dadima come

dont tell me he married sameera for property and than left her in these 7 years and now came back as he remembered abt geet

i would wish tat geet would stay away from him even if she has to face problems in life but Maan ne galati kiya aur sabse badi geet ne



lol di haha next part deying main 😆 ull get ur answers❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

saket tried to save her sanity n married her n after khushi birth he died so khushi didnt know anything abt his father
bt me wondering where maanu was 7 years not small t5ime period
did he never try to call her of find her
cant blv he just lft her n never try to keep a track of her
khushi indeed a samajdar bacha
bt waiting 4 her relation too on his dad
maanu came to geet's place waww
[precapn waitign



updating😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

ok now all the past is over from geet side

now i want to know why maan didn't contact geet for past 7 years
really saket was a true friend love his friendship
saket parents was really sweet that they took care of geet so much
poor geet she faced a lot when there was no one for her first maan left her nd then her friend
but she got all her strength from her khushi
the way dadi was talking to khushi i m having a feeling that she knows that maan is only biological father of khushi



😳 sia
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6



so Maan came with Daadima to sort out misunderstandings between geet and him...

he and Daadi knows that Khushi is his daughter not saket's...

jahan tak story reading and commenting ki baat hai I will surely do it because as it is Maaneet story so I can digest them in any form...but when there is something in the story that can't go with our way of thinking then some disagreement is natural...so I comment accordingly that doesn't mean ki ur story lack something or I don't find it interesting...aisa nahin hai buss jab kuch aisa read karti hoon jo morally incorrect hai so usko express kar deti hoon...

very interesting update...

very eager to know Maan side of story...why he did what he did...




thank you di🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sdlife19

how can u write this yaar..

this teaser where geet says abt khushi.. its brough tears darling.. just waiting for update



coming this from u is so special di very special very special i cant say 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi

i respect saket a lot..
if he was not their..it would have been so difficult for geet to give birth to kushi in this mean world..
but he too left her...u didn't mentioned what happened to saket..i mean why he died...
oh then her in-laws also died...
i can't even imagine geet's pain...😭
i never blame geet for marrying saket...bcoz she was clueless about maan...and she had no time to wait for maan...she can't wait for someone when she doesn't know is he coming or not..that too in her condition
and not to forget Kushi...my heart goes for that little one...
she understood her mother situations..
and never made zidd for anything...

maan is in geet's home...and dadi told to kushi he is ur father...
i have one question...does maan know kushi is his daughter...????😕

and the TEASER...omg dear it is so painful.😭
and the way geet asked him to give her normal kushi...omg...is that possible to maan...???
will see what maan do...

Loved the update...and i really loved the teaser lines...that is geet telling to maan to bring back kushi...👏👏

PS: hey dear i am not pressing like button...(Net is too slow)...




amy thanks for the special comment like doesnt bother me on this story i only want comments😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 4:
PAST IN GREY!!

Geet!! He helplessly yelled as his car knocked onto the tree ... He didn't know as to when he slipped into unconsciousness. Though he left for airport he couldn't leave geet like that and go away, he was coming back to geet and slip the ring into her finger that dadima gave him. Maan wanted to assure geet with the ring and then leave ... probably fate had something else in it.



@hospital,

Doctor: savitri devi ji I cant say until when your grand son will remain in coma ... bas aap himmat mat haariye



Dadima's heart almost stopped listening to the doctor, she could only pray to god for maan's health. She stood by maan for almost seven months until he recovered ... he recovered for whom?? He don't know, the moment he came out of coma he just left to meet geet. But didn't find her anywhere, the house she used to live is rented to someone else.



It took him a week to reach geet finding her whereabouts, with the facts ... she was married!! She was carrying the baby!!



He felt cheated, how could she move on so easily he thought, she was carrying and that meant she was happy with the married life!!



Everything seemed to break inside him, he came back to dadima only to repent loving a woman like her ... How could she move on so easily??



He hurt himself physically for even having touching her physically, the right he had on her she gave it to somebody else and was conceiving!!



She married someone else!! The mere thought made him feel like an idiot, he failed in loving her probably, if his love was true she would have never moved on ... But just seven months dammit he couldn't digest it.



He rested his head in dadima's lap and vented out his feelings, usse mere pyar par yakeen nahi tha dadima ... she married someone, my life just went useless ... Kitna pyar kiya maine geet se, all those moments, all that love she gave it to someone else!!


He couldn't come out of the depression and rejection, but prayed that geet would stay happy with her married life. Maan could not hate her completely, he left to London three months before saket met with accident!! So that's where the separation happened, maan didn't come back to India for seven long years!!



He caressed geet's face coming back to the present with the realization he had a month back!! It was the game of fate and he lost in it, but before he could fix his mistake ... he had redone what he did seven years back!! And when geet came back to senses, she pushed him to move away in frustration, she could never imagine that he will reach her house ... she got worried Kyun pade ho mere peeche?? She asked in anger, geet main bas tumse shaadi karna chahta hoon ... I want you back he simply said holding her by arms, her control snapped, the pain surfaced which she was holding inside since those seven years, nothing could stop her now



Not in these seven years but why do you want to marry me now?? Is it because you slept with me again?? Is it because you want to give widow a life?? Or is it because you want to claim the baby inside me?? She closed her mouth for revealing pregnancy to him, how could she tell it when she decided to bring up the baby on her own?? His heart pounded knowing her pregnancy, he gathered himself from the news and caressed her face,



Geet are you ... haan!! She didn't want to hear him, she felt like a wh**e yet again, but this time she decided to talk, cutting him off geet continued ... Yes Mr. khurana I am pregnant, hamesha yehi toh hota hai ... Your damn lust and I bare the consequences ... Ek baat poochon?? Aisa kyat ha mujhme that you could f**k mother of seven year old daughter?? He closed his eyes when geet grabbed him by collar and asked, stabbing his heart ... his wounds deepend with those raw words,



Apni so called pita se ladke aate the mere saath son eke liye, apni maa ke saath ladke aate the mere saath son eke liye aur main pagal sochti thi jab tumhare pyar mera hai toh tumhara dard bhi mera hi hoga



I always loved you geet, sach keh raha hoon ... please trust me ... he tried to say his side but she was not ready to take any of that,



Chaar saal mujhse pyar ka daawa kiya than a tumne?? Par main toh saath saal tumhara wait karti rahi jabki mujhe pata tha ki tum wapas nahi aaoge, probably the pleasure that you used to get from me atleast that would get you back to me and when you came back you proved it once again how much you wanted me ... nikaal diya na saath saal ki bhadaas, saath saal ki bhook, why maan?? what was my fault that you left me all alone with a life inside me?? Tumne mujhe aise mod per chod diya tha where I only had two options, kill myself which I couldn't do ... mar jaati agar akeli hoti, lekin tumhari di hui nishaani ko kaise maarti?? Or I could marry saket who loved me more than you can ever imagine, he didn't even touch me though he had all the rights, it was true love maan, it was indeed ... Kitna jaante the tum mere baare mein?? Meri maa hai, she stopped ... nahi thi jisne mere liye pata nahi kya kya kiya ... I lost her, I lost my sole support ... you confessed your love to sleep with me and it continued for days, you only know my body not my soul.



Hum doo mein sirf tum the, tumhari feelings thim tumhara dard tha, tumhara pyar ... nahi hawas tha ... aur main?? Main thi hi nahi maan ... How much more would you expect me to fall in my own eyes?? He was speechless, his tongue got tied as he got to know what she had gone through all the while and he know anything,



To tell you the truth it was my mistake I gave myself to a person who was so lost in his agony that he couldn't see me as a person, I was always a toy for you, jab chaha mann bhar liya jab chaha phek diya, kaha the tum itne saal? I expected you to be with me when khushi was born, uske chote chote haath, uski aakhein, uski naak, sab tum jaise tha, uski gussa tum jaisa tha, jab bhi main usko dekhti mujhe tumhari yaad aati thi maan ... she picked up few images of khushi and threw them on maan, she couldn't capture any special moments with her daughter, geet fell on the floor helplessly,



Mujhe meri khushi dedo maan, she is not like every other child ... Uski jaise bachpan bhi nahi hai, she understands my problems beyond the level I can ever imagine, baaki ke bachon jaise kabhi woh zid nahi karti agar usse kuch chahiye hota hai ... she puts my needs beyond her desires, kabhi kabhi lagta hai maine abortion kyun nahi karwa liya ... usse aise dekhne se toh acha tha main usse maar deti ... She has grown up beyond her age, beyond her mind ... agar de sakte ho uska bachpan toh main shaadi karongi tumse!!


what will maan say or do?

Precap: How did they meet after seven years??😕



there are few things yet to be cleared so please leave your comments i am reading them please!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
.does maan know kushi is his daughter...????😕

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