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glmorous_diva

@glmorous_diva

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 10 years ago

wow

i just love it

its amazing nd cute also ...bechara rey 😆

jealous of shivam

7 times kiss...wow

beautiful

loved it

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 10 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Rictusempra

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

AWESOME OS dii...👏👏👏 padh k maza hi aa gya...!! 😉 n thanx for PMing...!!🤗🤗

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

res

unres

arey bap rey !!!

mahu

amazing yaar 👍🏼

tusi cha gaye

wow !!! 😃😃😃

it was super duper awesome

totally amazing

bilkul out of the world types...

loved it so much

it was really worth reading...

thanks for the OS

love you 🤗

do write more and do PM me

thanks for the PM

PS. IM REALLY VERY TRULY SORRY...

CUZ OF ME AB KUCH RUIN HO GAYA.. 😭😭

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Ahem!!! Uhmm!!! *Haath massaging*

Honestly when i read that 'Flash-Back' wala part part , i was like theek hai , pehle bhi parha hua hai 😳...

I was looking forward to read something different ...But then jo us ke baad hua *Detailed review aage hai 😛 😆*

2 people fighting i was 99% sure ese sirf humare Baatcutter-Linecutter he lar sakte hain 😆...

But the Sharon k woh old Rey back wale comment k baad mujhe thora shak hua ...

N then uske baad Swayam k comment k baad sab kuch clear ho gaya 😉...

Iss OS mein jo tu ne woh ek new couple introduce kiya hai na yar , i so love their jodi 😛 🤣...

Aahaan!! humari Diva ka entry toh humesha se he Mast types rahi hai 😎...

Hmm..Sab ne Kriya ko maaf kar dita , great hai g 👍🏼...

Sharon ka dialogue ek dum correct tha ...

'The Baatcutter' pulled in the FE *Prize milna chahiye for guessing yar , inna important banda hai bhai 😆* , obviously Rey he hoga na 😉...

Ahem!! Rey ko acha tareeka aata hai kriya ko convince karne ka , inne pass aake pooche ga toh kese chale ga 😳...

N then baad mein inna Attitude bhi deekhaya *Dosti wali baat pe*...

Uske baad jo hua woh mai kabhi soch bhi nai sakti thi ...

Kriya ki entry toh great honi he thi 😎...

Pehle sab boys k woh comments , then specially Shivam ka compliment , phir sab ne apne apne partners k saath dance kiya but Kriya ne Shivam k saath , iss sab k dooran uska Rey se koi intraction nai hua N end pe she takraing with a waiter n falling into Shivams arms 😲...

Inna sab kuch hone k baad how could Rey control the bursting volcano in his Dil 😛 🤣...

Then woh bhi phoot para Kriya pe ...

N phir Kria ka mu band kar wane keliye he 'Kissed' her ☺️...

N then confession wala scene bhi hua ...

It all happened where it all had first started , at the new Year's Eve 😉 ...

Me so loved it Madho ❤️...

Mreko nai pata tha that u could write so well ,Mast likhti hai re tu 😉

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

U wrote.
Gud grl

sowii for ths late.
Mere inbox me bht se pm the to one by one khtm kr rhe the.
Sowii bura lga ho to.

btw coming to update.
Nyc concept.
Nd u amagingly write whole chappy.
Lovd it.

U hv brilliant writing abilty dear.
Do write more.
I love ur writing style.

Hope to see sm more wrks by u.

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

lamba os ke liye lamba comment!!

it was awesome!

first time i have read your work and its really nice!!

can imagine kriya!!

she might have looked so gorgeous!!!!!!!!

had i been rey i would be full on drooling over her!!

the confession was beautiful and the last kiss!!

man you had me turn red!!

jealous rey!!!!!!

overall fantastic work!!!!

thanks for the pm sunil.

Keep writing!!!

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-Ocean.eyes-

@-Ocean.eyes-

IF-Stunnerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

wowww dear👏

amazing os👏😳😳

loved it😃😊

ending was so awesomeee

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Kya baat hai Honey!! Maast OS likha hai tune toh..
It was super fun to read it.. Kriyansh's Nok-jhok, then Kria's dance wid Shivam(!), Rey's Jealousy, Kria's attitude n finally some Heated Kisses n those 3 words!! I luvd it thoroughly..
Keep writing more n more dear :)Edited by --Shukti-- - 10 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

waah madhu...mast os tha

totally amazing!!

loved it..

yeh rey and kriya bhi na...tom and jerry ki tarah behave karte hai...

finally i love you bol diya..

good going madsss...do write more!

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sanjana

@sanju_arsha

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow. . . .madhu ki pehle os. .
Awesome one

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