😆Mila na Jhatka!😆
Well that year went by quick
But am guessing lot happened in the year
And why not right
Many things happened in Geet and Khushi's life but Maan and Arnav's life remained same!
So all the twists are over after this one
And the lover shall meet in the next one
But will it be that easy I doubt it right
You are right! Have more than 15 chapters before this story ends!
Wait did arnie go
away from here
Please tell me he isn't married to la
Please dont give me nightmares by saying that! Arnav married to La??? Main apni readers itni buri tarah se dil nahi dukha sakti!😉
And if he isn't what happened with that
I really need to be more patient right
Yup!😆
But unfortunately that is one virtue one doesn't have
It must be arnie only no wait it is possible for nk to come
right
After all he too is missing for sure
And you said you will get him too
So it might just be him right
NK will enter after Chapter 64! Not before that!
What the well all that was wrong guess then
Oh well even better right
Its geet who was coming back
Wait where did she go I wonder
Again shall wait and know right
Oh ho so she had gone abroad to finish her studies
Does that mean she shall work in KC soon
Yup! Geet in KC in next chap!😃
Well one hopes so
And finally that love story shall start again
Wonder how maan shall react though if she comes there though
Reaction in next chappy too!😃
Glad she had raizadas though
As her own were just pathetic family man
What they did hope no one else should do to their own child
man
And she is back with a bang for maan
Hope he is ready for this incoming hurricane he wont be but that's
what I want
Maan is not going to give in so easily! He will also put tough fight!
Awww bless bhai behen hot oh aisa
And not geet sibling right
They so care for her am sure she was meant to be their
sisiter only but inke ghar naa paida huyi toh kya hua
Agreed!
Anj chill maar yaar she is back naa
Ab khoob mann kare inhe daatna aur roothe rehena she will be
with you guys obly
Well till she is ready to go to khurana mansion when she
marries maan
😆
And there aint no if about that
So this is why she couldn't come to his birthday huh
Well what could she do about this
Well of course if she too has arrogance how will she be able
to take maan arrogance
That would spell disaster for maneet right
So true!
Ek toh hain hi arrogant ab doosre bhi hongi toh bann gayi
inki love story
Sorry for calling maan arrogant though please don't bash me
too much
Why should I bash you? You are right! Maan is arrogant!
Little much is understandable
Chalo geet is still geet
She cant change yaar warna maan ka kya hoga
Exactly!
Aur waise bhi I love the jhalli geet to anything else any
time right
Right!
And she is back to get her man hahaha that was funny
Okay maybe not right sorry
Some things can never change though and its better that way
Well he is and always shall be infinite times much than her
own brother
He did the duties of a brother better than that creep
Okay don't wanna talk about him and ruin me mood
Warna feel like killing him this time
Am glad she got aki as her brother he is so sweet
understanding and so tolerating of her antics than arnie hai naa
Awww love their bond man
They are the cutest brother and sister duo
Aww! So sweet of you to say that!
So are others but they are the sweetest for sure
Not that am saying others aren't
Yeah why don't I dig this hole more and more there for
myself
😆
Ahhh what would she have done if no aki huh
Well she wouldn't have been able to escape as her veere
thoughts kept her going while in captivity
Agreed! Without Veere's support and thoughts she would not have been able to get away from there!
Don't worry yeh baat aap logon ke palle naa padegi ji
But that's fine too
Geet dpnt worry you have your family here with raizadas
And after marriage the khuranas
They will make you forget the pains given by your biological
family soon
Mami she is your little gilr the one you might not have
given birth to but just as precious or even more right
Guess god just wanted you to meet geet and decided that's your
baby girl
Well said!
How many years did that thingy person jailed for
Hope a long long time
And hope we don't hear of him unless to torture the man
How long he is Jailed???? Hmm... (Thinking right now) (After a while) Dont know and dont care! He is not coming back and thats all I care about!😉
That always does the trick for sure mama bhi naa what to do
with him
But its worked and that's what matters for sure
So she still considers her dad as dad but that don't mean
manohar isn't her dad of sorts
Ahhh geet would have forgotten that bit about her dad naa
like she did maan
Yes!
Even if she didn't remember she was told and that's why she don't
hate him like others right
But of course that don't mean she will forgive him as he too
was part of it but that's for later on
Apne devdas kahan hain I wonder
Both of them not just maan but arnie too
And hope they both happened done something silly in between
this year leap please
Devdas!!!😆The way you asked was really funny! Maan is not there coz this chapter is dedicated to changes in one year and only Geet and Khushi's life changed, so Maan is not in this one. Arnav is there coz he is related to Geet. So had to put him in here.
And here comes one of the devdas
Well geet someone will have to be with kanha
He is just one cant bring him to airport naa
Maybe when you come back from your HM some time later then
he can come
😆 For a while, I was like HM???? (Scratching my head) And then I was like Ohhh!😆
And since that will happen later well then he would be older
naa so anj can bring him too
Hawww had hai arnie
Itni hi shanti inhe pasand hai naa toh khushi ke saath kaise
denge
Aur waise bhi aap ko shaanti suit nahin karti
Naa hi aap ko aur naa hi maan ko kyun
😆
Bade sachai ki baatein karr rahein hain yeh
Uff here they start again don't they
And this is just between the siblings soon enough it will be
for the couples too right
That will be even more fun for sure
Their nok jhoks but for now this is entertainment enough man
This nok-jhok was to establish the interesting relationship between Geet and Arnav. It is also my way of showing how Geet brings out Arnav's emotions. Warna he remains so serious most of the times. But here her antics makes him express his annoyance for her. Their relationship is also important in the future tracks!
Akdu toh yeh hain ask khushi she too would say the same
And even he is right about her but he is gonna be in trouble
for sure
La bhabhi wont be your bhabhi dear
Inhe toh kewal khushi hi thek karr sakti hain
Ahhh that's still going on naa
Dammit neither are happy with the wedding though are they
Chalo at least geet noticed about his sadness regarding his
marriage
Someone did finally right
Gayi bhains paani main ek yeh hi thi jinhone notice kiya aur
who bhi taal gayi baat ko
Ufff ab kaise pata chalega well pata toh chalega hi
Dont worry! Geet itni bhi bewakoof nahi hai! Chapter 65 will have Geet coming to know about Arhi's truth!
As they shall to marry the one they are supposed to marry whom
they were naa
But how that shall be revealed will have to wait and watch
naa
Bless little kanha man
He is annoyed with his maasi huh well don't for too long
Ahhh so guptas didn't come for his birthday either
Dammit the wedding is coming closer
Well dammit only for arhi and la
Baaki payash I am happy for
At least they got their happily ever after
😃
Awww such happy and emotional reunion aint it
Well this was gonna happen naa
After all they had just got her back after such ordeals
But now she is here for a while
More than a while if maan has his way though hehehe
Good thing aki interrupted wanra water works would never
stop that much is for sure
Baad mein bhi kiya jaa sakta hai ji abhi thoda fresh toh hone
dijiye geet ko
Aki I didn't know she didn't know her way to her room
But that's okay itne time baad mile hain and he wants to be
with her more
Exactly! He wants to have more time with his dear Geetto!
What the
What does she mean by dev singh khurana
What did dev do I wonder
Well guess we shall know and soon
Seems he has played his part of sorts
If not direct approach but he has done something good at
least someone did something right
What Dev did you will know by next chapter!
Don't worry wait till your bhabis come
Am sure they shall forget their office and all
Well they better or their brides wont be too happy
😆
Kya Karen aap ki bhi kismet aisis hi hai geet
After all even maan is workaholic
But only she khushi and payal can sort their hubby out yaar
Just had a thought! Geet, Paayal and Khushi after marriage form a club for their pass time. Club's name: WOW! Which means Wives of Workoholics! Coz with their husbands working all the time, kuch toh timepass chaahiye na!😉
Oh ho so no office but still of course they work
How can they stop right
Bechari geet khushi and payal you so feel for them in such
cases
😆
Well this will have to be one of the moves geet
Go anj tell your brother to stop being so workaloic yaar
Khushi ka kya hoga yaar
🤣
And she didn't do anything wrong
At least eta peacefully then work no one will stop you am
sure
Oh teri chuhiya sach mein arnie that's the best you can come
up with
Actually, Arnav can come up with way better taunts but I suck at writing them! Kabhi kisiko aise naamo se bulaaya nahi na!😉
Aur aap ki di inka hi saath degi
Aur inka hi kya apni furutre bhabhiyon ke saath hi hongi so don't
sweat it
Over exaggeration much you guys thand paa lo
She shall have to do same for her hubby naa our geet when
she marries maan
Or is it gonna be different when these three are married
Tab they might chuck their work for their wives but I bet
then their wives wont care
🤣 Just imagined Paayal dressed in sexy saree comes in front of Aakash who is hooked onto his work on his laptop but the moment he notices Paayal he chucks his laptop without caring where it fell and tries to get close to Paayal but at last moment Paayal walks away citing boredom! 🤣 This is what I thought when I read the last line!😆
Tab aayga asli mazaa naa
What no wait what
What happened for these guys man
This is bad real bad
They lost their dad's all three of them
No wonder they couldn't come
Oh man this is bad they are now fatherless
Why did so much tragedy had to happen
Seems it will get worse before it gets better
What to say here man
Feel for the sisters but no one can fight with fate and
destiny naa
But for this to happen makes things even worse and harder
for them
Actually I needed a good reason for the marriage to be delayed by a year plus I wanted Khuranas to get close to Guptas. So killed the fathers!😳
At least she had her brother with her right
Seems khushi had to be strong for them again
She lost not only her biological parents but her bauji and
another father figure
But if she falls weak who will support the rest right
So the khurana brother came to their rescue when needed
As did the rest of raizadas and khuranas of course
Maan you should know what ever may come they wont accept your
offer
But then that wouldn't have stopped him from offering after
all the girls are his sisters naa
And he cares for them deeply
Dammit it seems tragedy pe tragedy ho rahi hai
Which means time for good times to come their way
Exactly!
There is only that much bad luck and sadness going on right
Time for happiness and hope to make them stronger
Wow even though much
has happened am glad that these women were able to pick up the pieces
The way they managed to rise from this shows lots of courage
And that one gotta admire in them right
Am glad they pulled through for now
But time for them to make another move right
Well since two of the daughters are getting married in delhi
they shall have to move bases
The marriage will happen in Lucknow! Naaniji announced it in the past one year but the info will come out in later chapters!
Yes the marriage shall be lavish but of course amma is right
in her case too
What did maan say to khushi
Him and his brother have been great support to the girls
right
Especially khushi who needed him the most
Hmmm waise khushi ki shadi kiske saath hogi who toh pata hai
Parr kaise hogi pata nahin
Parr la ka kya hoga yaar
NK haina!😉
Awww maan offered to pay for his sister's wedding aint that
sweet of him
Well how could he not yaar they are his sisters
Waise one thing I wanna say here before I forget
The relationships formed in this story are beautiful
Not only the ones between the actual siblings but others too
This is truly a family orientated story right
And am glad to be part of this sorry had to say that
Aww! That is so sweet of you to say! And I am glad that you are part of this awesome journey named DFL! Really happy that you were with me when I started it and really want you to be there when I end it! And dont feel sorry for saying such wonderful words! Really boosted my confidence by saying that! I always love shows which show good family bonding and where families are more of a support and less of people filled with hatred towards leads without any reason! So showed the same bonding in my stories too! I have planned two three stories with Maaneet and Arhi combo which I will start after this story ends and there also you will find the same supportive families!😃
Back to maan and his declaration then
Well it wont surprise anyone if amma and bua though
They couldn't accpe it but then our maan too is very
stubborn fella
Well in such cases you gotta be stubborn for sure
Ahhh with man help and support things are going smoothly for
gupta family
But they gotta go back to delhi and start preps for the double
wedding
Wedding will be in Lucknow! But they are going to Dilli coz the house has been empty for a year so they want to put it to use by renting it to someone!
And that's where arhi shall meet too
Ahhh that's gonna be hard but its gotta be done too
So khushi is going to
delhi
Hmmm so arhi meeting sooner than one thought
Who is the tenant I wonder
That I shall wait for hope its someone who can help arhi too
Nahi Nahi! The tenant is of no importance! The only reason I put the house for renting is so that Khushi can come to Dilli and Arnav and she clash!
But that's too much to ask of and I cant do that
Well that person better be a decent person right
Kash inka bhi sharp brain kuch aur use mein kiya jaa sakta
But guess that's early days yet right
Yes you lost your
love and dad to in that year
So much happened but there is still more to come
Pyaar bhi hua tha aur iqraar bhi hone waala tha parr sab
kuch gadbad ho gayi thi
How do you think he is dear same as you but of course wont
say or show it
Wait why will she be meeting arnie sooner than expected
Well that's better naa
All the love birds shall meet and soon
So he didn't see her once when he visited
Why does that not surprise me man
Ohh so they all meet again and then what
Well lets see how that face off shall work
Man this is gonna be thrilling for sure
Even I am excited for writing it! You know when I wrote the leap I was like finally! Coz the scenes till the leap chapter had been planned from last year and it reached now only! Felt so relieved! I was like now I can work on some fresh scenes not the scenes which have been roaming around my head for a whole year! Because till leap I had imagined all the scenes but after leap the plot is ready but each and every dialogue and expression have yet to be planned! Felt so fresh minded when I wrote Chapter 57!
And you my dear take your time next week
I would you rather not stress your hand even if it means no
update next week
That is so sweet of you!
Take care and see you with another thrilling chapter of this
So leap was the next twist pakka all twists are over
No they cant be right after all maneet and arhi wedding too
is kind of twist naa
Err... No! Not all twists are over! There will be another twist in Chapter 64 and 65 an after that there will be twists which will lead to the climax and that is the wedding!
Cheers for pm
Wow it brought so many changes didnt it this one year
And it shall shape the story ahead too right
Too right!
Thanks for the review!
And really eager to read your reaction to my new update!
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