KR OS: Inexorable Separations - Page 3

shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

suprbbb yaar ...!!!
totally loved it...!!!
beautifully written..!!!
u kept d suspense till ends...!!!
apne masters ko pagal bna diya...:p
awsummm...!!!
nd abt song... its nycc..!!
jst read d lyrics..!!!
truelly lovd it...!!
thanxx 4 pm

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

IF-Stunnerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Reserves 😆

unres

1st of all this s for d title👏👏

2nd s for d brilliant write-up👏👏

and this s for d songg👏

woww mindblowing os upi🤗

d ending was unexpected😉

i thot it would b a sad one but no😊

totally loveedd ittt😊

Edited by aishu3003 - 10 years ago

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

it was freaking awesome...

written beautifully...

loved it...

thnx for pm...

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Wonderful! :)

I read the ending and I thought yeh to Ishaqzaade types ho gaya, but how can I forget your Upsana! :p

Loved it. Every inch of it. The wait, the desperation, the passion and of course, the fake encounter.

Amaaa-zzzing! :D

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

'Inexorable Separation' - Awesome title 👍🏼...

When I read the first paragraph , I made a mental note that this OS is going to have a sad ending ...

N that was getting confirmed after each line...

But then u made this unexpectedly Amazing twist 😉...

N mere uss note ki dhagian urda di 😆...

Kria's thoughts And feelings when she entered her enemy's territory , were described beautifully...

The thought of being your lover's death , honsla kese ho insaan mein yeh karne ka ...

Then their Hot and Passionate sa Re-Union 😳...

Kuch ziyada he Passionate N Wild hogaya tha ☺️...

Then again I thought k woh ek doosre ko shoot karein gay..

N buss die , not in their lover's arms But by them 🤔...

But esa nai hua , fortunately 😃...

N at the end both of them ran away , together ...

The song selected was Great , went along with the story very well ..

Mast OS hai'😃...

Me loved it ❤️...

N thanks for the pm 😊

Edited by Roxxy47 - 10 years ago

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shemli

@ShemliArsha

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Omg!!!! Just loved it...this was really something different...
I really loved the way u wrote kr feelings...their love...seperation and the reunion!!! That was freaking hot
And for a second i thought they both died. 😲 but thank god they didnt... 😃
Really grt work as always...thank u so much for giving us a treat to read..
God bless u... 😊

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

it was mind blowinggg😊😊😊 i just wanted to ask a question you like these gangster kind of stuff na😊😊😊 you are too good at it :

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vaishali

@-Vaish-

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

GOPPUUU

the song is so beautiful..

and the OS more beautiful...

That was an amazing write up...

I mean just amazing.. the way you incorporated the challenge was amazing... 😎

i just loved how they met in the outhouse.. loved.. and then sorta dies for their love..

it was so magical and amazing and splendid pupu ki kya bolun..

u r amazing and you know it pupu... :*

I just L-O-U-V the way you write...

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Yogini

@yogini64

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Contract killers...😲

Aisa profession chunte kyun hai log??? 😆

What a hateful situation... she have to kill her lover itself...

But rey ko to kisi bhi situation me bas romance ki hi padi rehti hai...😉

Good for us...😆

But still... he had that belief & he managed to change her mind...😛

Wow ... super plan... bade bade terrorists ko chakma de diya...😎

Too gud...👏

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

sooo goodd...
unique concept..
loved d OS soo muchh..👏👏

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