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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

hey anu
I know m very very no sorry extremely late
really soryy yar
was stuck in exams!!
acha woh sab chod!!
u know ur an awesome writer
tu mujhse toh kai jyada a cha likhti hai!!
update soon
waiting desperately


thanxx alot mahi but u write bettar than me !!! 

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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hi di   hey humairaa
How u? 😊     ossum !!!
Superb, amazing, fantastic       thanxx 
I'm so excited n eager to read first chapter 😃    so am i for the response 
So plz do continue soon      yea sure 
Loved the prologue n cs    thanxx 
Too beautifuul written    aww thank u 
Thanks for the pm 😊

       ur welcome 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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HEY GUYZZ I'LL BE UPDATING IN 1HR OR SO Edited by anu1299 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
hey guyzz i'll be updating soon Edited by anu1299 - 10 years ago
SexySince1999 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
heya guyzz ...
thanxx alot for the likes on prolouge 
so here goes 


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guyzz plzz go to this link and listen this song to be connected with the song 

 SONG- PEE JAON BY FARHAN SAEED

Bhulaaun Kaise, Woh pal jo mere bin hai tu beeta chuka'
a girl with long curvy hairs coming till her hips was standing having her back towards us 
Lautaun Kaise' Jo aansun meri yaad me baha chuka'
a beasutiful pair of eyes of twinklink eyes ...a lone tear escaped from them
Mar me jaaun' Fanna ho jaaun.. Kahin main jaake doob jaaun
a guy enters a burning house...
Nazar milaun' To ye chahun' Ke teri aankon se'
guy goes towards the girl and kisses her on her eyes and suckes her tears 
Pi jaaun' ye gham' (5)
Bujaun kaise' Ye aag tere dil me jo laga chuka'
girl was standing in a house while the surroundings were being burnt into ashes 
Sunaun kaise' Wo siskiyaan jo dil me hun daba chuka..
Mar me jaaun' Fanna ho jaaun.. Kahin main jaake doob jaaun
Nazar milaun' To ye chahun' Ke teri aankon se...
girl was fainted till now and guy was holding her in his arms running here and there 
Pi jaaun' ye gham' (5)
Mitaun kaise' Haathon ki lakeeron par hai jo likha'
suddenly girl opens her eyes ..stands and look here and there
Bataun kaise' Mujko hai to bas tera hin aasra'
she was shocked to see the guy lying ...she tries to hold his hands but she couldn't cause she was dead and it was her soul standing 
Raat kali.. Baat baki' Ashq bhige .. Dil sawali.
she again stands tries to figure out the place before but she couldn't cause everything was still everything was converted into ashes by now...
Man me mere tu hin tu Hai' To aaja saathiya
suddenly she feels a hand on her shoulder and saw the guy standing and smiling at her 
Teri baaten bandagi hai..
Tu hin meri zindagi hai'
she was hell shocked and turned towards the dead body of that guy she again turns towards the guy standing ...he was soul of that guy 
Lamhe tune jo diye hain.. Wohin meri dastaan
Pi jaaun' ye gham' (2)
she touched that guy's cheeks and was able to cause now both of them were the souls 
Paas aa Mere Sanam'.
Bhul jaa saare gham'
they both hugged each other tightly 
Pi jaaun' ye gham' (4)


MANYATA ?? was the only word he was able to speak...
OMG UDAY !!!! a girl said and came running to hug uday she hugged him tighly 
but uday was not able to hug her back he was so freaking shocked to see manyata on his t.v screen (GUYZZ DON'T TAKE THAT SONG THING SERIOUSLY ...THEY WERE NOT UDAY AND MANYATA ...IT WAS JUST A VIDEO BEING SHOWN ON HIS T.V U'LL GET TO KNOW THE WHOLE MATTER SOON)
slowly breaking the hug she asked - kaise hain aap uday ?? i can't believe im seeing u after so much time ?? 
coming back to his senses he composed himself to speak han jai im good par yeh manyata t.v par ???
oh my god now plzzz don't tell me ki u don't know about THE manyata ?? 
he was shocked but to avoid any other question he answered 
ofcourse i know about her !!! 
aur pta kaise nhi hota aapko...akhir aapki best frnd thi na voh !!
best frnds ?? bas yahi tak tha humara rishta !!! kabhi iske age badh hi nhi paya ...aur na main badha paya "best frnds just this was our tag ...we never crossed this tag ...neither i was able to" 
he thought ...
oh ! hello kaha kho gaye ?? asked jai snapping her fingers over his face 
han ?? kuch...kuch nhi bas aise hii...waise ds , uncle brij sab kaha hain ??? 
dad , ds aur mom london gaye hain...
oh! aur vijay banna ??? 
vijay bhai is out for a while he will be back soon ...waise uday why don't u join us in evening we are going for a concert...and also ur back after 2 years ?? 
ehh nhi jai im feeling litle low so i'll take rest ...i'll come tomorrow to meet vijay banna ..bye 
without even waiting for the reply he stormed out of that place 
isse kya ho gaya ?? strange isne toh yeh poocha hi nhi ki hum kiske concerte mein ja rhe hain ?? im sure agar pta hota ki manyata will be singing in concerte he would have joined us for sure ...jai thought 
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uday was in his hotel uday nivas 
and was thinking about the video he saw...
manyata was on t.v it means she succeeded...she did it ...
par uske sath sid(siddhant) was also there ...does that mean they are still together ??? mujhe laga tha ki they must have broked off after that incident but no they are still together ...why god why always me ??? 
i love her so so so much ...main usse itna pyar karta hun lekin chah kar bhi usse nhi bta sakta ...kyu ...kyu voh ek royal nhi hain ?? why did u gave her birth in an ordinary family why not in a royal family ??? 
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in concerte 
omg omg omg im so excited to see manyata sing live ...vijay said hugging jai tighly and destroying her special hairstyle 
offo vijay bhai what are u doing han ??? mujhe kyu pareshan kar rhe ho ??? unnati ko hug karo na ...jai said in super angry tone 
unnati se yad aya ...hain kaha unnati ??? vijay asked
right here behind u both !!! a voice came from behind
thank god unnati tum aa gayi varna yeh vijay bhai mujhe itna pareshan karte ki mere dimag ka dahi (curd) ban jata han nhi toh pta nhi tum inhe kaise handle karti ho ??...jai said 
seriously jai tumhare bhai ko tolerate karna bohot mushkil hain !! lekin yeh kya aaj tum manyata ki tone mein kyu bat kar rhi ho ??asked unnati 
kya karu yar ...manyata ki itni adat ho gayi thi ...kitni jaldi beet gaye voh do sal (2 years) pta hi nhi chala ...said jai with teary eyes 
so true jai bhai ...we use to hate manyata alot lekin she was such a sweet heart ...vijay said keeping his hands on jai's shoulder 
guyzz ab rona mat...aur waise bhi we all be together again..we will go to meet her after her show ...unnati consoled them so that they both don't burst out crying ...
suddenly there was an announcement all turned towards the stage 
hoting was going on and on as if people have got 10 extra sets of throat...
announcement -- 
ARE U GUYZZ EXCITED 
everyone hooted
ARE U GUYZZ EXCITED ??? I CAN'T HEAR BE LOUDER 
this time hooting was more louder 
 SOON MANDY AND SID WILL BE JOINING US...
this time hooting was so loud that people 40kms away can also hear them...

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so guyzz that was it ...
hope u liked it and sorry if i wasted ur time and it was boring 
sorry for any mistakes ...and plzz do hit the like button a huge appeal to silent readers also it won't hurt ur fingers
AND SO SORRY IT WAS A SMALL UPDATE BUT NEXT TIME PAKKA LONG UPDATE but plzz atleast do like 

precap- oh! shit uday is here ...bhag manyata bhag 
          and she was running on excalaters in opposite directions 

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LOADS OF LOVE 
ANMOL AKA ANU 

Edited by anu1299 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
hey
how are you
the update was AWESOME
thanks for such a lovely song
i really loved the lyrics
but who were the couple
whom you explained at the begining
in the fire
and here so manyata is a singer
along with sid
omg poor uday he was her best friend
but i think he loved her
at the end why is she running away from uday
do update asap
hugss
anni
Edited by annabh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
hey hows u anu?...well the prolouge and 1st chapter was so0o0o0o great...i really liked it man, so right now manyata is not a princess but uday loves her...awww the intensity in uday's love is sooo thrilling...hehehehehe, manyata's character is so0o0o different in this story and i loved it. 

plz do continue so0oon and thanks for the p.m...hugs🤗
Edited by mimi.maik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Wow this was awesome bt confusing, i mean in prologue uday said that manyata is princess n nw he says why is she not a royal??? Confused...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
hey!
awesome update dear, loved it
& manyata is singer & with sid
seems to be interesting
u have also written it beautifully dear
please do update soon
btwn thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Hey di
How u? 😊
Wow di, amazing update 👏
Truly loved it ⭐️
Manyata became a singer n so did Sid
Wow di
Aww, poor Uday
If only he said yes to the concert, he would have been able to meet Manyata
Promo sounds interesting 😃
Thanks for the pm 😊
Very eager to read next chapter n plz update soon 😃