Taarey ss :tu juda hoye per teri yaad juda na hoye(note pg 48) - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
really loved it
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Update soon,
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Chapter11

next day in mumbai d3 team was waiting for rey in the rehearsal hal to start there practice
swayam-taani tum rey ko cal kar k dekho wo kab tak pahuchega
taani-bhai me kaise
swayam-kaise kya taani ,tum is dance event ko manage karne wali ho,so its ur responsibility to see that every member should be properly reheased
taani-ok bhai me cal karti hu
in reys house
he was sleeping on his king size bed and he was smiling in his dream(jaroor taani ka sapna dekh raha hoga)suddenly his mobile started ringing and he was getting disturbed.he put the pillow over his head but stil the sound was coming and he was getting annoyed.finally he got up from his bed and started searching 4 his mobile which was lying on the other side of the bed .rey with his one eye closed recieved the cal as he was not fully awake
rey-kon idiot itni subah subah phone kar raha hai
taani-aap ab tak so rahe ho r aapne mujhe idiot kaha literally shouting over it.rey on the other side was very happy to hear his angel's voice early in the morning and a smile automaticaly appeared on his face
rey-oh!i am so sory tum toh junglee billi ho.taani became very annoyed
taani-aapne phir se mujhe jungle billi how dare u rey
rey smirking-agar tumne mujse bahas karne k liye cal kiya hai toh me rakta hu
taani-mujhe koi sauk nhi hai apse behas karne ka,its just that u r very unprofessional
rey-ab tum mujhe professional hona shikhaogi
taani-majbori hai shikhana padega kyuki is event ki sari zimedari mujper hai r ye meri responsibility hai dekhna ki d3 k members ahchi tarah se rehearsed ho final performance tak r agar aap professional hote toh ab tak rehersal hal me hote n ki mujse behas karte
rey-ab tum lecture dena band karogi tabhi toh me rehersal per pahuch paoga and cut the cal.
Taani-khud toh time per nhi pahuche r mujhe blame kar rhe hai angrily she murmurred to herself
swayam-kya hua taani ,kya kaha rey ne
taani-bhai rey bas pahuchne hi wale hai.then the d3 team started doing their warmup soon rey also reached the rehearsal hal looking damm hot as usual.taani looked at him from top to bottom and totally lost herself in his deep chocolaty eyes rey felt taanis stare on him and he also started looking in her deep eyes llhh movement.but soon it was disturbed by sharon's voice
sharon-guys ye event bahut hi bada honewala hai r hume apna bestest performance dena hoga r ye event humare liye r v important ho jata hai kyuki humara bst frnd rey itne saalo baad humare team k sath perform karne wala hai.ab jakar humara d3 team complete hua hai
vicky-in 3 salo me, mene rey ka performance bahut mis kiya hai kyu na aaj rey humare liye ek solo performance de
bharat-wahich toh me v bolne wala tha
simi -mene v tumhara dance bahut mis kiya rey
rinni-hum sab ne tumhe r tumhare dance ko bahut mis kiya
taani accidently spoke-mene toh rey k sare performance r sare interviews dekhe hai and he was superb in it.everybody's eyes got widened and rey was surprised to hear and then everybody started at taani. taani realised what she spoke out then to control the situation she continue i mean to say as a dance event organizer mujhe har kisi ka dance dekhna padta hai .but the team was not satisfied by her answer and they al raises their hand 4 chemistry which was not unnoticed by rey.
Then nil started the music and asked rey to dance.rey started doing his solo performance he was moving his body in every possible way and dancing each bit of the song everybody was mesmerized by his dance move.taanis eyes were fixed on her pc not even blinking at once but it was broken by the sounds of the claps made by the team.sharon was the first one to speak
sharon-awesome performance dude
swayam-kya performance diya
nil-you r the best and in this way everybody congratulated rey on his brilliant performance.but he was waiting 4 taanis appreciation.taani was about to congratulate rey but her phone started ringing. The name flashing was abhi,she was happy to see her bst frnd cal and was smiling with joy which was noticed by swarey and team.taani receiving the cal
taani-itne dino baad mere yaad aae
abhi-mujhe toh roj tere yaad aati hai lekin kya karo kam ki wajah se bahut busy r me janta hu tum v bahut busy ho
taani-tumhare liye me kbhi busy nhi ho sakti.team was getting confused on hearing their conversation .taani was continuously smiling while talking on the phone.this was making rey very angry hir fists was getting tightier as he cannot see taani talking to somebody with so much care and affection.
Taani -ok bye se u 2morrow and cut the cal
swayam-ye abhi kon hai taani(the possesive bhai came out)
taani -bhai abhi mera bst frnd hai.usne har samay mera sath diya jab v mujhe uski jarorat padi wo hamesha mere sath khada raha.he is very sweet bhai r wo kal mumbai aane wala hai aaplog v usse miloge toh pasand karne lagoge.rey is getting irritated by hearing taani praising somebody else.and shouted loudly

rey-bas karo taani ,hum yaha rehersal karne aaye hai tumhari personal life k bare me discus karne nhi
taani -aap itna gussa kyu ho rahe ho mene aisa kya bol diya
rey-humme rehearsal per concentrate karni chahiye na ki in faltu chijo per without looking at taani
taani-me r meri baatein apko faltu lagti hai
rey-haa.
Taani-thik hai toh me yaha se jati hu
then the team rehearsed continuously for 2 hrs and they al r very tired and decided to leave.but rey wanted to rehearse more so he stayed back
now rey was alone in the rehersal hal he wrapped a cloth around his eyes and he was totally blindfolded and the song dil se rey was playing in the background.and he started doing every step very aggressively and ful of anger everytime taani voice was ringing in his ears how she was praising abhi and he was again started doing the steps al the more aggresively.taani who was stil in the academy was about to leave but stop when she heard the music from the rehearsal hal.she went there to find out whether the team is stil practicing but she was shocked to see rey shirtles fully drenched in sweat who is dancing with ful of passion and anger pain was visible on his face.taani herself dont know when she came inside the rehersal hal and rey now started feeling the presence of his love.he was thinking that it was his imagination and he wanted to feel the moment.
He started moving forward to taani step by step he was coming closer to taani while taani was going backward
step by step.at last taani back hit the wal and there was no space left 4 taani to move anymore backward.rey put his both hand on the wal and taani was trap in between his hands rey grinned,leaning more forward.their lips were now just inches away from eachother.rey leaned forward his face getting closer to taani.taani was very nervous by now .rey could feel the heat close to his body.their hearts were racing,breathing became heavier and quicker..taani's heart felt as if it was pounding in her throat making it harder 4 her to breathe.she closed her eyes and was lost in the moment,but soon realised what was about to happen and quickly escaped from under reys hand.rey who was feeling taani presence now feeling her going away from him.he was moving in the direction where taani was going but everytime taani manage to escape from him.now it was getting harder 4 taani to control her emotion.so she quickly ran away from there.rey was no longer feeling her presence.so to find out whether it was his imagination or taani was really present there he open his blindfold and found nobody there

now here i end this chapter hope u like it i tried my best to make u feel the intensity of taarey love. sory if i fails to do this as i am not a good writers like others bas wahi likh deti hu jo mann me aata hai.and many many thanx to al my buddies who commented on my ss.

precap-abhi's entry and rey's reaction
Edited by anuradha5879 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update :)
ty fr the pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
taarey part was superb
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
love their lovey-dovey fights ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
Swayam telling Taani to call Rey was an awesome idea lol I love their phone conversation with Rey getting on Taani nerves and him only smirking lol love their llhh moment and Taani bluring out about seeing all her pc performance and interviews was superb... Hmm jealous Rey is fun Wonderful update, I love Rey dance at the end
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thnx..fr d pm..
Really loved d update...
I cud feel d intensity of their love...
Nd rey angry was too gud...
Precap is damn interesting...
Update soon ...n pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really really really loved the update, dear...
I could feel that intensity of taaRey...
Your update made me miss taarey even more..
their cute lovey dovey fights...
That was so cute...
The jungli billi part,,ahhahahah!!!
And then the Dil se re sequence...
i loved that part a lot...
Really very nice..
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for the scrap...
loved the update...
TaaRey cute nok - jhok...๐Ÿ˜†

update soon...
and pls do let me knw...
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