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Originally posted by: singhshailesh86

amazing os , u described in well mannered , how abhiya love life move from friendship to love feeling & then a beautifull relationship

Thanks 🤗   and I happy you liked the journey. Edited by emptyworld - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nidu-dsena

res bahut lamba hai tym lagega padhne😳
padhliya finally 😳 lovely OS shahi.
Hot legs 🤣 omg tanu abhay ki Gf 🤣 btw so sweet OS finally abhiya together
kash real life me avhay jaisa lover exist hota 😔 *day dreaming*
u showed beautifully how frndship turned into life long relationship ☺️

Thanks 🤗 red - mujhe RK jaisa chahiye real life mien😛 then I will dance uff. I know I will sound crazy after my confession but you know I am crazy young girl.😉 Edited by emptyworld - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Andromeda001

Beautiful OS. Finally Abhiya realized they r made 4 each other. Lovely ending. Do write more on Abhiya.

Thanks 🤗 I happy everyone loved ending because I was scared about how all will like about ending but seems everyone liked it... Ya Abhiya is always made for each other.😛

Originally posted by: samwllms

so sweet os shahi..."hot legs" was the funniest part...its really about only abhiya...no one else allowed..

Thanks 🤗 😆 ya hot legs was kept some fun thing... well said it is only Abhiya.

Originally posted by: Desire6

Cute lovly OS

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

fab os

lvd it

Originally posted by: ..Cute_Angel..

Cute OS😊

  Thanks 🤗

Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal

Lovely  Os dear...LOve it🤗

Thanks 🤗I am happy you loved it.😃

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Very sweet OS Shahi.. different storyline and I loved abhay and Piya's friendship. u work a bit on proofreading and your writing will be PERFECT 👏

thanks for pm... 

   Thanks 🤗 aww its means a lot to me 😳 yes Tanzie I had started taking care about your advice.. sweet to let me know my mistake... most welcome dear.🤗

Originally posted by: maria090

lovey OS  Shahi 😳❤️

Thanks 🤗pata nahin tere comment mien like kyun nahin ho raha hai but I liked your comment dear just loved it my friend.😳❤️

Originally posted by: janvie

OMG Shahi di,This OS was sho Cute and Awesome at the same time.Just Amazing.I really enjoyed and loved it alot.😃🤗 ❤️

Abhay really was a gone case in the beginning.😆Behind T's hot legs.😲 🤣 

Oh My Sid was right,Abhay was born brainless only🤣It was Piya fairy who gave him brains.😉 🤣

But I loved the way Abhay realized Pia's importance in his life.😊

And Then How He made it up to her with his Tharkeypana.😛 😉 🤣

Those kisses and all made me go all ☺️ ☺️ 😆

The Engagement and dinner at Pia's house was the best part.😃Really I was astonished and surprised how Abhay already planned and arranged everything.😲 😆And Sid was also there coz of whom Abhay realized his feelings...That's Great.😃

And You describe their journey from friendship to love so beautifully di...Hats Off..Just Excellent Writing by you like always...👏👏⭐️

Pls keep on Writing more on My Abhiya.😊 😳 😳

P.S.Yet to read the new update of Dark side of love.😳

Thanks a lot dear 🤗 your long comment means a lot to me. Ya I will write on Abhiya if I get an great ideas on them.😳 Hmm I am happy you liked surprise engagement that Abhay planned.. it was added in last minute and loved you liked their journey as well and Sid -Abhay was great re infect must say Siddharth and Vivian was so great... hope to see this two actors together once again in same line of chemistry as dushman-bhai or dost. Edited by emptyworld - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

Shahi, Awesome OS!!!!😊

Originally posted by: luv_rk

Its so lovely shahi...abhay-RK affection is interesting...keep continue ur best work

Thanks a lot dear🤗

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

amazing story...

i wish u write more stories on abhiya...

Thanks a lot dear🤗 and yes I will write more stuff whenever I get good ideas on them.😳

Originally posted by: Sanna14

@shahi.. 🤗
m really sorry..kaan pakad ke sry 😭
y dint u tell me abt dis os..u dedicated it to me nd m commenting sabse late 😭 m sry

Originally posted by: Sanna14

🤗 🤗 🤗 thanx a lot shahi..u dedicated it 2 me 😃
wow!..it wz awesum os 👏
luv ma abhiya 😳abhay nd piya were supercute nd naughty 😆
omg!.hot legs 😆 real wala hamara abhay kitna shareef tha 😆
their cute moments of frndship,den realization of luv nd romantic moments 😳 kiss..ish

luved evry bit of ur os😳
btw 2day i dint cry reading ur work 😆jaise tu rone dhone wali stories perfectly likhti hai waise yeh light hearted bhi amazing thi.
thanx again 🤗

Thanks Sanna🤗 aww  I already told you no need to cry for it... its means a lot that you all read and comment me to encourage. Ya real wala Abhay shareef tha😛😆 but yahan he is naughty😉 and Abhiya both were naughty and cute.. ya hot legs were kept for some lol I am happy you all find it to be lol😆 I am so happy you liked their journey from friendship to realisation and love and romantic moment... aww you went day dreaming in kiss😛😆 Thanks that you loved each bit of it.