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Posted: 10 years ago
#11





this was my First Poem on DUO and long back I posted it...😊

ACP Sir entered and called DUO at his cabin
tell ABHIJEET be there and DAYA move for a mission;

DAYA feel sad but flew to the town
ABHIJEET felt himself totally alone;

mission accomplished but DAYA did not come back
ACP told ABHIJEET that DAYA vanished from the deck;

ABHIJEET turned tensed and left the place
he wanted DAYA back at any cost n chance;

he reached to the spot and completly shocked
when heard echo of BOSS all over rocked;

he turned his back and stunned to see
nothing behind him except his best buddy;

he comes in anger after watching wink n smile
but knew a SWEET HEART behind that gaint mile;

DAYA told him that in mission he much missed ABHI
so making sum fun with him grant permission by ACP;

ABHIJEET put down all his weapons of tension
he never let down DAYA when having sum fun;

its a small chip of DUO lovely vacation
sumtime ACP gives them stress buster without any hesitation...



I wrote this when BHAI participated in JDJ...😳

aankhun mein chamak, hontun pe hansii
humein yaad nahi dekhi ho kahein;

tango say utha, bhangra say lara
hip hop mein dikhaii shaan naii;

sharmayey jab lagay pyara tab
fida us ki ada pe ghayal sabhii;

sub jaanein usay sub maanein usay
superstar DAYA kehlayey wohii...   



ye DOSTI... for DUO...

sub ko lagay dabangg saa
rishta hay ye alug saa
dil ko lagay hay saccha;

mushkil kabhi jo aayey
door aaisi bandh yun jayey
gaanth kholna jo chahyey
phansta isi mein aayey;

aisi hay apni yaari
dushman per paray hay bhaari
gar aanch aayey ek per
jaa'n doosray nay waari;

sub ko lagay dabangg saa
rishta hay ye alug saa
dil ko lagay hay saccha...





ABHI say mera aisa nata hay
sath hamesha wo nibhata hay
dimagh apna buhat chalata hay
punch hr dam mujhay lagata hay;

shooting us ki kamal ki bus hay
intelligency bhi us ki achi hay
per jub naraz mujh say hota hay
dil ko meray chout sii lagti hay;

thora sensitive hay logun DAYA
lekin dil ka buhat hee hay acha
aata hay nazar wo simple saa
sharp lekin hay wo buhat zyada;

us ko rokna buhat hee mushkil hay
marta jub wo kararay thapper tou
jub kabhi roothta hay mujh say wo
lagay jeena buhat hee mushkil hay;

ABHI aur DAYA ki yaari mein
koi bhi darar na aa paayey
hum tou dua karein gay bus yehi
sath rahein ye dono poori zindagi...









a long and smooth curve of MILE
turned into an Adoriable SMILE
when comes on UR lips for a WHILE
Oh Man, UR MILLION DOLLAR SMile...



it always gives all a PLEASURE
exposed a bulk of precious TREASURE
when weaving straight just as a NILE
oh man! UR MILLION DOLLAR SMILE...😳



some feel it just CHERISHABLE
some say its a LORD MIRACLE
when see it in a bunch of PILE
oh man! UR MILLION DOLLAR SMILE...πŸ€—
















aao FCiens, FC ki kahani suno gay...

IF kay Baray Plateform mein
Posts kay Ghany Jungalun mein
GD ja raha tha yunhi Uchalta hua...
Uchalta hua, nahi nahi Urta hua
nahi Kodta hua...

Ufff... chalo aagay bhi tou bolo na...

ek Sohna, Pyara Gudda
mila achanak ek aur Sohnay Pyara Gudday say
pata chala hay Janumun ka Rishta...
Dono nay apna Bachpan ka song Gaaya...

"O chotay kapray waly ray...
thehro zara Ruk jao, laut aao.."πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

jo Jhatky say dekha baray Gudday nay...
Pehchan liya Chotay Guddy ko...
Hath jo Barhaya Chotay Gudday nay
Galy he lagaya Baray Guddy nay
aur khench liya Usy ander Ghar mein...😳

Milay yahan Buht Saaray yaar
rehtay thy sub mil kay Sarkar
kartay thay Pyar Muhabbat ka Parchaar
Choonchein Laratay bhi baar baar...

milay Fan DAYA kay FC pr
Ronaq yun barhayey aa aa kr
kabhi CAP pe Baatein kartay hain
Kabhi yunhi bak bak kartay hain...

pehlay mila main PMD say
hay Golo Molo DAYA jesay
Pagal ho jayey jub dekhay
DAYA ko hr pal TUNN ho kay...

phir aayey bahar PURNI ki
yahan FC ki wo SHAAN bari
PMD say us ki Yaari hay
Dono Fc kay DUO ki gari hay...

phir milti ek M-KAL kahay
thora Kum bolay pr Baat karay
yahan aatii TWINKLE Star bhi
FC ka MAAn hay, PYAR wohi...

ASTO nay jub say Knock kiya
FC kay POsts ko Hot kiya
SHERYA ki aisa aan hay...
Do minute mein Us ko Jana hay...
 

SRINEHADEEPSONI bhi
aayey GOHRMAXXSHRUTIMISHAVIVA bhi
phir aayii yahan pr GUY bhi
DAYA FC ki Cute Pie bhi...

kuch log Puranay yaad aayey
TAANI ka Naam bhi Sath aayey
CHINNUDEBA aur BHAVNA
FC ka Rasta Bhool gayey...


FC ek Dum Ghum Sum sii hui
Na Post huay, sub ho gayey busy
Khmosh rahi DAYA ki Aankhein
ban betha DEVA is Ghum mein...


GD nay thana ye Khud say
phir hath milaya NEEME say
NEEME ka Bheja yun Chala
FC ka Ghora phir Daura...

DAYA ki Khichai yun ki hay
sub Hans hans kay Pagal hain huay
aisay CAPS connected kartay hain
Story khud hee Likhtay hain...

Dono nay koshish aisay ki
FC ki aisay Tracking ki
socha Nahi kabhi hoga kiya
bus karna hay ye jaan liya...

ab haal ye hay kay FC pr
FCiens kay sath hain POpat tak
GUY, Gadha, aur Maccher bhi
DAYA kay Munny Wastar bhi...🀣

Avtaar badaltay rehtay hain
pr baat bus itni thori hay
Hum aaj yahan mil bethy hain
kaun kal kahan ye Adhori hay...

Chand Lamhy Hum jo Miltay hain
Zindagi kay Pal mein Jurtay hain
kabhi Chor gayey jo ek Dujay ko
chamkein kay zehn pr Roshan wo...😳

Filhal ye FC Ghar apna
is ka Chalna hay Din apna
kabhi aayey DAYA jo is mein Khud
na milay usy Dukh ka Lamha...

Fans aatay aur Jaatay he rahein
FC ki chaal Barhatay rahein
FC ki yehi kahani hay
ye FCiens kay Pyar ki Nishani hay...πŸ€—






MASTER SHORT!!! (PRADY, NEEME)

Chapter OneShootout Between DUO
                                  
Chapter Two: To Hang Untill Death
                                  
Chapter Three: New Begining
                                    

(PRADY, VIS DII)














Edited by gadhadada - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12



when I started this journey and opened My Production House (first Branch), I was not thought for a moment that this Road lead Me to the Heights just because of this Plateform, the members from Veterian to Starters, from Viewbie to Newbie, from Active to Static...πŸ€—

So many People come across to Me in this road, some only spend few minutes, some spend years but yes they all are My Strength as I m Nothing but their Dua, Wishes, Respect, Trust, Helping, Applause, Appreciation, Request, Advice, Suggestion, Hope, Supports, Comments, Feedback are the reason which make Me Something...πŸ€—

When I shed a Tear, I feel its turned into a pool just because of My Readers/Viewers/Friends/pals Tears which they shedded with Me...😭
when I laughed, I feel the whole Atmosphere around Me Fills with their Loud laughs too...πŸ˜†
when I Clapped, so many Voices I heard with Me and showing the Hands which turned to Red with Claps...πŸ‘
when I Shattered, so many Hands raise for Dua for Me...
when I lost, so many Help and support which take Me back to this Long Route...😡
when I vanish, the Hugs wraps Me around and givies Me Sooth and stamina to fight against the Life with Zeal...πŸ’”

I did not know but I m trying to Mention names either I have a Great memory loss problem but I want so a Big bunch of Dua, Thanks to VIS DII, BHAVNA DII, DR DII, DEEPIKA, RASHIDA, POOJA DII, AANROMEDA DII, SUCHI DII, CHINNU DII, FEHMI DII, AADRIKA, ANYNYMOUS, YAMANJUSHI, HD, SONALI, NEEME, PURNI DII, MONIKA DII, MITALI DII, TWINKLE, PRETTYWOMAN (Sunitha), LII (Soonali), BH (Prady), MAGZ, ROOPZ, MINI, SHINNY BACCHA (SHRUTI), OMZ, SHIVZ, DEEP (Amandeep), VIVA (Vevah), KD (Shreela), SAADI (Saadrita), DEBA, ACHU, AYESHA ?(Xtrem), AAMNA (Dayaakhtar), MAAM, CARGOPANTS, SUNNY, DEMONSTAR, BHALOO (DUOLover123), SAKSHI (Awesome_Life), BARA GUDDA (Neha), CHOTA GUDDA (Candy), RAAZ, MISHA, LUV_DAYA, CUTIE, BUBBLLY, SHERYA, RAISA, RADHA, MYONEASE, RANJU (Pappais), KHUSHI.GUPTA, TRUPTISHREE, SNEHAL (ACP), LUCKY (Lucky_Aditya), IQRA (DE DE), PINKPEARL, PURPLE PIKA, SHEERO, DEAR, PADMA, PADMA_SS, SONPAPDI, SAKI, SD (Sherdil), GUY (Rosepink), SHAGZ (Sagnika), NSPO, BENTO, GOHR, SHEEN (Maxxx), MANSI, ROSE, BROKENHEART, NISHI, YASHI (Yajushi), POOJA (Invincible), GWEN, ANJU (Anjucathy), NIDHI (Abhijeet.Bhai), CHINTS (Arrogent Chints), ANJI (Anjili_Mahajin), ANJAN_ANJANI, ANGELEYES, ASTO, ARSHa, NAMREEN (Blueberries), CHICKS, KHUSHI, DEVILDEVA, STYLEDEVA, DD (DreamyDeppz), PARI (Fairy), DUOA, GAYTRI, HAL, HUMMI, HASANI, SUBAH, ISHA, JASVEERFAN, JEET, KILLER, LOA (LoverOfADI), LAVENDER CRYSTAL, MAHRUKH, MALLIKA, MANO Billi, MEDHA, NEERKHAN, DAYA_FAN, POLLY (Moner_Radio), NISHA, NEHABD, THA (Namritha), PINKY, OLIVERYSOFTHEART, P.RAVAIDYA, POO (Poorvising), PRACHEEV, MEGHA, PRIYA_ADILOVER, PINKZ (PVKD), RIDZDAYALOVER, SHAANAGAL, SHALINI, SILVER_MART, SRILIKESDAYA, SHRUTI97, SHTUTHI.N, SONI, STRANGERNMOSCOW, SUHANI DII, JYOTI DII,  TANI, JAAR (MUNNA) and so many especially  BHAI and Baray Bhai...πŸ€—

May Almighty ALLAH Kareem always Shower HIS Countless Blessing upon U all and the ppl around U... aameen...😳


   
Edited by gadhadada - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Sorry for posting there... post dekha tab tak post kr diya tha...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³Haste haste, kat jaye raste
Yunhi ye gadi chalte raheπŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³...
Lots of best wishes Dada on new PH from the bottom my heartπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—. May the journey remain unfinished and blessed by the AlmightyπŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Aww my heartiest congratulations to you Bhaijaan..
I was not there with you when you started your journey here but yeah I promise I will stick by your side till the end.. till the very last breath my body will exhale.. InshaAllah.
May Allah will shower His endles mercies upon you and may your life be as peacful as a calm sea.. May success kiss your feet and may you live long.
Allah bless you bhaijaan.. and may you get full reward for whenever you made me laugh.
Keep writing more and more.
Remember there are so many hands to catch you if you fall.. and so many shoulders where you can cry...
Keep smiling as this is life indeed..
With loads of Dua and love ...
Your Nanna munna Bhaloo gudda.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Ah a very hearty congrats on a new production house GD! πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Wooow Congo GD...And i saw the first page and so many many storiesπŸ˜²πŸ˜›...waise sach kahoon toh meri ek kahaani hi ek post se  badhkar nahi hoti🀣yahaan toh list hi itni lambi hai
I must appreciate the fact that your stories are sooo creative and sensible and are versatile ...πŸ€—.keep writing dada and thanks for mentioning my name in tat list above😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
I can proudly claim I've been here since 2011. This PH played a major part to increase my interest and activity here in this forum. I still remember "Reflection" was the first ever story I read and commented on. Your unique style of replying attracted me and I kept on posting.

Those days were truly adorable and I can never forget them. I've never turned back to read those conversations again because I remember everything yet.
Your stories, VMs and poems are simply out of this world and I'm a proud reader. I laughed, cried and smiled reading those. Your stories are extremely emotional because they reflect your pain. And my heart aches because the pain's inside me too.
And, time will make you more dear :)
Aur ye paragraph, aankhen bhar aayi padh ke 😊
May god bless you always !!!





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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Congrax ⭐️ dada⭐️ for the new production house πŸ₯³
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One of the best thread of this forum.πŸ€—   πŸ€—.
May the journey remain unfinished and blessedπŸ€—
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Good luck. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Many congratulation GD πŸ‘

I m here because of your one story 'game over'...that time i could not resist myself to comment...& that's the beginning of my journey in IF as an active member...thanx to GD πŸ€—

Keep writing & making vms πŸ‘πŸΌ
You are truly a good creator πŸ‘