tera mera rishta ek anjana sa updated pg 60, thread 2 link on pg 1

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hey guys...this is devil aka divya... and rocking gal aka AR..
and we are gonna start a new  joint story...!!! 
"Tera Mera Rishta...Ek Anjana Sa?" πŸ˜³
of course the credit for concept goes to "she who must not be named"πŸ˜† as she doesn't want her name to be disclosed...!!!
we'd like to thank her for giving us such a beautiful concept and forcing us to write a story on it...!! thank you girl.. love you...
so aap logo ka sir aur na khate hue.. here we present CS and prologue in the next post...
hope you like our bakwas...πŸ˜†
do tell us whether we should continue or not?

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Character Sketch:-

Sameer Damsingh Rathore he is the exact replica of his father, sharp mind with good looks.though he is near his 30's, he is still very much single...much to annoyance of his only family behind, his maasi. But the fact is he don't want to commit before he finds the person responsible for his parent's death. he is the chief of ETF, one of the successful branch of Mumbai police. he is very strict in work, but cares for his all team member.but it seems like the coconut type person's soft heart is melting in front of some very special, dabbang girl, though he still is not admitting it, but he is slowly falling in love.

Aisha Singh Raizada...the dabbang girl of ETF. She is the only girl in the team, but she is not weak. she can give the men run for their money when it comes to work...she is the best in encounter, loves shooting and killing more than paper works.loves her family deeply, belongs from very influential family...The Raizadas. her big brother, Arnav Singh Raizada, the founder of AR designs, a designer brand.her elder sister, Anjali Jha, happy married to Shyam Jha, a equally successful criminal lawyer.she was influenced by his work, and decided to join police force, and her family supported her in it.she gets what she wants, stubborn, strong, but very sweet in nature.but someone has entered in her life, who complete her, compliment her. she is feeling different now a days...for someone.

Arjun Suryakant Rawte...the hot and tough acp of the team. after his wife's brutal killing, only the reckless and angry Arjun is left behind.he don't care about anyone or anything, not about his life too.Brilliant detection skill...but his life was slowly changing in the presence of a girl, his team mate though he may never admit, but he was falling for her. But god was brutal on him again, she died during a case and the result was he shut himself more from the world.

Abhimanyu Shergil...the youngest DIG in the history of Mumbai police. Age is only 34, but he is the best in department currently. he is the head of witness protection program, and his team is brilliant just like him, reliable and ready to do anything on his order.He is handsome, looks can kill.he believes in giving freedom to every department, don't like to put his nose or use influence in any work, but very few people know this was exception for only one girl, for that girl, he not only secretly influenced one case handled by ETF team, but also planned that girl's fake death, and helped her to escape and living with a new identity in Hydrabad! though team ETF dont know about it, and he would never let it leak. he wont admit, but he can do anything for that one girl, who has won her in their first meeting, but he is unknown to her feelings.

Shreekant Sen... the Tech Expert of ETF... has a great respect for his seniors .. considers them as his  role model... there is no software in the world which he can't use... want any info on anything.. just tell him... the info will be with you in a few minutes.. very efficient... best friends with Aisha and Chottu... misses his masti partner Riya a lot... loves to fight with Liza on every small thing...

Chandrakant Patil aka chottu... the Commando of ETF... jab iska haath padta hai to aadmi uthta nai uth jaata h... has a heart of a child... loves food and leaves no chance to tease Aisha and do masti with Shree and Liza... misses Riya a lot... has a crush on a girl who comes on every Sunday in his neighborhood market...

Liza D Cruz... newest edition to ETF... Forensic Expert... for her handling bodies is like handling a baby... knows Shree from college days... loves to tease him and fight with him...!! best friends with Aisha and Chottu


More people will be introduced as the story progresses...

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PROLOGUE 

Kehte hain, ki humein ek hi zindagi milti hain...kahin log iss ek zindagi mein bohot sari zindagiyan jee lete hain. ye kahani un jaisi ek ladki ki hain.

Usne apne ek hi zindagi mein bohot sari zindagiyan jee hain, par apni marji se nahi, majboori se. uski zindagi mein kabhi bhi thairav (stability) nahi thi...har waqt darr ke saye mein jee rahi thi woh apni zindagi. humesha bhagna...bohot baar bhag chuki hain woh, apne purani zindagi ko chor ke nayi zindagiyan suru ki hain usne...par aur kitni baar? aur kab tak?

What if all is not true as it seems? what if what are you seeing is not true, all is a lie, a pre- planned thing? what if the person is very much alive when you are mourning over his/ her death?

The police department works in a harmony...the criminology is a very complex subject. It takes two to tango, but for crime, it takes many things to solve a case.There is forensic science, there is interrogation, suspects, evidences... and then, there is tough cracking of the case like a jig saw puzzle, and at last, the culprit is there. But things are slightly different when you have a witness in front of you. If there is witness, half the case is solved...but what about court procedure? Its India, here thousands of cases lay in the courts, there are many hearings in a day, but still there is no guarantee if a victim will get justice in his/ her life time. Getting justice is not easy and the justice is not complete till criminal gets punishment from court.

So what about the witnesses in the due process? How can she / he be safe in her / his house when the criminal has still not got punishment? Till what level police can protect the witness and his/ her family?  Will his/ her whole life go in vain for this court procedure? Is it a punishment to help someone?

The answer is no, its not crime to help someone to get justice. But its also important to see the witness's safety, so that others also get the knowledge that he/ she will be very much safe if they help anyone, there is witness protection program for the witnesses...police department will ensure the victim and his/her family's full safety...they will change their  place, they will be given new identity, new job, new life, and only some people will be aware of it, and they all will be very much reliable.this process will be there will the court process is not over...and its very much secure.

 The master mind behind this hugely successful idea was commissioner Pratap Damsingh Rathore. He was the best in his work, loved his job very much. In his living days, there was no criminal who had not feared this Rajput. But one day, when a big gangster had killed a witness in front of him, his whole perception changed. He thought deeply to protect witnesses, and the result is this program. But he has to pay for this too...he and his wife were killed by that very same gangster, as he had knowledge about some witness related to latter's case and he was not opening his mouth. Though he is dead, but 12 yrs later, the Mumbai police's witness protection program is famous and very successful.


So here is the CS and prologue guys...

Do tell us if you liked it or not? and whether we should continue it?

Don't forget to hit the like button and Do comment😳

Thanks

devil and rocking_gal


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res me yayyy love u divi

unres...ab main tum logon ki tareef mein kya kahoon? loved it...especially the CS and prologue...different and mysterious.

ab isse jaldi update krna...cant wait to know what happen next...too much suspense
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Res
me second
love you my devi.

Tu story likh rahi hai

unre

devi ar you are rocks.

Awesome cs and prologue.

Loved it.

This story is very mysterious.

Continue soon.
Eagerly waiting for first partEdited by mastmegha22 - 10 years ago
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i love this concept
cont soonEdited by khemanisarita - 10 years ago
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@riyu and meghu.. luv too guys...!!!
@meghu... surprise haiπŸ˜‰ keep guessing😳
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Waah kya baat hai DEvil stry likh rahi hai Loved it...!!!πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: rocking_gal

Waah kya baat hai DEvil stry likh rahi hai Loved it...!!!πŸ˜†

why are you so shocked...!!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† who blackmailed me into it...!!! 
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Itne sare res.
Divi tu kya story likh rahi hai 😲 πŸ˜†

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OMG! Witness protection programe? 😲 I know what u guys r planning to do. After watching the movie Charli's Angles full thotroll this was the plan in my head to bring her back. I m really very happy u guys r writing a story like this.
The character sketch and prolouge is awesome. I can't wait to read it. Amazing start Divi and Rocking. Btw Who is this lady Voldemort? πŸ˜†
That Stupid like button is not working 😭 Edited by Arieltabi - 10 years ago