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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -SAMAN-

Firstly i give you a warm welcome πŸ€—

Re OS_How intelligibly you putted evocative emotions in words πŸ‘
And the fact that how someone is pinned to his past for aye πŸ˜ƒ
After passing your prime, and being engaged in metier yet one ne'er lays aside those sweet memories. A sip of tea, a quick tittle tattle and some old things can send you on trip to memory lane πŸ˜‰
Brilliant OS πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


thanks πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ And btw ur review is better composed than my entire osπŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: visrom

Nice one Apoorva...very sweet. πŸ˜ƒ

 
And yeah...welcome back. πŸ˜†


Thanks πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: debasree04

Nice OS Apoorva πŸ‘


Thank you πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


A Beautiful Picture with Definite Colors U Portrayed in Our Mind Caves...πŸ‘β­οΈπŸ‘
just bring back that GUZRA HUA ZAMANA...πŸ˜³πŸ€—
A Big Thank You so much...😳😳

 
Ye daulat bhi le lo ye shohrat bhi le lo
Bhale chhin mujhse meri jawani
Magar mujhko lota de bachpan ka sawan
Woh kagaz ki kashti wo barish ka pani

Muhalle ki sabse purani shaan
Woh bhudhiya jise bache kehte the naani
Woh naani ki bato me pariyo ka dera
Woh chehre ki jhuriyo me sadiyo ka khera
Bhulaye nahi bhul sakta hai koi
Bhulaye nahi bhul sakta hai koi
Woh chhoti si raat wo lambi kahani

Kadi dhup me mai ghar se na niklna
Woh chidiya wo bulabul wo titliyo ka ghar
Woh gudiya ki shadi pe ladna jhagdana
Woh jhulo se girna wo girke sambhalna
Woh pipal ke chhalo ke pyare se kante
Woh tuti huyi churiyo ki nishani
Woh kagaz ki kashti wo barish ka pani

Kabhi ret ke unche tiilon pe jana
Gharounde banana banake mitana
Woh masum chahat ki tasvir apani
Woh khawabo khilono ki jagir apani
Na duniya ka gam tha na rishton ke bandhan
Badi khubasurat thi woh zindgani


Thanks Dada and ty for that wonderful ghazal πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Reshu16-

Lovely OS Apoorva!!πŸ˜ƒ

Welcome back chhori!! πŸ€—


Thanks Reshu πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Really nice OS Apoorva! Welcome back! πŸ˜ƒ


Thanks Shreya πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -beena-

Well written Apporva.Nice one. πŸ‘  πŸ‘

Thank you so much.πŸ˜ƒ


Thanks a lot πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
After a long long break , I return with a satireπŸ˜›
         

                       Our Miss Daggers 


Casting long sidewise glances at Prince Charming 
No matter what coal you dump in the fire burning 
The fire in his eyes douses all your ire
The subtle angry smile in his lips , in me hope does inspire
Your chances are over , Lady so doeseth I say 
The end of story that never existed , illusions doth play 
He stands single , ready to be charmed 
To do so stand millions , like bees swarmed 
Yet you chose to belittle my love 
And we stand in battle , flavoured by Cupids Grove 
I throw daggers of fragrant flowers , unlike you 
You who throw daggers of ego and hatred , poison ivy brew 
So there , the end of story , he's not yours , 
For him they'll be many to bedeck with love, and golden showers   

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Posted: 8 years ago
Look who's back.. welcome back Apo da..!! πŸ˜ƒ
Coming to the poem... ahem ahem πŸ˜‰πŸ˜† truth hath been told..lol πŸ˜† Lovely one..πŸ‘
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wonderful!πŸ‘πŸ˜†
After effects of yesterday's epi?πŸ˜‰
Good, very good⭐️