Virman FF : Tere Aane Se...NOTE pg 104 - Page 51

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

haww u dedicated this part to me why nd i participated aur mujhe pata bhi nai chala lolz how unique i am haina :p btw thanx for dedicating it to me. Coming to the update superb dear nd very well written. Aww virat cares for manvi so much nd his restlesness for manvi awesomly describe. Than god manvi is fine bt i think it wouldn't happen everytime haina. Karan is planning something bigger i think or i can say that u are planning something big lol. Waiting for the next part nd thanx for the pm

Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Awesome updt
thnk god virat found her within a time
phewww
waiting fr the next cont soon

n my fvrt line is...sirf 20 rps itna cum...hahaha...sachme amir lagti he :p

Originally posted by: virman.lover

plz update today

Originally posted by: lavanya_sweet

shantiii ...!! kar rahi hu in processs ...i wont break my promishhh ... 😃

Originally posted by: virman.lover

thank u😃..ab jalde update karo😃me waiting egearly😃

Originally posted by: lavanya_sweet

PROMO de du ?? update aaj mushkil lag raha hai ...!! 😕

Virman : Tere Aane Se...

Part 18...

Virat in calm voice n... maanvi irritated voice...😆

Virat and manvi reach 19 # cross...

V : manvi ...get up...ghar nhi jana hai kya?? Yahi sone ka plan toh nhi ??

M : virat don't be so mean ...2 min...aur pls..

V : hey princess get up ...hum last stop par pahunch chuke hai ...aur toh aur driver aur conducter bhi utar gaye hai bus se...!!...maanvi utho ...ghar nhi jana kya??😕

M : viraattt...so mean of u!!!??? iska badla mai jarur lungi!!!😡

V : ok ..jaisey tumhari marzi ...filhaal ghar chalo ... Tumhare ghar pe sab pareshaan ho rahe hongey...😕

M : nhi honge...virat..maine unhe call karke bata diya tha ki mujhe late ho jayega...uske baad hi meri mobile ki battery khatam ho gayi...😡 (still in mood to sleep)

V : ok fyn ...toh ur highness...kya hum aap ke permission se...iss empty bus se utar sakte hai???😕😕😆

M : uhmmhmm...(still closing eyes..)😆

Virat gets up ...and turns to give hand for maanvi ..and sees her sleeping ...

V : arey ye toh phirse so gyi!!!! Maaannnvviii...shakes her up...😕

M : nw her sleep is gone...viraaattt ...dikhta nhi hai kya ki mai so ri hu??😡

V : but princess ye sone ki jagah dikhti hai tumhe??? 😕(questioning in calm voice with lifting his one eye brow)

M : uhhh k fyn chalo...badla jarur lungi mai!!!😡

They get down n start walking ...towards ..choudary nivaas ...it ws little far from the 19 # cross bus stand...

They wer walking...ooopss srry oly virat was walking manvi was toh sleep walking with open eyes with support of virat...!!!🤣

V : manvi bas thodi der aur...bas tumhara ghar aa jayega tab tak thik se chal lo

M : virat shut up ..!! jis din tum mere condition mai honge na tab tumhe pata chalega!!😡

V :ok ok srry princess... he turned to see her...but he saw something else ...the goose bums on her hand ..she ws feeling cold ...😲

V : maanvi tumhe thand lag rahi hai kya?? M: nhi viraat!!! (she said no cz she knew if she wud say a yess thn he wud gv her ..his jacket ...and thn he will start feeling cold...so she didn't want him to suffer in cold)😳

V : ha ..vo dikh raha hai mujhe... 😡(she looks up to him...) tum sach kyu nhi bolti??(confused) He stops ...n removes his jacket and makes her wear it...😳

M: virat tumhe thand lag jayegi... V :isiliye tumne kaha ki tumhe thand nhi lag ri hai ...😡

M :hmm... V :manvi ek baat acche se dimaag mai daal lo ..agar tum thik ho ...toh hi mai thik hu ...warna mai bhi bimaar !! samjhi??😕

M : haa haaa...samaj gyi !! par abhi tumhe bhi thand lag sakti hai ?? 😡

V : haa par... M : (maanvi hugs him syd ways pulling him closer to her ) ab thand dono ko nhi lagey gi!!😳

V : virat smiles... intelligent princess... (kisses her forehead😳😳)

They walk for another five mins...n they reach choudary nivaas... it was 11 : 20 pm (maanvi acting a bit shy -shy, quiet ..n not bold...she is acting like jeevika in the show...😳)

V :yeh lo maanvi tumhari manzil aa gyi... M : hmm...byee... kal office subah kitne baje??

V : ...hmm kal koi khass kam nhi hai so 11.00 am wud be fyn I guess...😛

M : hmm ok ...byee...and she goes near the gate...comes back ...

V :kya hua??😕 M: good night.. ..bolna bhul gayi...

V :good night...(smiles) ... she goes near the gate...comes back ...again...

V : ab kya hua????? 😕 M: jacket dena bhul gyi...(she removes the jacket and gives him)

V : ye tum kal bhi toh de sakti thi... He keeps it in his hand M: koi baat nhi ...she goes near the gate...and turns...and signals him to wait... she runs inside the villa...and cums again to him...

V : rukne kyu bola?? 😕 M: (she shows the car keys...) ye car keys ...car mai jana...transport nhi milegi...and smiles...😊. (to this gesture of maanvi virat was completely overwhelmed..nt like he ws gonna cry n all😆😆 ..but he felt her love for him...)

he took the car keys... srry nt took... maanvi forcibily kept the car keys in his hand...😆

V :iski kya jarurat hai maanvi.. M: jarurat hai ...chup ...kuch nhi sunna mujhe u r taking the keys thts it...!🥱

Virat was really very touched by this ...he ws admiring her...n ws smiling...

M : ...car lo n drive home ...aur ha pahuchte hi call karna mat bhulna...she smiles...and turned to go but virat stops her...by catching her wrist...

M : ab kya hua??? 😕 Virat pulls her wrist...and she dashes on his chest ...he moves his hand to her waist ...and he kisses her forehead...she just looks down ..and blushes...☺️

V : thns...(she looks up to meet his gaze ..with confused look😕) nt fr the keys... for coming in my life...thns to you...😳

She blushes hard now☺️☺️☺️☺️...virat leanes in and kisses her cheek ... he ws about to tell her something...but she not able to bare more... pushes him..n runs off... insyd the villa n closes the villa main door...!!

V : areeyy mai toh bas gud night ...hehhe 😆😆..pagal ladki ... (and a pair of eyes wer watching virat n maanvi all this tym near the choudary nivas...)

He takes the car n leaves...to vadhera mansion...

Here maanvi climbs the stairs to her room as fast as possible...to reach her room...but stops seeing a figure in front of her...

M : (stammering) tumm ...tumm...aa ...abhi tak ...soo...soye nhi??😲😲

D : nhi di..mai kaisey so sakta ho?? Jab meri jawaan di ghar ke bahar ho?? Pata hai kitni tension ho rahi thi mujhe😆😆...(suppressing his laughter) Mai bas sone hi ja raha tha...ye dekhne ke baad ki aap sahi haatho mai hai...😈.(smiles wickedly)

(remember na ...?? tht dabbo is KARAN WAHI ?? forgot awat?? view pg 60 then )

M : daabbee!! Tu ...kehh ..kehna ...kkk ...kya chahata hai??

D : di mai yeh kehna chahata hu ki ..apko...mere hone wale jiju ke saath ... sahi salamat dekhne ke baad ...mai sone hi ja raha tha...😃 (smiles) (yes dabba was the person seeing virat n maanvi😆😆😉)

M : dabbe ...meri jaann...mera bhai...tu toh mera sabse pyara bhai hai na!! Bol na ki tu kisi ko nhi btayega!! Bol na!!!😃😳...(buttering him...)

D: kyu di ?? isme bura hi kya hai ?? virat accha hai !! iss ghar mai sabko pasand hai... toh kyu nhi😕😕

M : accha matlab tu nhi manega??😡 D : nhi ...

M : thik hai phir ...mai bhi Riddhima ke barey mein sab ko bata dungi !!

D: DIII!! Nhi plss..pls... plsss..plss mat batana di mai aapke pair padhta hu..plss..di...😭

M : hmm...thik hai ..bol ..tune kuch dekha??? 😆 D : ha di !! bahut kuch ... (smiles) mera matlab hai nhi di kuch nhi...😕😕

M : gr8 ..!! mai sochungi ..kya karna hai..she pushes him away from her bedroom door..and she enters n locks the door...

D : (from outside) dii pls mat batana...😭 M: tu meko aise pakaye ga toh... mai bata dungi...!!😕😕

D : bye di..good night...in sweet buttering voice😆 ( and he leaves from there...)

MANVI POV

Yaar bach gyi tu maanvi ...thnk god...dabba tha agar koi aur hota na toh ..tera toh murder hi ho jata!! 😆hehehe...anyhow dabba ne dekha kya ...jab mujhe virat ke kiss kia?? Dekha hoga toh??😲😲 ...Toh kya maanvi forehead pe hi toh kiss kia tha !! chalta hai ...waisey bhi mere paas bhi batane ke liye bahut kuch hai 😲😆😆!!!thank god ke mujhe riddhima ka naam yaad aa gya warna toh meri band baj jati😕...!!!Anyhow chill kar maanvi...change kar le aur viraat ke phone ka intezaaar kar...😃😳

She runs to take a shower..changes into her shorts..and loose pink colour tee... and hops into the soft soft..bed of hers...staring her phone...for virats call...she waits for nearly 20 mins...and after tht she gets a msg...

M : msg itni raat ko??😕 Kon kar sakta hai???... Viratt? Virat ne mssg kyu kia?? Maine usey call karne bola tha na...she opens the msg...

" mai ghar pahunch gaya princess...good night ..."

M :abhi iski khabar leti hu...!! 😡😡 She calls virat ...

Virat was all set to sleep... areyyy princess ka call...??!! Picks up the call...

V : princess soyi nhi abhi tak??😲

M : virat tumne mujhe txt kyu kia?? 😡Maine tumhe call karne bola tha na...?😡

V : im srry ..vo mujhe laga ...ki tum so gyi isiliye ..i didn't want to distrb u...😊

M : mai kaisey so sakti thi virat ...?? Ye jane bina ki tum ghar safely pahunche ya nhi ...tumhe meri chinta hai ...par mai tumhari chinta nhi kar sakti kya??😕

V : oh ..toh miss..manvi choudary ..mere liye pareshaan hue ja ri thi...mere call ka intezaar kar ri thi...!!

M : haa aur nhi toh kya?? ...with this she bit her tounge...😛

V :ooohh ...toh tum ...accha chodo ..mai tumhare gaal lal se aur maroon nhi karana chahata😳😆

M : thns for tht...!!!

V :but im sure ..tum ussey se bhi burey shade mai blush kar ri ho..!😆😆

M : hmmm... Ok gud nyt..raat bahut ho chuki hai ...byee..😕

V :ya...bye ...n good night...(both didn't cut the call with this ...maanvi was waitng fr virat to cut d call n virat for maanvi)...hey princess...u ther??😕

M : yep...bolo... V: I LOVE YOU... M : hmmm ..i knw.. V : kya hmm ..?? jawab do !!! M : hmm...😕

V : maanvi jawab do !! she was blushing in all shades..ever possible...☺️

M : hmmm..

V : princesss...im nt gonna cut the call until u reply...

M : (in one breath) I LOVE YOU gud nyt...😆

Cuts the call...

V : areyy...kat bhi diya!!!!😆 yeh ladki mujhe pagal bana degi fr sure...!!

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