Emotional n Touchy.
Aksar chup rehne se baat na karne se bahut kuch bigad jaata hai, par at last destiny will plat its role.nicely described. Its touchy.
Originally posted by: sandhyasn
wow!
beautiful story. loved every bit of it.👏kahi baar mann ki baat bol dene se bahut kuch roka jaa sakta hai.in ur os ekagrah ek achhe dosth ki tarah saamne aaya.loved the last one jahan raya ne ekagrah ko phir se zinda kar diya. bachhe ko ekagrah ka naame dekar.expecting more from u.:- request next time use bigger fonds and small small paras.
Originally posted by: 123fiza1
Awesome
it touched to my hearth...
lovely...
entire part was nicely described...
ekagra is such a nice person...
its the game of destiny which made raya together after all barriers ❤️
Originally posted by: jineejiggs
its very touchy, yes I believe everything is predestined in this world, if something is in your destiny you will get that, how much pain or problem u may go through, nice story, good concept and well written, do continue writing such stuffs👏
Originally posted by: vironikajain
Very emotional nd touchy one..nice story.. 👏
Whatever it is ppl should always talk nd everything will be fine soon rest destiny always plays its own game..
Beautifull nd very well written..
Originally posted by: jeena1993
Thank u Sandhya,yes me pakgaya tha real balh me itne evils dekh dekh ke so thought ki apne story me evils ko jgh hi na dun.Am glad u expect more from me,i did not expect u people will like my OS's this much.
Originally posted by: RghtMndLftBrain
Haven't read your stuff but am wondering about the title. Life has a lot more truths than love between a man and a woman.
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