MegHan OS |Happy Birthday, Mr. Bhatnagar| - Page 4

woww. Lovely OS.. loved it !
beautifully Written.. Keep it up. Excellent Work !

Wow...dis was smthng so so lovely...
I could imagine kkk n as enacting dese in front of my eyes while reading dis...
U r a fantastic writer bidz...i luv reading ur posts...plzz pm me wenever u write coz i really dont want to miss dem...
Plzz update ur FF as well coz i really enjoy reading dem too especially "we complete each other"...

So so beautiful friend. Kitna achha laga padke. I loved the scene Megha hugs Mohan and cudnt stop crying Awww😳

Wow yaar its a amezing thyme u write I am claf on u .               By the way Monu ki fav food Roti & Bhindi . Really ... Bcz its my fav food also.

Ahhh!!! it was sooo awesome reading your OS... and then side mein your stacked avatar was also helping me visualize some scenes😆 I love that stacked avatar😃

Lovely write up! Plz keep adding :) 

Bidzie... 🤗
You are just awesome!...hope you know that!!...this OS had a sense of calm and serenity in it...i felt so peaceful inside my heart after reading this wonderful OS... :-D...Megha's feelings have been described so well :-)...just loved the cake scene and the cheek rubbing...i was like 'Awww' and even when she tried to hide her blush but ultimately submitting herself to his presence and his gaze :-D
I could feel the pain of separation they were facing when he was in jail and she wanted to celebrate with him!   :-( ...and her tears...love the way Mohan rubs her tears away every time!
Happy Birthday Mr. Mohan Bhatnagar!...well the best gift would be hugging his beloved Megha and wipe away all the pain of being away from each other...and he did get that gift!
Just loved this OS! Well i love all your writings! You are super good!

Mohan and Megha:
Kyun ki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho

MegHan forever !! :-)

Lovely OS  beautifully written Bidzie and the way Megha realized that it was his birthday was really sweet.This has to be the best birthday gift.

Bidzie - Loved it. Thanks for giving me a heads up earlier abt this. 😊

Another tragic OS *Shakes head*, well I have just started so not sure about your ending but pullleeezzz enough of tear shedding and tormenting hearts.
When I read title I assumed it to be a fictious situation with Mohan B'day being celebrated but NO its the Jail track *glares*

Coming to OS
Terrific improvement from your early works, Bidz. I can see the story perfectly flowing and technically too very sound vocab and good language structure. I simply loved how Megha greeted him,
I so could see Megha saying to Mohan, yea Megha is bad *remember her past actions and anger roses in* but she can be very romantic infact much more if she put herself to it.

Okay done reading all and I am not really angry or say actually very happy, this was so effing cute, I had this smile playing on my lips throughout MM shot in last, it was so cute and pretty and roflmaoo at Mohan's comment of not being the first time...rofl, innovative conversation I must say 😛. B/w by any chance you happened to know what we would be getting inn today's epi *Tapping fingers on table* wasn't everything to be a coincident is bit unbelieveable here *raises eyebrows*.I'll see you on FB for this 😛 but for now I simply loved the OS, for some reason I could see my work in your OS...Lol and could not help but envy at how you have improved and how I have gone rustic *Bewails*.😛