Swaron OS- Pain of Love

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guyz🤗!! Well I am new to this forum..!! well today is a veryspecial day for me😊because I am posting my first OS today which is dedicated to my angel Kshitija di🥳😳(KS_SWARON) who was born on today..:) happy birthday didu... I hope u all will like it..!! well since its too long I am dividing in into parts😊!! So here is the first part..!!
plz do hit the like button and leave ur precious
comments..and feedback..!!!

so here you go..!!


PART 1-
Swayam and Sharon both were upset they had a fight and now they were away from each other!!! it has been a week now and both were missing each other they used to cry the whole night yearning to be in each other's embrace but their ego never allowed them to apologies and stood as a wall between them!!!

**FLASHBACK..!!**
Sw: Sharon sorry naa.. i was stuck in a very important meeting ..I am sorry We
couldn't celebrate our an anniversary together baby please don't be angry..!!

Sh( almost screaming): Swayam its has become a routine now, first you cancelled our beach party,then our dates and now our anniversary we don't even get any time to spend together How could the stupid meeting of your's be more important for you than me yourself and us.??? I Doubt whether they are meetings or something else..!!!

Sw (in an angry tone): Sharon how could you even think this ??? This is ridiculous even after three whole years our marriage you still don't trust me..?? and those meetings weren't stupid..!! they were really important for our company, but tum nai samjhogi You just live with your stupid doubts and ego and that's the reason why!!
He became silent..!!

Sh: why??? Kya why bolo??bolo swayam...

Sw: why you don't understand me and my love and why you don't deserve me..!!!

Saying this Swayam went to his farmhouse away from her while she cried the whole night in the succeeding nights in the shikhawat mansion remembering their fight her and his exchanging harsh words hoping he would come back but he didn't while he felt guilty of hurting her angel saying those harsh words to her and giving her a lot of pain to her
he didn't have the courage to go back so he stared there in the same condition, same pain and guilt..!!

Sharon's POV

Sharon was sitting on the bed recalling that night ,the most dreadful night for her, when she let her mind and her anger dominate over her heart her love which is only for him.she doubted her love ,her life, her soulmate ,her Swayam tears stated streaming down her face

Sh: how could I?? how could I doubt the person who loves me more than his life ,how
could I doubt who waited for me, even though I humiliated him he loved me..Cared for me he was there with me everytime both in the hours of crises and the most delightful moments of my life, He's right I really don't deserve him,I really don't but I can't live without you swayam I love u a lot, you are my life, my heart beats my strength my weakness everything!! I am sorry swayam I am really sorry!!

Sharon was pondering over the thought that that what can she do to apologies to him amend her mistake to bring her swayam back and suddenly an idea clicked her mind she remembered their first long drive when swayam told her that whenever he's upset he listens to it as it is very soothing to listen to it. It was her only hope the only way she could lessen the burden of guilt she was going through the only way she can communicate her feelings for him it was 7:30 and she still has one and a half hours in hand she quickly searched the net found their contact number she quickly dialed the number of the radiostation narrated her story and sent her voice mail told them their problem and requested them to help her after a while they agreed..!!

She thanked them and waited patiently in the hope that he will forgive her and fell asleep..!!

Swayam 's POV

it was 9:00 pm swayam was sitting on his bed he was looking pale, his face was tear stained his eyes were red as if he had been shedding blood instead of tears .he switched on the FM in the hope that it will soothe him but in vain he was still thinking about Sharon their fight and the pain of hurting her was killing him he knew she wanted him to spend some time with her but due to his hectic schedule and unavoidable meetings he just could not..!!! even if he tried to leave early on their anniversary he couldn't he just couldn't he was lost in his thoughts when the show began swayam was lost in his thoughts when something caught his attention...

(guys the stories told by nilesh misra on fm will be in a very melancholic tone and always are😆 actually they are very soothing to a depressed or upset person so please keep imagine it not be as a cheerful voice but totally melancholic)

ON FM( in a sad tone)-dosto mein hu nilesh misra aaj 93.5 fm pe laya hu yaadon ka idiot box..ek pyaar sapno aur khaniyo ka naza khazana..aaj ki kahani hai ek pyaar ka paigaam. ek ladhki ki zubani jo aaj Sharon ne apne pyaar apne pati ke saath bitaye har ek lamhe ki yaad mein khush hote hue aur unke juda hone ke gum mein kahi h!!!

To be continued...

so guyzz this it it for now😳!!! I am sorry
this is a really short update since I'm keeping really busy with my assignmentsbut I promise to update ASAP😉
I hope u guyz like it there is a lot of things to be unfolded and fun left..!!!
so please be patient...😆😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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RES for kshitija di..:)
n guyzz i'll update the next pat till the evening i promise...😳😆
Edited by anandita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AMAZING start swthrt...i loved it...

The honesty and simplicity in the portrayal of feelings...it takes the write up to another level...

Her guilt ..her pain..his pain..the emptiness...and the master stroke being the connection..the radio program... no doubt she knows him so well...

Loved ur 2nd write up...ur 1st OS as well😳😳😳..U hv a long way to go..and this is a fine was to make ur initial affair with writing😳👏👏

I am really glad that u started writing 😃...

Luv
Ur DI

Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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me first!! consider myself lucky to be the first to be able to comment on a write up like this.

the plot is so good and the simplicity with which you wrote it---jodiyan upar se banke aati hai----aur bane rehte hai---ladte hai jhagarte hai---but only with each other---none else---for a lifetime.

continue anandita---looking forward to it.

love--medha
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hehe..😳 yaa urs didu..😆😆
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Originally posted by: medhasarkar

me first!! consider myself lucky to be the first to be able to comment on a write up like this.


the plot is so good and the simplicity with which you wrote it---jodiyan upar se banke aati hai----aur bane rehte hai---ladte hai jhagarte hai---but only with each other---none else---for a lifetime.

continue anandita---looking forward to it.

love--medha



aww thats so sweet of u medha...!!! the pleasure is all mine...😳😆
thanxx alot for your lovely comments ...
they are really encouraging and meant alot to me...
love u too..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanxx alot guys for your precious comments..!!!😆😆
i am really overwhelmed ...i so happy that u like the Os...
i will update the next part in the evening..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG its awesome di jzt luved it..
isi liye aap inni exited thi haan..!!
coming to the os it was fab emotions to inne ache likhe hain ki poocho mat haye di ma hi dala..!! aur ab jaldi update krna vrna i will fry u up..!!
mein to aapse bht gussa hun bus mein pooch rhi thi bata nhi skti thi jao mein aapse baat nhi krti..!!
lekin aapka os inna acha hai aapko maaf krti hun per monday ko milo batati hun aapko..!!
aur vo nilesh misra hai rajesh nhi vo bhi 92.7 fm pe...!!
bht lamba ho gya na comment srry..!!
last hai pakka.. meri paali paali di congo for ur 1st os..!!

Edited by hima_crazyD3fan - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hima_crazyD3fan

OMG its awesome di jzt luved it..
isi liye aap inni exited thi haan..!!
coming to the os it was fab emotions to inne ache likhe hain ki poocho mat haye di ma hi dala..!! aur ab jaldi update krna vrna i will fry u up..!!
mein to aapse bht gussa hun bus mein pooch rhi thi bata nhi skti thi jao mein aapse baat nhi krti..!!
lekin aapka os inna acha hai aapko maaf krti hun per monday ko milo batati hun aapko..!!
aur vo nilesh misra hai rajesh nhi vo bhi 92.7 fm pe...!!
bht lamba ho gya na comment srry..!!
last hai pakka.. meri paali paali di congo for ur 1st os..!!




heheh...😆😆
i told u it was a surprise ...!!!
and there is alot more in-stored..!!!😈
woh bhi amazing h...!!
jaha tak ki baat h mein naam bhul gayi thi...😛😆
i'll edit it..!!!
love u meri jaan meri besti meri sona..!!
thanxx for the lovely comment...!!!❤️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anandita




heheh...😆😆
i told u it was a surprise ...!!!
and there is alot more in-stored..!!!😈
woh bhi amazing h...!!
jaha tak ki baat h mein naam bhul gayi thi...😛😆
i'll edit it..!!!
love u meri jaan meri besti meri sona..!!
thanxx for the lovely comment...!!!❤️



aww ur welcum dii..!!

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