Swaron OS- Pain of Love- Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os nice start with the art of writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anny yeh tumhara first os hai 😲 chal jhooti lagta nahi as if its ur first attempt..
Sorry mein late ho gayi padne mein 😭

I read both parts together toh ll comment for both together only..
I liked first part how u started their fight n d pain both went through radio idea n d sequence was very well written 👏 👏
It was painfull u showed both their emotions very beautifully.. D love n d pain both were evident 👏
Second part was as u said bold for ur first attempt but nevertheless it was a great one 👏
Nicely put together d radio sequence den how swayam came to her through window really very well written 👏
Great job anandita keep it up 👏 👏
If dis is really ur first one which i actually doubt but den it was nice to read 😊 😊
U have a long way to go keep writing more n more n do pm me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shilpa_SwaRon

Anny yeh tumhara first os hai 😲 chal jhooti lagta nahi as if its ur first attempt..
Sorry mein late ho gayi padne mein 😭

I read both parts together toh ll comment for both together only..
I liked first part how u started their fight n d pain both went through radio idea n d sequence was very well written 👏 👏
It was painfull u showed both their emotions very beautifully.. D love n d pain both were evident 👏
Second part was as u said bold for ur first attempt but nevertheless it was a great one 👏
Nicely put together d radio sequence den how swayam came to her through window really very well written 👏
Great job anandita keep it up 👏 👏
If dis is really ur first one which i actually doubt but den it was nice to read 😊 😊
U have a long way to go keep writing more n more n do pm me 😊




thankuu thankuu so so much..!!!😳😆
love u di..🤗

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