MG SS: Salaam -e- Ishq * || part 5 & 6 @ page 30 16/6/14 ||*

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Posted: 7 years ago


hi all,
kaise hu sab ..??
hopefully fine ..
as usual for all those who don't know me ..

i am Sobia ..one mad writer of this forum ..Tongue
here with another SS ..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
basically p.c kharaab hone ke gham mien mene yeh start kar diya tha on bro's mbl n here the out come of teasing my dear varsha di Tongue...mera first post after coming back is this ...Big smile

enjoy reading n do leave a few words ..Smile

MG SS : 
Salaam -e- Ishq


PART 1



KC at 9 am ..

Two steps coming out of the BMW shinning black shoes ..followed by the guards 'n thr entered the office ..a usual day ..the usual sighs of girls seeing the hottest boss ever ..

N he as ignorant as always stepped in the staff's hall towards his cabin in the end ..

Adi : good morning sir Maan sir '



Maan : adi sinha uncle aaj delhi aane wale hain ..n u know it very well who sirf ek business client nahi mere family friend bhi hain 'he is coming back to india n Indian construction after  10 years so as planned kal hi unke liye welcome hugi '

Adi : ji sir aapne kaha that u hum ne kal ki party ki preparations start kardi hain ..sab hujayega sir ..

Maan : adi I want it all perfect koi galti nai honi chahiye ...kal ki party delhi ki best parties mien se honi chahiye ... koi complaint nhi hu its ur responsibility '

Adi : dn't worry sir mene aur geet ne sab plan kar liya hai ...geet venue par khud jane wali hai sab dekhne ...koi garbar nai hugi ..

Maan : geet ..adi woh larki koi kaam binna galti kiye kar sakti hai ...?? Aur tum ne uss ko involve kiya .. R u out of ur mind .. Kahan hai woh bolao usko abhi ..

Adi : woh sir geet tou party invites shop se collect karne gayi hugi wahan cards ka order de kar phir hi office aayigi usska call aya tha ...

Maan : adi kitni baar ...kitni baar tumhain yeh yaad dilana parega k woh iss company mien ek client advisor hai .. Kyun zarori hai ke tum har kaam uss hi se kahu ... Woh larki chalti phirti disaster hai .. Kab kis musibat ko invite karegi koi nhi janta .. aur tum 'contect her now ..

Adi (trying defend geet n cool his hot headed boss) : umm .. Woh sir I am sorry but jab tak aapki secretary ki post vacant hai geet hi aapki secretary hai tou yeh party tou ... Aur sir last 5 yrs mien jab bhi geet ne koi party organize ki hai woh humesha hit hi rahi hai ... Aap .. Aap tension mat lejeye sab theek huga ...

Maan : wht ever adi ... Call karo usko aur poucho kahan hai ...agle 20 min mujhe card apni tbl par chahiye ...got tht ..

Adi : sir woh ...//

Be4 the conversation could continue they herd a hustle bustle in the whole office n maan came out of his cabin to check followed by adi n thr she was down on the ground along with a peon with so many files fallen ...cutely pouting with a baby face asking sorry ...

Geet : I am so sorrry ramdeen .. Mien sach mien buhat jaldi mien thi aapko dekha hi nahi ...I am really sorry ...mien abhi yeh sab collect karti hoon ..

Ramdeen : nai beta koi baat nai mien karloon ga aap jao ...

Geet : arre aise kaise .. Meri waja se kitna kaam barh gaya aapka ... Mien help karti hoon na ...

Maan stood thr seeing the scene while geet was lost collecting the files ... All the staff stood thr watchi ng her some smiling at her sweet nature some taunting her out of jealousy while some gazing her lustfully ...unaware of her slipping dupatta baring her torso she kept on helping the peon but thr maan ws the moment he noticed few guys gazing her lustfully ...his tempered reached sky high n roared on top of his voice ..



Maan : what the hell is going onn ...koi circus hai ...iss liye pay karta hoon aap sab ko ...back to work every one right now ...n u Ms. Handa ... Agar aaj ka aapka disater phelane ka kota poora hugaya hu tou kal ke party ke invites lekar mere cabin mien aaye ...

The whole staff went back to thr desk leaving a nervous adi n pouting geet murmuring ..



Geet : fir subha subha ghussa hugaye ...geet tu kuch bhi theek se kyun nai kar sakti fir aaj ghussa dila diya ... Abb fir sir poora din mjhe ghusse se dekhte rahenge ...god pata nai kya huga ...babaji mien jitna try karti hoon inko khush karne ki yeh aur ghussa hujate hain ...kya karoon mien ... Itni subha uth kar shop se card liya bhag bhag kar yahan puhanchi aur abb ...chaddo mera tou bad luck bhi kharaab hai ...

In Maan's cabin 

Geet : umm .. Sir woh yeh .. Yeh card hai jis ka order diya hai ...matter bhi mene de diya hai aaj shaam tak print hukar cards ajayenge ...

Maan : kal ki party ka theme n saari preparation hugayi ...??

Geet : gi sir coz its a high class hotel chain we r going to build with Sinhas ..theme will be lavish that will be representing the style both companies have been known for ... N the intro presentation preparation have been taken care off by adi sir n pari ... 

Maan : fine give me the card ..n any meetings for today ..??

Geet : here the card sir ... N aaj apki bas ek meeting hai at 3pm other than that Sinha sir aaj 11 bje ke flight se london se delhi puhanch rahe hain ...so dadi maa ne lunch ke liye aapko ghar bulaya hai ..

Maan (opened the card n read it fuming looked at her making her hell angry) :geet tum ne card proof reading ke liye print karwaya aur isko re check bhi nai kiya ..??

Geet (shivering seeing the fuming angry face) : umm ..woh sir ... Woh mien late ..mien wo ..

Maan : speak up ms. Handa ... Kuansa sili reason hai aapke paas abb ...ache se pata hai yahan sab ko Sinha uncle merger deal ke liye all the way  yahan aaye hain n yeh deal kitna important hai KC k liye n u r taking it all so lightly ...

Geet (teary) : sorry ...sorry sir woh mien ...mien abhi yeh theek karwa doongi ...



Maan : 5 saal geet ... Its been 5 yrs u r working with me aur aaj bhi yehi sili mistake kab ..kab tak tum iss hi tarha galti karti rahugi ... Har rooz apne cabin mien baad mien jata hoon pehle tumhare koi na koi galti mere saamne hoti hai ... Na tumhain apna khayaal hai na tumhare aas paas kya huraha hai uska .. Koi bachi nahi hu tum jo tumhain pata nahi kab kya karna hai aur kab kya nahi ... Kuan kis intension se tumhare aas paas hai tumhain kuch kyun samajh nai ata ... Har baar kyun kisi aur ko tumhain batana parta hai ...kar kya rahi thi bahar tum ...


Geet (sobbing with her face dipped down hiding her. Tears) : I am sorry sir .. Mien tu humesha kushish karti hoon kuch ...kuch galat na hu but ... I am sorry iss baar kuch garbar nai hugi ..I promise ... Kal ki party will be best ...aap aap fiqar mat kareye mien koi galti nai karongi ...

Maan ( saw her state n dipped his face in gilt he knw he went ovr board scolding her but his temper after he saw all those idiots gazing her lustfully all his anger he pured out on her 'unintensional but he can't help it now' seeing her like ths ws defo hurting him thousand time ... For a moment he just wanted to stood up n wipe her tear embracing her but he stopped looking away ) : leave geet just go ...

Geet sniff n wiped her face turning around to go but than stopped n said ..

Geet : woh sir ... 

Maan (snapped) : now what ..

Geet : woh sir woh prem ...aaj uska open house hai ..aapko jana hai wahan ...

Maan shit I forgot ...tum pehle nai yaad dila sakti thi .. Its already 9:30 aur sinha uncel bhi arahe hain damn geet ..



Geet (pouted n asked in a child like way) : mene kya kara abb ... 

Maan (stood up to leave) : ab tak ka time hai ..

Geet : umm 9 till 12

Maan : bye ...

Geet (shook her head looking at hm rushing out) : pheeww inka kuch nai hu sakta mujhe tou samajh nai aata inka ghussa kab aata hai aur kab chala jata hai ... Par inhoon ne mujhe itna ghussa sirf card ke liye tou nai kar sakte ...tou fir ..??? 
aur bahar ...umm bahar tou mien sirf ramdeen ki help kar rahi thi uss mien ya problem hai ...mm uff yeh maan sir ..chaddo waise card mien problem kya hai ...??

Geet (read the card n found the company's name as THURANA) : gosh Thurana group ...( N started laughing n hit her head with the card itself) 



geet tu bilkul pagal hai office puhanchne ki jaldi mien parha bhi nai ke printing wale ne sahi matter type kiya bhi k nai ...jhalli kahin ki ...(Than got bit tensed) lekin abb tu woh baqi cards par bhi yehi matter print kar dega ...stupid geet bhag jaldi warna kal tak saare cards guest tak k
Edited by sobia4maaneet - 6 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH 

Geet Handa



MBA ..a girl of 27 working in KC since last 5 years as a client advisor '

About her nature umm ..
She is naive ..innocent sweet ..smart '

About her beauty '.
Sorry I am short of words 'her beauty is hevenly to say anything
Still she is ignorant to her looks ..

Madly in love with her boss ..the hottest eligible bachelor in town ..
But still fail to understand why he dis-likes her so much ..
But than he is her Boss 'n how can she ..
A mere employee hold any importance in his personal life '!!!


Ek larki thi deewani si
Ek larke pe who marti thi 
Narzien jhuka ke 'Sharma ke ' 
galiyoon se guzrti thi ..
kuch kehna tha shayad usko ..
jaane kis se darti thi '??
Pariyoon se khubsoorat woh ..
Par phir bhi dunya ki bheer mien khoyi si
Mehloon ke raja se dil haar bethi deewani
Abb kaise ekraar kare .. 
Kaise koi daasi apne hi raja se pyaar kare ..??




Maan Singh Khurana



MD KC ..working since last 7 years ..is of 29
People die to meet this un-crowned king of Indian commercial world

But he only lives for the happiness of his fsmily ..

N another reason is ..so that he can meet n be around his mishty 'opss that's the code word he has 'actually he is head over heals in love with his client advisor aka geet '

Don't ask him if it was love at first sight coz from the moment she entered his life all conversation b/w them was just him scolding her 'or her explaning her something or the other regarading work ..

He would never be able to point out exactly what made him fall for this ultimate disaster queen ..may be her beauty ..may be her ease with which she understand the business related things 'or may be her innocence 'or probably the way she gelled up with his family '

God knows but he is never able to express himself ..not from now but from always 'n after loosing his father figure his big bro n bhabi in a plane crash 7 years ago he is in fear 'fear of loosing everyone in his life '.
Ever since his dad n bro left he has become super protective towards his family 'never let anything happen to them 'but with all the responsibities he himself forgot to smile n live '!!

Ankhien khuli hu ya hoon band
Deedar unka hota hai ..
Kya bataoon mien yeh karishma kaise huya
Par abb tu '
Raat kehar peher intezaar subha ka hota hai
Unke ek aur deedar ka hota hai ..!!
Aasmaan par chamakta sitara kahe dunya isse
Par kuan jaane yeh tu tarasta hai  '
iss hi dunya mien jeene ko ..
raat ka andhera saathi hai isska barsoon porana
aur woh ujla sawera iski dunya se door phir bhi saath isske 
bhala kaise kho de uss noor e khuda ko '
apne iss andhere ka hissa bana kar '??
 

Anvesha Khurana 



Well the same bubbly girl bhai ki ladli '
She in last year of her event management studies ..
Heartly wants geet to become her bhabi the reason she always tries ways to make her bhai n geet stay together more n more '


Prem Khurana 

Well he is the jaan of the whole khurana family .. n most importantly maans'
He is the son of maan's elder brother n bhabi 'the last remembrance '
A cute sometime stubborn kid of 10 year '
Chahu ki jaan hai 'aur har time unki jaan khata rehta hai  '
Well another of his favorite pass time is to trouble geet ..

Geet loves him to the core n would never leave him upset for any reason the reason why he always takes advantage of her care n make her do things even if it is to visit him at 8 after a long tiring day in office just coz he wants to do his school project with her or making her come to KM every Sunday (well that's aniee n prem's doing to make maaneet be together) 


Savitri Khurna (Dadi maa)



She is the ever so soo dadi here as well
Has been n is trying every day to make maan understand to confess his love in different way but all in vein

Still trying '.


Tamay singh

Geet's mama '

She is living in delhi from the age of 18 when her dad died in hoshyaarpur n her mom sent her here to study ..
N ever since she is been living with her mamaji
He loves her as much as he loves her daughter 'n supports her inn every way

Gayatri singh

Geet's mamiji '

She is although good at heart but still a but greedy with geet's salary as geet gives a nyc amout of her salary to them not that they asked but she wanted to help them ..the reason why her mamiji doesn't want to marry off geet early n kept saying some or the other reason to her mama ji inorder to delay her marriage talks ...Big smile


other office staff is same ...just that ..i have deleted shasha tamasha from this SS ...instead Pari will be maan's Architect ...Wink

hope u all will like this ...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Edited by sobia4maaneet - 6 years ago
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wowww me secondEdited by lovebirdsmaneet - 7 years ago
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For new storySmile
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Posted: 7 years ago
Clap ClapClapClap Huge applause for such a nice concept... 
 love chalti firti diaster geet...
nd caring maan...
eagerly waiting    ...Day Dreaming for next update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow. Awesome Cs n update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful concept yaar...liked it..
Love blended with hesitation. .maan's gussa n geet being the disaster queen..
Waiting to know how the things will work out btwn them..wid the help of sweetu family..
Hope geets family koi faltu me tang na arraiye...ye maami kuch theek nhi lg rhi...
Bt koi nhi...waiting for more...!!!!
Update fast please..
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