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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow its ws damn cute

loved it

mind blowing

superb

awesome

plz plz continue dis

i really wanna knw d next part 😉 😆

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kas

@kasturikas

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

its not crap!! pls it was just wonderful.. i totally loved it.. it would be really gd if u can continue... it was so lovely viren and jeevika are a just perfect for each other...

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..Amrita..

@..Amrita..

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

loved it
viren is too naughty man
the way he trapped her was amazing
his acting was wow
finllly he got his kiss
awesome dear
nice os !!!

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TeriMaaa

@TeriMaaa

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Omg ..
It was damn amazing nd romantic...
Loved
Do write more
Or continue this plsss

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BloomingAway

@BloomingAway

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Res

Unres

The os was beautiful

One of the best os's I ever read

Aww Jeevika wasn't giving Viren his medicine

Loved Viren's plan to get his medicine aka a kiss

Finally he gets his medicine

Love how he gets naughtier

Err Viraat and Maanvi why don't you leave them alone

Loved the dialogues

Especially loved Jeevika's line at the end where she goes "I'll give you the some more at night'

Loved the entire os from start to finish

Thanks for the pm

Please please continue this os please please

Carry on writing more

Edited by Love_Family - 12 years ago

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girl97

@girl97

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Cute and romantic

Perfect

Loved it

The beginning was breath taking

Loved it

Do write more please

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awww my ammu sissy what a beautiful OS dear 😳😃

i totally loved it ❤️

hehehehehehe naughty viren wanted his medicine at any cost 😉☺️and in the end he got it too 😳

i loved how everytime viren wanted to romance with jeevika
and u wrote the whole romantic part soo beautifully 😳❤️

brilliant job sissy 👍🏼

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Kays94

@Kays94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

the dialogues were like bang on!!!

Each scene and part was so well thought of 😃

Such a cute OS and loved the naughty Viren!

Actually my favorite was Jeevika at the end saying wait till tonight 😆

Fabulous!

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veronica

@kashmirbeauty

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

the starting was awsome...!!

it's superb

thanks for pm...

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nani2630

@nani2630

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Beautiful OS
Viren got his medicine but not enough
Jeevika very smart as usual but viren out smart her
Loved it very cute and hot
My litl sis its not crap its a master piece and ur di loved it
Thanks for pm and keep writting

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