Contest OS: Is This Love? - Page 4

First of all...

You CHANGED your name...😲 When I read the name Chibisuke only one thing went through my mind. Who's this girl and why is she pming me? Haven't seen her before...😆 But then I read your previous pms and that is when it clicked my mind that it's you Helee...😆

Warning to de deti behna..[:p]

Ok now coming to this OS. I've already Pmed you about my views on this. Still don't know how you were the 2nd runner up when you  deserved to be first..😕

You want me to read it again and cry buckets...?😭 Ok, I just did that once again..😭

This is truly beautifuly and painfuly awesome...👏 Short of words right now but you got my Pm right? 😊

XOXO...🤗

OMG Helee... this was beautiful !! ❤️

Hi! 😊 Edited by Rimz_k09 - 10 years ago

Another masterpiece from you, amazing OS. very well written and it was just beautiful. Superb 👏

err i was wondering who this chibisuke egress when i saw ur OS in my posts. then il clicked that u changed ur name. i see that ur a prince of tennis fan. Ryoma's i guess:)

Firstly thank you so much for the dedication. It's a shame that I'm reading it so late.

What can I say about this that others haven't yet said? It was beautiful.

It was somewhere during the first few lines when my eyes had started to water. But it never quite hit my cheeks. You know why? Because as soon as it was about to, I would smile reading the love that they share and just like the tears would just stay there. That being said, this OS made go through so many emotions. But I smiled throughout and that is also what i found myself doing by the end of it.

Such a lovely and happy example of how couple support each other. Yes, they were lonely, but they had each other. Isn't that what everyone at the end of the day wants? Someone they can spend their entire lives with...someone who is there by their side both in sunny times and in the dark.

Their own kids didn't want them? That happens so often these days. I felt so happy for them when their grand kids visited them. And they knocked sense into their own parents' heads too.

The ending as so fiine, Helee!

So Arnav and Khushi here didn't exactly have a perfect life. But at the end of the day...they had each other. What more could they want?

Is this love?

Yes, it is. And so much more. Words can't even describe it.

P.s - I dislike Nicholas Sparks books for the simple reason and that is the love that he writes about scares me. But I've read some of his books and The Notebook and Dear John are my favorites.

I don't know if the love which he writes about in Notebook exists or not but I would like to believe it does.
Edited by Anarocksick - 10 years ago

U made me cry with this epic story...u said it ol in just one shot...thnx for writing this...

LOVE THIS OS OF URS..MY MOST FAVOURITE ONE!! LOVE THIS ENDING!!

I HOPE U R ALL FIT N FINE!!Edited by --JEWELS-- - 10 years ago

oh wow this was really beautiful.