Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Vry nice poems!!!!!!
u r a great writer!!!!
do write more!!!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
both the poems are awesome...
loved it:)
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#43

Originally posted by: P4rveen12

Congrats on the new thread, 


Wow both poems were amazing and brilliant,

The mother poem was simply wonderful, lovely words.

Loved the poems,

Eagerly waiting for many more, update soon.

Thanks for the PM xx 




thanks a lot dear😊
actually the poems r already updated in my story thread
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Jananivjc

First days of 18..!!

Excellent poem..!!

I m going to start my college life now,.. I m gonna miss my school days very much..!!

Really this poem related me so much..!!

It touched my heartand it had been so close..!!

Thanks..!!



hand-shake with u dear😊
m in the grp of leaving school😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

I don't hit like button becoz some techi problem


Sorry :(

Poetry awesome dr

Thanx 4 pm me



u liked them,my pleasure😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
friendship is what by that you are forced...
forced to love & to be loved.
Friendship is just a word
that perfumes your breath till death.

These 4 lines are just wonderful!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: panchaali

friendship is what by that you are forced...
forced to love & to be loved.
Friendship is just a word
that perfumes your breath till death.


These 4 lines are just wonderful!!!!



actually I give friendship the best value I can in my life.
m blessed with such an amazing person...
her company makes me deliver such lines
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
A beautiful thought on friendship.
very nice introduction.

such a lovely tribute to all the mothers of the world.
Loved how you metaphorically depicted the happiness of nature, heralding the arrival of a mother, who is no less than a divine goddess.

eighteen is a very significant phase of one's life.
Loved your description of this transition period of a person's life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Mother's day poetry is just superb...you are true our mothers are our Goddesses...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Great poems...specially mother's one
Very nice poems.
Thanks for the PM