Surprising Poetic Corner 2- On The Shore of Nile - Page 14

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

Awesome dr

Ik baat kahu jab Mai poems jab read krti ho to kisi or duniya Mai aa jatti yaha sirf pease hai or khushi pains vaha hai he nahi

Tht credit goes to u

Thanx dr 4 becoming dr frnd and pm me

Originally posted by: surprising

telepathy??
hmm...amr Rimi r sathe valo mele😛
ta tor sathe o j hoi jantum na😳

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

But It's True !!😉

Originally posted by: surprising

abiswas kor6i na re😊

Originally posted by: prateekdave7

One more..!!! Thats really great..I loved it..
Loved the title name specially..Sounds beautifull "Immobile Galaxy"..
Loved the concept of two different worlds..One is like a immobile Galaxy,A worlds of dreams..
And second one is real world,seems after awakening..Then chandragupta's line was good...
Ashvathama is immortal,like a deadless person just becoz of a cursed by Lord krishna..
Very well written..

Thanx for PM

Prateek

Originally posted by: surprising

With An Immobile Galaxy...

An awaiting galaxy so far...
With calm weapons in her heart
The mother path blesses with a river-full of confusion.
Do they know what's dream...what's war?


The land hued with yellow that's cute apparent
Calls for whom?
Here,beneath the azure...PEACE...
But within a moment,it'll get covered by ice-rain...
The grey world of sleepy imagination gets in touch of reality!


Blue tears of Chandragupt Mourya
Gets dirty with the touch of delightful light
Emerald of Ashvathama turns into black-hole...
Dream,life-death,war-field get mingled..
Did Karna ever notice
Unstoppable but immobile galaxy??