Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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finally you updated this and that too two chapters 😃I love the movie cinderella story... i just soo loved it and your FF isnt exactly like that but the background childhood story i adore more. Just loved the flashback moments their childhood. pichku and golu are too cute. love them. So even Abhay's mom knows about Pia and Abhay's affection for her so there shouldn't be any problem after knowing Pia's story. she will finally come out of all the misery. Pia's step mom n panchi are just horrible to her. too horrible. Masquarade ball was totally dreamy and i just hope Abhay recognizes Pia somehow. abhiya moments were very beautiful and i love you for writing 2 chapters together 😃 😆
Originally posted by: HawaHawai007
Beautiful update
Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
Oh shoot. I hope Piya gets back in time. This is kinda Cinderella-ish, isnt it? Aww...😳
BTW, I quite like that song myself.
Originally posted by: withered
Whoa peehu di this SS carried me to an dreamy fairytale overdrive Golu and Pichku are so cute , it is the element that was always missing in pyaar kii yeh ek kahani , their yearning for each other is something that cant be forgotten ... haaye . I am anticipating what will happen next ??😆
btw as far as i know cindrella has two step chudail sisters na ?? U know i am really missing bitchy T 🤣
Originally posted by: love.piyali
Lovely update..
Originally posted by: arwakantawala
Awesome updates and the kissing scene was cherry on the top and loved the updates and totally created the feel of a fairytale
Originally posted by: ..Bournville..
oh wow dear so beautifully u r writing this cute story of yourss
Originally posted by: devilish-grin
awesome
so they met but abhay couldn't see her face...
Originally posted by: Fearless_Lover
its so b'ful :))
abhay couldnt c her face 😆 awww...
let c wht vil happen nxt... i m super xcited
Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
oh boy wasn't it like Cindrella loved it Peehu beautiful update loved every one except Panchi and her evil mother
Originally posted by: Abhiyan_SHREYA
Hey peehu di !!!! I totally loved this 😳 😳 Its awesome, fantastic, mind blowing, amazing and everything ⭐️ ⭐️ Loved all the updates 😛 Continue soon 🤗 And please pm me too 😉
Originally posted by: ..juhi..
flashback was nyc...!! so pichku and golu recognized each othr😃
Originally posted by: Andromeda001
Sooo cute n truly fairylicious lovely update. I was reliving Cinderalla here😳. Finally finally Golu n Pichku met bt. Song sequence n whole meeting was just sooo beautiful
Update soon n Thnx 4 double update.
Originally posted by: pink_rose
Beautiful update. Reminded me of fairy tales read as a child specially Cinderella. Hope nothing happens to Pia and Abhay identifies her quickly and rescues her.
Please update soon.
amazing n fantastic double updates with double maza.
im loving dis story of golu n pichku.piya told abhay dat she is pichku but da mask.but hope abhay finds out da truth soon.pendant is dere with abhay.thanx fr pm n continue soon
Originally posted by: Abhiya_eternal
Me too Love this song...Lovely update🤗Abhiya moment Awsome☺️
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