thanks dear.Maria dear awesome , thanks for the PM.
thanks dear.Maria dear awesome , thanks for the PM.
josmi thanks da. i will pm you dear.Very nice.KALAKKIII...
Oh sure dear.Yes dear ,they looks same.But the rest i s surprise dear.I will pm you all my updates.Originally posted by: goldenmoon
nice updates...
interesting start...yash n veer n aartti n anuja looks alike kya????thanx for the pm...plz add me in ur pm list...
thanks dear.π³Interesting update... something different!!! Do keep it up!!
thanks anusha for being a reader from the beginning...hope you liked it.π³
Wow wow its awesome mariya so interesting love it
Thanks da
The pics is perfect for each character
What a characters you define n then hmm 3 angels r in merry cemetery
yes da,they also died.But suspense he...π
Its a story of punar vivah in punar jaman kya??
Yesπ³π
but who take revenge from my aarya (veer n anuja)n 3 innocent angels??
Suspenseπ
Ch1 was awesome
Anguti is cute gals gang
our Mukku is thereπ³β€οΈ
So anuja is not only silent person but silent admirer of veer hmm the below one make me remember aarya lambhi lambhi or gehri gehri lemon con ( wink)
~~~~~ Hmmm..~~~~~She Breathe In.She recognized his perfume.She Breath Out.~~~~~~Hmmm..~~~~~
Oh Yes Ria...I inspired from that episode
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Ch2 at present
Aarti her nightmares of the past hunting her thn her father is major okπ
N calling her JKR so sweet n then maansi scared like us wat will or where will aarti ( you ) will take usπ
So hero heroine met accident toh hona hi tha balle balle lobve this cute nonk jhonk
Haan she is kidnaaped n somebody try to then she is cage with shirtless yash yeh unintentional unity come nazdeekiyaan omg
N you stopped haan...
its awesome as the more confusions r there which is a sign of great story to be unfold
Yeah Suspense he...
Thanks a lot marya for pm .. i am so thrilled with your story will wait for your next
I will Update and Pm you dear...Thanks a a lot for your most valubale comments..I really loved it da
Originally posted by: aaryan123love
it awesome ...
i loved it so much ... aarti and yash are awesome but i am not getting who are anuja and veercould i know ur name
Originally posted by: nusratjahan505
OMG...OMG...OMG...Mannu I am fainted...I am dead...and all coz of you...π‘.But I loved this torture yaar...ππ.Wha ta great update you have given usπ.From beginning to end full of suspense and lots of dramatic turns...Hats off to you manuuπ.I enjoyed it thoroughly...π³π³
I loved each and every part sonu sp the fight between yash and Arti and Arti's effort to untie the rope which brought her physically close to Yash...π³π³...haye maarjawa...π€’π³
How Yash and Arti got kidnapped mannu...π²...π²
Plz sonu if possible give the next update tonight.I'll be waiting for it more than anything else...ππ
And last but not the least take a salute from my side for starting such a great FF dear.πβοΈ
ha ha.ππ..Coz mukku is my best friend..I dedicate this FF to her specially Ria...she is my inspiration...glad you love my comments n mukti ne yahan as writer to ff n now as actor wow π
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