MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 7 - Page 80

Phir un panno ne apni dastaan kholi ,

Kahani thi wahi,par kirdaar   alag

Naam the alag par ehsaas the wahi ,

   Zamana tha alag par rooh thi wahi 

Usne zindagi ko hasna sikhaya

Tho isne use zindagi ka khoobsurat chehra dikhaya

Usne saanson ko lena sikhaya tho

 isne un saanson ke pehchan dilaya

in dono ke bina zindagi adhoori hoti

shayd zindagi zindagi na hoti

 ek adhoori dastan hoti 

Aakash ke taro me khoya hai jaha sara,

Naam he alag par kirdaar ek

Apni roshni se bikherthe sab ki zindagi mein

Ya kaho raj ki Krishna ya phir maan ki geet 

dont know kaise aaya par jo bhi likha hai dil se likha ritzy . 

We know u r an awesome writer ,in all FF"s of urs their always emotions related to family bonding and u show beautiful family with lots of positivism  but here u have showed how beautiful story can b ,how history repeats and with same emotions and the way u wrote  it  cannot b judged by simple words .I always feel i am not in good in words to express myself and after reading this i could not gathered courage to write anything ,slowly i realized both the update r epic in WS and will b remembered whenever i cum across this emotions . kudos to u and proud to b ur reader ritzy . bahut kam hote hai jo apne shabdon se ek nayi duniya dikhathe hai ,feel so good to see u  with gifted talent where u take us to different world and make us flow in those words ,makes us  believe🤗  ,YES " LOVE EXIST IN ALL FORMS "👏

cuming to update ,indeed it was surprise and coming from daadi ma tho bilkul surprising tha . pehle sevitriji and yashvardhan ka story had moved me , kitne khusnaseeb hote hai jo patni ko sahdharmpatni ka darja dete he , unhe apne saath chalne ko kehthe hai . their life itsef is so inspirational . krishna story brought tears in my eyes and krishna harship taught us kitne bhi obstacle aaye zindagi jeene ki hausla hone chahiye , ek din zindagi khud ba khud apne aagosh mein le legi . beautiful one . apne shabon se ise aakna nahi chahthi but i can only say it was spellbound and speechless update .