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Hehehe - I love this race for the first commentππππHere is my review.Thanks Deepa for such a prompt reviewAnother lovely chapter.. Beware of update quickly demands.Thank you! Yes, now even I will try my best to give frequent updates. As I told you perhaps in a pm, I was tied up a bit last 20-25 days but now m comparatively free, unless something pops up.So Ashutosh is not able to forget those eyes.. Nidhi was made her way into his subconscious mind.@Bold - yeah u understand it perfectly. Those eyes attracted him at the first instance. Plus the way they met, or rather the way he saw her, the first 3 times added an intrigue value to the attraction making it impossible for him to resist or forget her.Loved how Ashutosh is making an effort for the Ashmal relationship to work.hmm... pooor guy.. he thinks it would work out perfectly. he actually think they are made for each other. ππLiked the Anjie challenge.. It is going to keep Nidhi in check. Have always admired their friendship be it in a FF or the show.Yeah Anjie is always a great friend - I have always loved her character a lot.
The Ashutosh self thoughts for me were the highlights.Oh I am so glad. A lot of thought goes into writing those thoughts. (wow kya sentence hai, nahin?)
You have also started giving cliff hangers haan?? So will Nidhi stay on.. My take yes..Started? matlab? You are saying this becoz u didn't read my first ff - that one had deadly cliffhangers - ask Deepali. (deepali.rocks)@Bold - oh yeah? Why? How?NOW QUICKLY GET TO CHAPTER 6. Ok YOU WON'T BE GIVEN A WEEK AGAIN π
Originally posted by: alkaparmart
Sshirley,very good written chapter.I am shocked here of Mallika.But you potray mallika as goody goody woman.Now what i am thining ashu is pushing himself to mallika and taking extra care of her.But somehow in mind he was trying to hide his attention from Nidhi to mallika.And Armaan is now taking interest in Nidhi's work.And Anji trying that she want to prove nidhi as a successful employee.And so jaise mara mara bolnese ram ram hota hai waise kuchh.I just love Anji/Nidhi friendship here.But i think Ashu is still confuse character here.By the way congrates for the new thread
Originally posted by: deepali.rock
Review later..for now, simply fab yaar..i hate her more nowπ
Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Congo ji congo... Aapka thread toh badi fast speed pe move kara raha hai ji... Already thread-2... Awesome...!!!
ch-5 will read a little later... ok?
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