ManVeer SS ||Crossroads||NOTE Pg14 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: annabh
hey
how are you
yeaa i am the first to comment
thanks for giving a super fast update
but is it complete
i guess so
the flashback of uday pov was super good
so uday really loves her
than what went wrong?
and at last jai
why does she has to be such a pain
i love your ss
do continue asap
i know i am being greedy hehehehe
hugss anni

Hey Anni:) Actually this was supposed to be a part of chapter 6 but it was becoming too long hence I made it a separate chapter. Jay will always be a pain that's how her character is😆 Did Uday really love her or not will be revealed as the chapter proceed and what went wrong is basically the entire concept of the SS😛😆

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927853

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: cnibir
I love how you write part of the update in flashback and part of it in present... very nicely written and i have fallen in love with the concept fully.

I wonder what is cooking in Aashi's brain... Manyata should just except that she is in love with UV... can't wait for that day but for now i am enjoying this nok jhoks between Manyata and UV.

Thank you for the PM and keep writing amazingly...

Thanks!! I actually enjoy writing the Flashbacks more but just to keep the mystery intact I choose to write both together. If I give out the whole story in flashback the story will become boring (I m assuming it isn't now😆)

The next chapter is up but I couldn't send PMs as I-F limits the number of PMs I can send

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: serat
Awesome update
Loved it
Manyta friend is back is awesome
But I wonder how they became best friends
Nd
Why manyta uday hate so much
Plzzz
Next chap update soon
Can't wait
Plzzz

Thanks! Next chapter is up too😳 Sorry I couldn't send a PM as I-F won't let me to How Manyata and Aashi became friends is not much of a story actually😆 Why Manyata hates Uday so much is the story😉

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

dips super update.

love ur style of writing.
woow now uv will come devgarh.
here also j is villian type.
wana to know wat aashi & M planned.
plz continue soon.

pm me next time.

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927853

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: ...anju...
dips super update.

love ur style of writing.
woow now uv will come devgarh.
here also j is villian type.
wana to know wat aashi & M planned.
plz continue soon.

pm me next time.

Thanks Anju! J isn't actuallly a villain she just told what she observed about Uday. Sorry about the PMing thing I-F allows me to send just 10 PMs in 24 hours and since this update was within 24 hours I could't send any PMs

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angleroops

@angleroops

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

hey nice update

specially the past scene

naow lets see what ashi is upto

and what this jay was saying

i mean uday was serious with manyata

seriously u r caring the suspence very nicely

waiting for ur update

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Priyanka

@capriya

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

#87

hai i just read all the chapters.very nice concept.its very clearly feel that uday is in love with manyata.loved the story.

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

You really are an amazing writer. this story is getting really interesting wid each update. liked the way u r managing to show the past nd present together. can't wait for the date. Uday is going to get a shock. do update soon. Waiting eagerly. btw i've becum fan of your writing. Keep writing nd keep rocking girl

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pia

@pia.raha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

hey thanks fr gvin us an update,i am jst loving bth ur past and present!!!!! aha aso duay also gt smitten by sme1!!! uday's pov was jst amazingg!!!!!! loved it!!! it would sound weird bt i am ling j mre than ashi,actually bcoz j is indrctly playign a cupid bt ashi,she is spoiling everythng!!! neways plzzz do cntinue soon!!!!!!😊😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: roopali15
hey nice update
specially the past scene
naow lets see what ashi is upto
and what this jay was saying
i mean uday was serious with manyata
seriously u r caring the suspence very nicely
waiting for ur update

Thanks Roopali :) That's the whole purpose of writing both in past and present together to keep the suspense alive and I m glad that you are enjoying it😳

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