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shri12

@shri12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#661

Fabulous part geet feeling betrayed on both sides waiting for her reactioncc

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latecomer

@latecomer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

lovely update...now atleast she told him about payal..n maan for sure will do the need ful ... n dear continue with pm

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

intense emotional update! MAaneet in each other arms! Geet tells Maan everything! Maan assures her!Geet rubbin herself Maan shocked to c her like dat! Well written! update soon! Y did u update on blog!

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saf24

@saf24

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

Fantastic update. Maan and Geet are suffering so much trying to deal with everything that is taking place. Really glad that dialogue is taking place between them and bits and pieces of the night are coming out in an attempt to sort things out between them. Fab job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.

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Vani

@BeautifulBee

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

Hey, I was able to catch up with part 19, 20 and 21. They are nice. will read Part 22 soon and will Story is going good. Hope geet gets better soon.

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bilqeesbint Nazeer

@billieberry

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

SUPERB!!!!!!! what a write up dear, read all chapters in one go, in love with it dear

beautiful chapters, and emotional ones, geet is broken inside out and only maan is the key to repair her poor her she had suffered a lot but i can't wait to see payal and ayeesha punished for their sin😡 in one way payal is responsible for geet miserable life and ayeesha for maan's rude behaivour.

i did'nt want to reach d end, hope u update sooner

continue soon dear u re amazing⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

and thanx for the multiple pm's😃

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Sharmeen

@SheenGcian

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Superb Update 👏

But so much confusion is here

Yeh payal hai kia akhir 😡

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Priya21

@priya_21

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

Superb update. I hope payal ke aane se maaneet karib hi aaye, koi duri na ho ab.

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my_maan_geet

@my_maan_geet

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#669

hey dear i just discovered ur ff nd completed it in a go nd i must say ur an awesum writer...waiting for ur next updates nd ya plz add me in ur pm list...

Edited by my_maan_geet - 12 years ago