Abhiya OS: Be My Valentine

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Posted: 10 years ago

Valentine's Day 14 February 2012

Piya as usual sitting in library n reading her favorite book just then she hears 

Abhay(Sitting down on chair opposite side): Hey book worm what r u doing here 

Piya: if u had not noticed then let me tell you i reading my favorite book  gotta problem 

Abhay: Whoa!!! showing attitude are we ???

Piya: Whatever Raichand 

Abhay: So i think you heard about valentine's party 

Piya: Yes so what ??

Abhay(fake shocked face): Don't tell me u r not going to come 

Piya: Yes i am not gonna come as the party is a couple party 

Abhay: So you don't have a date 

Piya: yes n i don't like parties 

Abhay: Why you don't like parties 

Piya: Being in parties is waste of time n i don't want to do it rather i can increase my knowledge by reading books 

Abhay: Oh come on darling u gotta come 

Piya: Who's gonna come with a geek like me 

Abhay(angry): Your are not a geek 

Piya: i am n it will be better if u agree it and who will go with a orphan like me 

Abhay: I won't u r not a geek but u r beautiful and u r not an orphan u have me 

Piya: what ever i gotta go...leaves 

In Piya's home 

Door bell rings n piya opens to see abhay wearing a armani suit looking deadly handsome 

Piya: What r u doing here ??

Abhay: am i not allowed to my girl friends home 

Piya: WHAT !!! ARE YOU MAD ????? I AM NOT UR GIRLFRIEND 

Abhay: why r u shouting i am just stating facts 

Piya: Shut up !!! 

Abhay(giving her wrapped gift): go and get dressed or i will make you change your clothes 

Piya: WHAT !!! NO !!! 

Abhay: No !!!...said raising his eye brows and comes forward

Piya(backing up n taking the gift): Fine i will...leaves 

Abhay: Don't forget to leave your hair open 

Piya frowns irritatingly 

After 30 mins 

Abhay: what is taking this much time i swear i am gonna get mad in her love...Oh boy i love her so much i hope she accepts my love n piya comes down wearing beautiful black gown making abhay mesmerized 


Abhay: Gorgeous...

Piya: What !!! 

Abhay: You look stunning 

Piya(blushing): Thanks !! 

Abhay: Lets go !!!  

In party 

Everyone's eyes struck to the couple who were standing at entrance n boys were jealous of abhay n girls were jealous of piya 

Piya: Abhay why is everyone staring at me 

Abhay: U r looking stunning that's why 

They go inside and meet some friends n talk n the whole time abhay's hand was on piya's waist just then 

Tanushree(hugging abhay): Hey abhay u said u were not coming 

Abhay(uncomfortable): yeah but came now gotta problem 

Tanushree: I am your girl friend n u came with this charity case 

Abhay(angry): How dare you !!! she is my girl friend n i am not ur boy friend because i dumped this morning if u don't remember 

Taushree: Whatever...leaves 

Abhay turns to piya but shocked to see piya is not there abhay looks here n there and finally reaches garden to see piya crying 

Abhay: Piya !!! 

Piya: i told you i shouldn't have come 

Abhay: U have every right piya 

Piya: No i don't for a orphan like me 

Abhay(angry n shaking her from arms):HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT U R ORPHAN I AM WITH YOU TILL MY LAST BREATH 

Piya: WHO AM I TO YOU !!! WHY R U CONCERNED FOR ME N WHY IT MATTERS TO YOU 

Abhay: COZ  I LOVE YOU DAMMIT  

Piya was shocked to say anything just kept staring at him 

Abhay(cupping her face): Yes piya i love you i really do when i don't know but i do love you from the first time i have seen you 

Piya(tearing up): I love you too 

Abhay(shocked): Really !!! 

Piya(blushing): Yes !!! 

Abhay hugs piya so tightly that it suffocates her after what seemed like eternity abhay leaves her 

Abhay bends down on his knees forwards his right hand 

Abhay: Piyali Jaiswal i am in love you from the first time i know you love me too plz will you be my valentine for the rest of our life's and marry me 

Piya: Yes !!! and hugs him n abhay reciprocates the hug n kisses her passionately 

After An Year 

Valentine's Day 14 February 2013

Piya was standing infront of a mirror wearing red saree abhay's fav colour and sees abhay standing on the entrance on the room leaning on the door frame smiling lovely at her 

Abhay comes forward n hugs from behind n whispers 

Abhay: Happy Valentine's Day love 

Piya(blushing): Happy Valentine's Day to you too 

Abhay: You look beautiful !!!

Piya(blushing): Thanks !!!

Abhay: Close your eyes na !!! 

Piya: Why ???

Abhay: Just do it na !!! 

Piya closes her after few minutes she feels something cold on her neck 

Abhay: Open your eyes 

Piya opens her eyes n sees a heart shape pendant 

Abhay: Open the pendant 

Piya opens to see abhay's n her pic in the pendant 

Piya: Its lovely thanks abhay 

Abhay: U don't have to thank me love 

Piya(blushing): I have something for you 

Abhay: What is it 

Piya slowly takes abhay's hand n puts it on her stomach n looks at him with tears in her yes 

Abhay slowly realizes and said: REALLY !!! 

Piya nods with tears in her eyes 

Abhay suddenly swirls her around in air by lifting in his arms after some round puts her down 

Abhay: i am really happy love u have given me best gift ever 

Piya(hugging him): We both love you too 

Abhay(hugging her back): I love you both so much 

After 9 months 

Piya was sitting in her hospital bed holding a baby girl in her arms n smiles at abhay

Abhay(taking the baby in his arms): she is beautiful 

just then the baby opens her eyes they're mesmerized seeing her eyes which r in blue orbs like abhay the baby smiles at abhay as if she had recognizes him 


Piya: Indeed she is beautiful 

Abhay: So decided her name 

Piya: No why don't you choose it 

Abhay n piya think for sometime n say in unison

'A K I RA'

Piya: its beautiful name 

Abhay(sitting beside her n side hugging her): Thank you so much for this beautiful gift

Piya: I should thank you for giving me happiness 

Abhay: I love you 

Piya: I love you too 

After an year 

Angel look

Piya: Angel why r u crying papa will be here soon 

But angel was crying 

Soon abhay arrives 

Abhay: Why my angel is crying come here 

Piya: abhay she has been crying for a half an hour 

Abhay: Why what happened to my angel 

Piya: Don't know 

Abhay: Hey angel don't cry dada here see baby 

Angel: Da...da...

Both Abhay piya were shocked 

Abhay: Say it again angel 

Angel: Da...da...Dada 

Abhay: Awww see she called me dada aww i love you 

Piya(Hugging him): We love you too  

Abhay(wrapping his arms around her): Happy Valentine's Day 

Piya: Happy Valentine's Day to you too 

Abhay: This valentine's day brought happiness for us more n more 

Piya: it is 

All while angel giggles and 

they lived happily ever after

The End...


Edited by LilyOrchid - 10 years ago

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