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A/N : I wrote this yesterday. my 1st JaGan OS! Hope u all like it. Its written in hindi.. so if someone wants english dialogues let me know😳😉
ENGLISH VERSION ON PAGE #3 : did it on my buddies' suggestions
JaGan OS..
Always forever...❤️
Jagya was sick. Sick of sleeping and resting at home. Dadi Sa wouldn't let him get up, let alone walk in the garden.He knew he was supposed to rest for another month. But he couldn't. Sure, he was comfortable in is bed, people come and visit him chat and have fun. But he wasn't satisfied For once he wanted to feel the fresh air. He wanted to go out.
He tried to get up. His head began spinning and he collapsed in his bed, clutching his sore forehead, writhing in pain. He was startled when he heard someone rushed to him, helping him to lie down.
"Thanks Ganga... "
So, he wasn't still lucky enough to go out, feel the fragrance of monsoon.
"Dr. saa.. Aapko aaraam karna chahiye. " Ganga said in a pleading tone when Mannu came running.
What would he do with out these two?! Since past one month, Ganga Mannuu were always next to him, narrating wild stories, cracking jokes, occasionally learning English. Oh it was so much fun! He was thankful to Ganga and little Mannuu as well.
"Thank you Ganga... Tum na hoti toh, shayad main... sab ke liye shukriya. Shukriya isliye.. kyounki koi aur lafz nahi hai mere paas.. I dunno how to thank you enough.. "
"Naa Dr. Saa, Aap hume sharminda karrahe ho.. hum ne kya kia..? Bas wohi kia jo karna tha... Aur aapki is haal ke zimmedar toh hum hi hai na... " Ganga's eyes were teary eyed almost.
Jagya sighed. He was tired of consoling her. Everyday, she would end up crying, blaming herself for the attack. He was running out of jokes to make her smile every time.
"Ganga please. Mere saare jokes khatm hogaye. Mere is haal ki zimmedar tum nahi ho... "
"Par Dr. saa.. "
"Bas Ganga.. chup raho"
Jagya was angry now. He hated himself for bringing up the issue and making her cry again.
~
Meanwhile, Anandi, Shiv who reached the haweli with Saanchi greeted everyone and headed to visit Jagya.
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"Kaise chup rahoon?! " more tears leaked from Ganga's eyes, "Kaise na manoon.. Ki aapka iss haal ka zimmedar main hoon! Maare ko patha hai.. woh log zaroor us Ratan ke gunde hai.. Bohot maara aapko! Agar aapko kuch... sab meri wajaa se... "
Anandi was about to rush inside when Shiv caught her hand, "abhi nahi... ruko Saanchi.."
Saanchi stood seething in anger when Jagya reached up to wipe Ganga's tears.
"Rona band karo... " Jagya began in a soft tone, "tumhe patha hai na Ganga, main tumhari aankhon mein aasoon nahi dekh sakta... "
Ganga nodded.
Jagya went on, "toh phir.. "
He wiped more tears, " Acha maanliya maine.. shayad woh Ratan ka hi kaam tha, usko uski sazaa milegi. Is mein ronewali baat kya hai.. "
Ganga sniffed, "Meri madad karne keliye appko ithni badi sazaa mili. Main nahi chahti ki aage jaake woh Ratan aapko dobara pareshaan karein... aur.."
"Main tumhari madad karoonga. Aur humesha karoonga.. har mushkil mein khada rahoonga tumhare saath. Tum ne kya socha.. Us Ratan se darke main tumhara saath chod doonga? Nahiin.. Tum us Ratan ke baare mein sochna band karo. Uska kaam main tamaam karoonga.. aur rahaa sawal yeh chot ka.. " Jagya pointed to his head.
"tumhari zindgi mein khushiyan laane keliye, main aise hazaaron chot khaasakta hoon. Tumhari khushi keliye, aise bhot se dard seh sakta hoon... "
Jagya was not sure how those words slipped out. He knew he was fond of her. He wanted to see her happy. And for month long, he was enjoying her company. He felt alive, like a kid. For once he didn't remember his bitter past in her presence. And well, he liked her. Just like you know. He liked her silly jokes, her broken English, her cute smile, the special one she had reserved just for him and Mannuu. And he liked how she was worried about him, how she was always there like a friend and lastly... He loved the tears that leaked from her eyes that showed how much she cares for him, although he wouldn't want her to cry.
He just liked her! He dint love.. Dr. Jagdish! Just patience! You're gonna scare her, warned his head. Wait... love ??! Where did that come from?!
Ganga's eyes widened when she comprehended what her Dr. Saa said.
Jagya was tensed. What if she took his words in a wrong way?!
To his relief, She smiled. Giving him one of her best smiles, she mumbled a thank you.
"Mera matlab tha.. Main aasaani se haar nahi maanoonga. Mujhe toh ladna hi hoga... tumhareliye aur specially Mannuu keliye.. "
She smiled widely. She was touched that Dr.Saa cared so much for her. He would be there for her, always.. forever!
" Good... Smile karna sehat keliye achha hai! toh smile karte raho... and don't worry, main apna dhyaan rakh sakta hoon. Aur Us Ratan Singh ko Jail bhi bhej sakta hoon..Are Mannuu tayyar rehna, tu aur main jaake Ratan Singh ki dhulaayi kardenge.. "
"haan, Aur dhulaayi karnekeliye shakti ki zaroorat hain? Hai na? Main chote aur bade saab keliye juice lekar aati hoon.. " Ganga smiled; turning around, she noticed Anandi, shiv and Saanchi who was fuming.
"Aap log kab aaye.. "
"bas abhi... " Shiv lied with a smile, "hai na Anandi.. "
"haan.. abhi.. " replied Anandi wid a knowing smile.
"Apkeliye bhi juice laati hoon.." Ganga asked them cheerfully, "saanchi aapko.."
"No thanks.. "
"Saanchi ko glucose dena.. thaki hui lag rahi hai! shayad behosh hojayegi? " Anandi laughed as Saanchi stormed off in anger.
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review plz😳😃
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INDEX :
Part 2 ~ https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3620322&PID=85291195�
Part 3 ~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85683862
Part 4~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86169944
ENGLISH VERSION ON PAGE #3 : did it on my buddies' suggestions
JaGan OS..
Always forever...❤️
Jagya was sick. Sick of sleeping and resting at home. Dadi Sa wouldn't let him get up, let alone walk in the garden.He knew he was supposed to rest for another month. But he couldn't. Sure, he was comfortable in is bed, people come and visit him chat and have fun. But he wasn't satisfied For once he wanted to feel the fresh air. He wanted to go out.
He tried to get up. His head began spinning and he collapsed in his bed, clutching his sore forehead, writhing in pain. He was startled when he heard someone rushed to him, helping him to lie down.
"Thanks Ganga... "
So, he wasn't still lucky enough to go out, feel the fragrance of monsoon.
"Dr. saa.. Aapko aaraam karna chahiye. " Ganga said in a pleading tone when Mannu came running.
What would he do with out these two?! Since past one month, Ganga Mannuu were always next to him, narrating wild stories, cracking jokes, occasionally learning English. Oh it was so much fun! He was thankful to Ganga and little Mannuu as well.
"Thank you Ganga... Tum na hoti toh, shayad main... sab ke liye shukriya. Shukriya isliye.. kyounki koi aur lafz nahi hai mere paas.. I dunno how to thank you enough.. "
"Naa Dr. Saa, Aap hume sharminda karrahe ho.. hum ne kya kia..? Bas wohi kia jo karna tha... Aur aapki is haal ke zimmedar toh hum hi hai na... " Ganga's eyes were teary eyed almost.
Jagya sighed. He was tired of consoling her. Everyday, she would end up crying, blaming herself for the attack. He was running out of jokes to make her smile every time.
"Ganga please. Mere saare jokes khatm hogaye. Mere is haal ki zimmedar tum nahi ho... "
"Par Dr. saa.. "
"Bas Ganga.. chup raho"
Jagya was angry now. He hated himself for bringing up the issue and making her cry again.
~
Meanwhile, Anandi, Shiv who reached the haweli with Saanchi greeted everyone and headed to visit Jagya.
~
"Kaise chup rahoon?! " more tears leaked from Ganga's eyes, "Kaise na manoon.. Ki aapka iss haal ka zimmedar main hoon! Maare ko patha hai.. woh log zaroor us Ratan ke gunde hai.. Bohot maara aapko! Agar aapko kuch... sab meri wajaa se... "
Anandi was about to rush inside when Shiv caught her hand, "abhi nahi... ruko Saanchi.."
Saanchi stood seething in anger when Jagya reached up to wipe Ganga's tears.
"Rona band karo... " Jagya began in a soft tone, "tumhe patha hai na Ganga, main tumhari aankhon mein aasoon nahi dekh sakta... "
Ganga nodded.
Jagya went on, "toh phir.. "
He wiped more tears, " Acha maanliya maine.. shayad woh Ratan ka hi kaam tha, usko uski sazaa milegi. Is mein ronewali baat kya hai.. "
Ganga sniffed, "Meri madad karne keliye appko ithni badi sazaa mili. Main nahi chahti ki aage jaake woh Ratan aapko dobara pareshaan karein... aur.."
"Main tumhari madad karoonga. Aur humesha karoonga.. har mushkil mein khada rahoonga tumhare saath. Tum ne kya socha.. Us Ratan se darke main tumhara saath chod doonga? Nahiin.. Tum us Ratan ke baare mein sochna band karo. Uska kaam main tamaam karoonga.. aur rahaa sawal yeh chot ka.. " Jagya pointed to his head.
"tumhari zindgi mein khushiyan laane keliye, main aise hazaaron chot khaasakta hoon. Tumhari khushi keliye, aise bhot se dard seh sakta hoon... "
Jagya was not sure how those words slipped out. He knew he was fond of her. He wanted to see her happy. And for month long, he was enjoying her company. He felt alive, like a kid. For once he didn't remember his bitter past in her presence. And well, he liked her. Just like you know. He liked her silly jokes, her broken English, her cute smile, the special one she had reserved just for him and Mannuu. And he liked how she was worried about him, how she was always there like a friend and lastly... He loved the tears that leaked from her eyes that showed how much she cares for him, although he wouldn't want her to cry.
He just liked her! He dint love.. Dr. Jagdish! Just patience! You're gonna scare her, warned his head. Wait... love ??! Where did that come from?!
Ganga's eyes widened when she comprehended what her Dr. Saa said.
Jagya was tensed. What if she took his words in a wrong way?!
To his relief, She smiled. Giving him one of her best smiles, she mumbled a thank you.
"Mera matlab tha.. Main aasaani se haar nahi maanoonga. Mujhe toh ladna hi hoga... tumhareliye aur specially Mannuu keliye.. "
She smiled widely. She was touched that Dr.Saa cared so much for her. He would be there for her, always.. forever!
" Good... Smile karna sehat keliye achha hai! toh smile karte raho... and don't worry, main apna dhyaan rakh sakta hoon. Aur Us Ratan Singh ko Jail bhi bhej sakta hoon..Are Mannuu tayyar rehna, tu aur main jaake Ratan Singh ki dhulaayi kardenge.. "
"haan, Aur dhulaayi karnekeliye shakti ki zaroorat hain? Hai na? Main chote aur bade saab keliye juice lekar aati hoon.. " Ganga smiled; turning around, she noticed Anandi, shiv and Saanchi who was fuming.
"Aap log kab aaye.. "
"bas abhi... " Shiv lied with a smile, "hai na Anandi.. "
"haan.. abhi.. " replied Anandi wid a knowing smile.
"Apkeliye bhi juice laati hoon.." Ganga asked them cheerfully, "saanchi aapko.."
"No thanks.. "
"Saanchi ko glucose dena.. thaki hui lag rahi hai! shayad behosh hojayegi? " Anandi laughed as Saanchi stormed off in anger.
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review plz😳😃
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
INDEX :
Part 2 ~ https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3620322&PID=85291195�
Part 3 ~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/85683862
Part 4~ https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/86169944
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