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Posted: 10 years ago
wow di great going...mujhe na appki ff padne me to maja ati hi hay par fast into part me bohut hi masti ato hay..ur very words r too good di..kal aise hi meri mud off thi par aapki ff se achi ho gayi ..thank u di amd thank u for ur PM>..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update 
finally Raya ki dosti ho gye 
waiting 4 nxt pls continue soon
thx 4 PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

wow di great going...mujhe na appki ff padne me to maja ati hi hay par fast into part me bohut hi masti ato hay..ur very words r too good di..kal aise hi meri mud off thi par aapki ff se achi ho gayi ..thank u di amd thank u for ur PM>..😊



plsr dear...keep smiling😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini1991

Nice update... oye dii aap khte ho na ladka ladki dost nhi ho skte... chalo dosti ho gyi hai ab hote hote pyaar ho jaaega... continue soon !!!


hehehe...m jo kehti hu usi pr rhti hu dear...keep reading...
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Posted: 10 years ago
In afsano k peeche ek lamba dard ka arsa tha..
Jispr duniya muskurayi wo kissa meri ankho se barsa tha..
Logo ne socha hum kahaniya suna rhe hain
are kambakhto har afsana mere tute hue dil ka hissa tha... 

vry sorry for late update..thodi si tabiyat kharab ho gyi thi yar..kabhi kabhi ye kamal bhi ho jata h mere sath...khair...raya ki dosti mujhe hi bhari pad gyi...lol..mujhe hamesha aisa lagta h ki pyar aur dosti ek hi sikke k do pehlu h...pta nhi log ise kyun alag alag define karne ki koshis karte hain...qki dono ka cnclusion to last me ek hi jaisa niklta h...agr kisi bhi rishte me dosti h to uske peechhe pyar to hoga hi na ..bat sirf rishte ki ehmiyat aur limitation ki h...mere hisab se har rishte ki ek line hoti h..jise aap cross kariye to uske mayne badal jate hain...agr do logo me dosti h to abiously wo ekdusre ki care karenge akdusre ko khush karna chahenge ek dusre k sath waqt bitana chahenge...ye sb requirment pyar ki bhi hoti h ...fark bas itna h ki is requirment ki hadh kya h...dosti k limitations dusri h pyar k liye dusri h...pr beech me pyar to h hi..aur pyar aur dosti har jagah hoti h...ma bap me bhai bhn me..pati patni me..parents aur bachho me...bas ubhe handle karne ki sincierity alag alag hoti h...to dosti hona badi bat nhi h..pr ap use le kis disha me ja rhe hain badi bat ye h...aur mere liye one truth h...ki ladka aur ladki me dosti nhi ho sakti...lol..anyways moving on updates...

SITUATION 4

"mujhe kuchh kehna h"

ok to inlogo ki yari dosti ho gyi..priya ne asusual apne gharwalo..khas kar apne papa ko btaya ki kaise wo ram se mili aur dosti ho gyi...priya k papa ko pta hi h ki unki beti khud bht samjhdar h jindgi ko jeena aur sambhalna achhi trh janti h...shipra asusual..ram kapoor ka nam sunke apni beti k liye sapne sajane lagti h...ma h na...inka ye part time job hota h...khair...priya ko aisa bilkul nhi lagta ki ram kapoor k nam me jitna dum h to wo uski dosti ko kahin se effect karta h uske liye ram ek normal insan h jisse dosti kar k use achha laga bas...ram bhi priya se dosti karke khush h pr ram priya jitna normal aur sensitive nhi h uski bht sari uljhane hoti h jinhe suljhane k liye use koi na koi chahiye hota h...actully wo sabhi k sath achha karna chahta h pr ye to nhi ho sakta na..qki koi bhi prfect to hota nhi h to wo bechara uljh jata h kabhi sentiments me to kabhi jimmedariyo me to kabhi apne hi dil deemag me...aajtak to akela vikram tha jiske pas uske har sawal k liye rambaad ilaz hua karta tha..ab priya bhi jud gyi h...to kuchh cheezo k liye uspe bhi depend kiya ja sakta h...jahan ladko ki akal kam nhi karti wha to ladkiyo ki hi akal lagani padti h...waise to ladko ki akal jra kam hi kaam karti h aur jab bhi karti h kuchh utpatang hi karti h...lol..anywys...to rambabu phir se ek critical situation me phas gye aur pahonch gye apni uljhan leke priya k pas...priya bade hi aram se apni coaching class se nikal rhi hoti h..tabhi samne rambabu aake khade ho jate hain...priya thoda dar jati h..

Priya...kya mr.kapoor aap aram se nhi aa sakte hain..dar gyi main

ram...are i am sorry sorry..but bht hi argent tha...

Priya...kya hua???

Ram...mujhe kuchh kehna hai 

priya...kya???...

Ram...lekin pehle tumhare ma papa se bat karni hogi

priya..mtlb???

Ram...are tum chalo to mere sath

ram priya ka hath pakad k use car me bitha leta h priya ka to dil itna tez dhadk rha tha ki uchhal k bahar hi aa jayega..she is little bit scard kahin rambabu k irade khatrnak to nhi ho gye...kahin priya ka dosti karna use glt to sabit nhi kar dega...kahin kuchh badlne wala to nhi h...soch soch k uska deemag kharab ho rha tha...achanak rambabu ko ho kya gya h??

Priya...mr.kapoor pls aap mujhe btaiye bat kya h??

Ram...are bta dunga yar apne dost pr itna bhi bharosa nhi h..

Priya...bharose ki bat nhi h...aap bta denge to m soch samjh paungi na cheezo ko

ram...are dnt wrry m tumhe cheezo ko sochne samjhne ka pura pura mauka dunga bs ek bar gharwale permisson to de de...

Ab to priya ko full to daubt ho gya ki usne bht badi glti kar di dosti karke...ab to use ye tnsion thi ki ma papa kya sochenge uske bare me...khair...uljhan to rambabu ki thi pr uljh priya gyi...is uljha uljhi me priya ka ghar bhi aa gyi...rambabu ki excitment aur priya ki dhadkan dono sirf badh hi rhe hain...kam nhi ho rhe ...khair rambabu priya k ma papa k samne hain

ram...waise to priya ne mere bare me btaya hi hoga...mera nam ram kapoor h priya meri bht achhi dost h...main aaj yha ek bht jaruri kam se aya hu...

Shipra...hanji kahiye kahiye

ram...actully mujhe apki prmission chahiye

sudhir...permission???..kis liye???

Ram...main apki beti mangne aaya hu

shipra...are hamari beti to apki hi h

sabhi chaunk k shipra ko dekhne lagte hain...ram bhi...

Ram...ji???

Shipra...areee mera mtlb h apki hi dost h abhi to apne btaya...

Baap re shipra bhi na kabhi kabhi hadh kar deti h...khair..

Ram...han han isiliye to m yha aya hu qki m janta hu ki whi sirf meri madad kar sakti h actully m bht badi musibat me phas gya hu agr aplogo ki izazt ho to 1 ghante k liye priya ko apne sath e ja sakta hu...ek ladki dekhne jana h aur mujhe kuchh nhi pta h ki kya krna h..aajtak to bahane mar mar k bachta rha hu pr aaj dadi ne phasa diya h to jana hi padega...agr priya sath jayegi to thodi help ho jayegi...

Ufff...ab jake priya ko sans aati h bapre itni si der me kya kya soch dala usne...pr kya kare adat se mazbur jo h...bina soche samjhe itna sochti h to soch samjh k kitna sochegi...hadh h aur upar se shipra...rambabu ki bat sunke to uska dil hi tut gya pr ab kya kar sakte hain bade log badi badi bate...

Sudhir...han han kyun nhi bilkul le jaiye...

Ram...oh thank u soo much ap nhi jante apne meri kitni badi problm solve kar di...chalo priya hamare pas time bilkul nhi h...

Priya...papa main aati hu abhi...

Sudhir...han priya aram se ja...

Dono chale jate hain...pehle ram k ghar jate hain...wha ram priya ko sabse milwata h waise to koi bhi intrsted nhi tha pr rambabu k age chalti kiski h...le de kar ek dadi hi thi jo naturally khus dikhi priya se milkr...khair phir wha se taiyar hokar sab ladki dekhne jate hain...priya ko thoda ajeeb lag rha tha pr ram to ram hain na...bas apni hi kehte hain dusro ki sunne ki to unki adat hi nhi h...khair priya ko yha lana bhi bekar hi nikla is waqt ye dono sabse bade ullu dikh rhe the...jise dekhne aye the wo samne khadi thi pr dono me se koi bhi use dekh nhi rha tha...actully bade log to bhai dekhne dikhane k liye party wgrh rakhte hain na...are paise jo itne jyada hote hain to kharch to karne padenge na...ab itne mahan to hote nhi ki kisi greeb ko dan kar de to jitne me ye dekhne dikhane ki rasm kar rhe hain utne me kisi gareeb ki beti ki shaadi hi ho jaye...anyways this is non of my bsns logo k pas paise hain to udayenge hi...khair kafi der tak teeno waise hi khade rhte hain phir finally in dono se jyada smart whi ladki niklti h aur bechari khud hi apna intro deti h...hi i am shikha

ram uski trf dekh kar muskurata h...priya dheere se use bolti h ..mr.kapoor hath to milaiye...

Ram...shutup

bichari sikha apna hath muskura k wapas rakh leti h...phir sab ekdusre ko dekh k muskurate hain...ufff..pta nhi kaun sa cartoon chal rha h jo sabko itni hasi aa rhi h...huuhh..

Shikha...waise lag nhi rha h ki aap mujhe dekhne aaye hain mr.ram

ram...nhi...mera mtlb aisi to koi bat nhi h..aapko aisa kyun lag rha h??

Shikha...nhi mujhe aisa lag rha h jaise main hi apko dekhne aayi hu

shikha haste hue ram ka hath pakad leti h...asusual hi society fashion..which i cnt undrstand..lol..khair...shikha ram ka hath pakadti h aur ram dar k priya ka hath pakad leta h...priya dar jati h aur dheere se bolti h

priya...mr.kapoor mera hath chhodiye..

Ram...usne mera hath pakad liya h yar

priya...han to ..hath hi pakda na rape to nhi kar rhi h...behv urself..chhodiye mera hath

ram...pehle mera hath chhudwao

priya...han to aap mujhe chhodenge tabhi to...

Ram priya ka hath chhod deta h..itni der me to ram ne uske hath ki band bja di..khair priya apna hath sikha ki trf badha deti h...

Priya...hi sikha...

Shikha...hiii...aap???

Rampriya...priya
meri/inki family frnd

shikha...cmon yar tumlog itna shy behv kyun kar rhe ho...sirf frnd bhi keh sakte ho i dnt mind...mere bhi bht sare dost h...wo dekho wha..rahul nikhil arya sneha...whats a big deal...we r in 21st century ye sb chalta h

han beta mar le dialogue ye dono aisi dosti dikhane wale hain tujhe ki dosti karna bhul jayegi...lol

ram...waise bht der ho gyi h hame chalna chahiye...mujhe parties me bht suffocation hoti h

priya muskura rhi hoti h...wo ram ko khub samjh rhi thi...

Shikha...as u wish..waise next kab milenge.??. Akele??

Ram...mtlb???

Shikha...mtlb ekdusre ko janne samjhne k liye...har bar kya bheed me hi milenge??

Priya...nhi nhi bheed me kyun milenge..hum hain na yar dost hote kisliye hain...bilkul akele me milwayenge

ram ko priya pr jbrdst gussa aa rha hota h...khair milna milana kark sabhi wapas jate hain priya ram ki car me baithti h jo ki niharika ko pasand nhi ata but who cares yha rambabu ki chalti h sirf...rampriya jaise hi car me baithte hain priya jor jor se hasne lagti h...

Ram...kya h???

Priya abhi bhi hasi ja rhi h

ram...shutup...

Priya...mr.kapoor aap ladkiyo se itna darte hain??

Ram...oh shutup..aisa kuchh nhi h darta to tumse dosti nhi karta

priya..aahh ye sb to bahane baji h...khair jo bhi ho dar k aap cute bht lag rhe the...

Ram...oh shutup..jyada smart mt bano..

Priya...achha wo chhodiye ye btaiye ladki kaisi lagi??

Ram...pta nhi..maine nhi dekha

priya...achha apne nhi dekha??...shit to wha karne kya gye the???..darne gye the??

Ram...shutup priya..agr tumne ek aur bar ye bola na ..:to ...to m tumhe kahin nhi le jaunga...

Priya...ok ok i am sorry...but khubsurat to bht thi sirf sandle bht heel wali pehn rakhi thi...

Ram...nahi to...sandle to flate thi...

Priya...achha???..pr apne to kaha apne dekha hi nhi

ram...are to usko nhi dekha pr uski hieght to dekhi na to obiously heel nhi pehnegi...

Priya...hehehe

ram...ssshhatup..

Ram shy...priya muskurati h use dekh kar aur sochti h ki waqai bilkul bhi banawat nhi h is insan me...i wish jo bhi ladki ise mile wo ise dil se pyar kare...kash...

Ram priya ko chhodkar ghar chala jata h...gharwale uska deemag kha rhe hote hain...ki use ladki pasand aayi ya nhi,...ram finally han kar deta hai...

To b continue...
Edited by veena23 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Veena,
Rambabu to priya ko leke ladki dekhne gaye. Hath pakdke ladki dekhne gaye to kahi ussi k haath na bandhjaaye..πŸ˜›πŸ˜› 
hillarious mujhe ek samjhavo , jab shikha ne haath badhaya to aapne kaha 'HIGH CLASS' people n all, par priya ka bhi to rambabu ne haath pakada tha na uska kya??
As usual over excited Shipra shayad pote potiyoan ka naam bhi soch rakha tha πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Hillarious outstanding..comedy
Waise ye accha ye sahi kaha ki ladke bahut chaalak hote hai, sab kuch dekhte hai aur anjaan jasie behave karte hai.. jaise ladki ne kya pehna, kaise make up kiya , kaise baithi thi , kaise chalti hai, kaise hasti hai par poochne pe acting karte hai..par ladkiyan bhi kam nahi unse uglava lete hai sach..yahi hua -Shikha n Height, Heels.πŸ˜›
app ka lecture bhi bahut accha hai Dosti aur Pyar ka...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Hey Veena,

Rambabu to priya ko leke ladki dekhne gaye. Hath pakdke ladki dekhne gaye to kahi ussi k haath na bandhjaaye..πŸ˜›πŸ˜› 
hillarious mujhe ek samjhavo , jab shikha ne haath badhaya to aapne kaha 'HIGH CLASS' people n all, par priya ka bhi to rambabu ne haath pakada tha na uska kya??
As usual over excited Shipra shayad pote potiyoan ka naam bhi soch rakha tha πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Hillarious outstanding..comedy
Waise ye accha ye sahi kaha ki ladke bahut chaalak hote hai, sab kuch dekhte hai aur anjaan jasie behave karte hai.. jaise ladki ne kya pehna, kaise make up kiya , kaise baithi thi , kaise chalti hai, kaise hasti hai par poochne pe acting karte hai..par ladkiyan bhi kam nahi unse uglava lete hai sach..yahi hua -Shikha n Height, Heels.πŸ˜›
app ka lecture bhi bahut accha hai Dosti aur Pyar ka...πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!, what a situation, Ram Priya ki leke ladki dekhne gaya hain, too good, lage raho beta, jitna waqt ek saath guzaroge nazdikiya aur bhi baregi, dosti gehra hoga, pyaar apneap ho jayega, mazaa as gaya, continue ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update veena...ram ladki dekhne priya ko sath le gya πŸ˜†.. wo hath pakdne wala or darne wala scenes pehle priya or fir ram re hilarious..
Heel ke chakkar mein phas gye rambabu.. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† or yeh kya shaddi ke liye bhi haan kardi..bada sa jhol jhal karne wali ho tum haina.. πŸ˜‰
Cont soon nd thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome and fun loving update, ladki dekhne jane wala scene mast tha wo bhi priya ko lekar jata hai sath me πŸ˜†

And you take care of your health :)