*COMPLETED*#1!! FF:THE BROKEN BED,Chapters 1 to 11 - Page 30

Originally posted by: IssPKaur

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Have you guys seen this wonder? I have only seen it a mill times.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3n_69MbLRpA&feature=c4-overview&list=UUT0t9Gqj6RzF3z_VvOaHPNg

Originally posted by: wiwy

Ooo!  Love the abnormal, Iss! 🤗

You are a love guru! hai ki nahin? ❤️

Originally posted by: jdd1959

LOVELYYY...u  have  a   very  good  sense   of  humour. The   dialouges    u  gave  2   Khushi,   Arnav   &   Mr.Sharma  r very  funny &   laughable;   one   couldn't      stop  laughing   while   reading   them. I  have  read   so   many  stories    on  d  forum    till   now  but  i    never   laugh   these    much ;   reading  a   story.  I    think   u  r   one    hell   of  a big    HUMORIST   .UR  last   2  parts   were   Ausum.

KEEP    WRITTING     THIS    WAY    &   MAKE    US    LAUGH    ALL   D    WAY.  LOVE    &  HUGS   .

THANKS  4   D  PM.

Originally posted by: A...

Gr8 👏 👏 ⭐️

Originally posted by: wiwy

Yay! Iss! I too love this vm by zoha! 

Uff! Would love to dance with him! And Indi ! And you too! Okay! Mmm

Originally posted by: BarunDiwani

Ok crashing this tumka party, doing the classic Barun shoulder dance move (during holi). Seriously Wiwy, meri sauten so happy for you and i agree you are a natural, with the dialogue with simplicity you set our imaginations running, i can picture all of this happening. loved the update! esp the part where where he cracks up and she follows. looking fwd to more darling!! 

Originally posted by: KittenRose

it was a wonderful update, the sudden motion of the bed and I loved the "function" of the mirror ha ha, khushi's anger and demand for "normal" bed. Poor sharmaji, first got such a customer. Loved it when ASR asked him "we did?, what crap?" It was an absolute enjoyment reading your update dear. Keep the good work up.👍🏼

Originally posted by: wiwy

Hey! Thanks yaar for laughing through the update!😃

But I want to try my luck with tears, jealousy, romance, consummation 😆 too, ofcourse with an underlying sense of humour that is so much me!

What say? Are you with me?😃 Or would you prefer I not PM you my next update 😭