wow
nice and dfferent storylike the conceptof broken bedthat turn into a story of two people and bind them in one relationshipgood startloved all parttfs
wow
nice and dfferent storylike the conceptof broken bedthat turn into a story of two people and bind them in one relationshipgood startloved all parttfs
Originally posted by: BarunDiwani
Wah Wiwy Wah!!! awsome update dear suat and before i say anythings else, thanks you for keeping the essence of ASR the same with the smirks and sarcasm...it all makes our man soo yuummy.
loved the whole thing and how you incorporated little bits from the show like mamiji, the kanya puja and that line of mamiji about playinga cricket on the bedwaπ wiwy, tussi great ho!!looking fwd to next!!
<font size="3"><font face="Arial, sans-serif"> </font><font color="#0000ff">Chapter 3</font></font>
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<font size="3" color="#0000ff">Physical attraction was one thing and this magnetic
pull was another! ASR had never associated himself with women any less than the
topmost models and he prided himself on his self control which seemed to make
him even more appealing to the opposite sex. He was aware of his good looks. Women
died to share intimate moments with him, not the other way round. So this
searing desire to kiss a nobody girl senseless took him by surprise'..and rage.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">Masking his inner turmoil, he walked up to her casually
and taking in her flustered condition smirked, "Have you finished admiring me
or do you want to ogle some more?"</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">Khushi felt the blood rushing to her head at his words
and spluttered in anger, " Wh..what do you mean? Who do you think you are? Laad
Governor kahin ke! I refuse to go
anywhere with a rude and arrogant man like
you!</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"Stop fussing'.and come on. Let's finish this bed
business!" And saying that he turned on his heels, walking briskly towards his
SUV.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">Khushi stood her ground for a few minutes,fuming! Then
with a jerk of her shoulder she started after him and said in a high-pitched
voice so that he could hear her loud and clear, "I bunked college so that I
could shop for the bed and that is the only reason I am coming with you, samjhe aap?"</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"But ofcourse'" he said sarcastically, as he opened the
door of the car for her.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">As he slid into the drivers' seat and a waft of his intoxicating
cologne filled her breathing space and she forgot to breathe! So when he asked
her to tie her seatbelt he found her staring at him with a deadpan expression
on her face.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"Unbelievable!"
he muttered under his breath.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">He leaned over to tie her seatbelt, his lean fingers brushing
the silky skin on her neck lightly and she jumped in her seat as an unknown
sensation pervaded her again. As he accelerated the car she wondered why he was
affecting her so much. If Buaji had not gone to tirtha yatra (holy pilgrimage) with Maa and Jiji she would have
surely told her that someone was doing kaala
jadu (black magic) on her. Khushi looked at him from the corner of her eye.
Was it possible, she thought, chewing her lower lip. Buildering and black magic
seemed a lethal combination!Taking a deep breath she prayed to Devi Maiyya to
relieve her from this torture as soon as possible.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">The showroom was massive and as soon as Khushi followed
ASR into the shop,her hazel eyes widened and her mouth formed a perfect O! There were
beds of all sizes and shapes as far as her eyes could see. In the middle, under
a huge crystal chandelier, there was a lotus shaped fountain with water
swishing in and around it forming rainbow patterns. Light music was playing in
the background. Khushi strained her ear to catch the words, it sounded like 'rabba
ve'rabba ve'to her and she smiled inwardly, loving the catchy tune.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">The showroom was practically empty except for a newly
married couple who were standing at the cash counter finalizing their purchase.
Further down, a plump woman, about fifty years of age, but dressed to the hilt
was waddling around the showroom, with a catalogue in hand exclaiming loudly, "Hello-Hi!
Bye-Bye!" as she approached each bed. An elderly gentleman, probably her
husband and a salesgirl were following her around looking highly hassled. The
woman caught Khushi's eye and made a face at her. Khushi averted her gaze to
concentrate on what the Laad Governor was saying to the dapper of a salesman. </font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"I want the best bed you have. So just show her your
designs and be quick about it."</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"Yes Sir. Right away, Sir."</font>
<font size="3" color="#0000ff">A peon appeared from nowhere and handed them two
glasses of thandai (a cold drink,
chief ingredients, almonds, milk and sugar).The salesman gestured to two young
salesgirls standing in a corner to follow him and then turning to Khushi said,</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"Please come this way, Madam. What type of bed would
you like to see, Madam?</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"I want a strong and sturdy bed. One which cannot
break," she answered the salesman, glancing at ASR accusingly. ASR smirked and
shrugged his shoulders, as his phone rang.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">One of the salesgirls pointed at a bed on Khushi's extreme
right and said in a sing song voice, "This bed is very sturdy Madam. It is made
of oak wood and definitely won't break. Have a look at this catalogue. There
are many bed designs in oak. If your earlier bed broke Madam, then it must have
been made of low density wood."</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"No, no, there was nothing wrong with my bed," cried
Khushi defensively. </font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"He jumped on my
bed and broke it," she said excitedly in a loud shrill voice, jerking her thumb
at ASR who was talking on his phone.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">Her words echoed in the store'.followed by a hushed
silence' with only the lilting music playing in the background... What followed
was beyond Khushi's perception. The silence was broken by the bedecked woman
who exclaimed out of the blue, "Aisa kya
karat rahe bedwa par ke bedwa hi toot gaya!Cricket khelat rahe kya?( What
were they doing on the bed that it broke! Were they playing cricket?"</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">The young couple at the counter nudged each other and
started giggling! The eyes of the
salesgirls nearly popped out of their sockets as they tried hard to hide their
smiles! The salesman shuffled on his feet and looked at a point just above
Khushi's head! The elderly man stared at Khushi aghast!</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">Khushi realized what was going on in the minds of these
people and she blushed from the tip of her nose to the tip of her toe! She had
never been so embarrassed in her entire life. She would have given her right
hand to be anywhere in the world but here.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">Her eyes downcast she heard ASR chuckling into his
phone, "I will call you back Aman". She looked at him from under her lashes.
His eyes twinkled with amusement as he disconnected the line and his stubbled
face broke out into a maddening smile. Hey Devi Maiyya why is this happening to
me, she grimaced, and trying to make amends, began in an explanatory tone, "Actually
what I wanted to say was'</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"It's okay Khushi. Don't feel shy, everyone understands,"
he cut her in mid-sentence, smiling charmingly at the small group of people
around them. The implication in his husky voice was obvious. Khushi felt
enraged. The desire to slap that silly smile off his face was so great that
Khushi fisted her fingers at her side, lest she lunged at him. He was enjoying
himself at her expense she could see that!</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">She eyed the exit door, mentally measuring the
distance, contemplating whether to bolt for it, when he growled into her ear, "Don't even think of
it Khushi Kumari Gupta. Don't you create another scene here." Then taking her
by the elbow he steered her away from others, especially the scowling woman
whom her poor husband was trying hard to pacify. Addressing the salesman he
barked, "We have lost enough time. If you don't show her anything in the next
fifteen minutes, we are out of here."</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">The threat had the desired result. The salesman
galvanized into action, leading Khushi to another section as ASR went back on
his phone.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"Madam, I have
got the perfect thing for you and your husband'."</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"He is not my husband" Khushi interrupted him
immediately.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">The man nooded his head. "Sorry madam. Hone wale hain? (He is going to be?) I
understand."</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">Oh! Devi Maiyya why can't I speak a single word without
these people misconstruing it? Khushi thought desperately.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">The salesperson stopped in front of a bed which was
partially hidden by lace curtains.The bed was round, not very big but looked
very soft and comfortable.</font><font color="#0000ff" size="1">credit to the uploader</font>
<font color="#0000ff" size="1">
</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">She really liked it at first glance. Seeing her
interested the salesman rattled off, "This is a special bed Madam with many
splendid features. It comes with a rotating base, fairy lights, while this
button will bring down the nets on the bed. And please observe, the most
beautiful attachment, the ceiling mirror which comes free with the bed.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">ASR who had finished his conversation on the phone, and
was looking around bored suddenly looked
interested. Coming up behind her, he rapped the man in a commanding voice, "She
does not want this bed."</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">Khushi's temper rose at his interference. "Ofcourse I
do. But maybe it is too expensive for you," she mocked him openly.</font><font size="3" color="#0000ff">"Money is not a problem," he drawled not taking her
bait, "but believe me you don't want this deal," he smirked, his caramel brown
eyes looking deep into hers, challenging her.</font><font color="#0000ff"><font size="3">"Too bad Mr. Raizada! I just made my choice!" said
Khushi, accepting his challenge in an overtly sweet voice.</font></font>
<font color="#0000ff">πPeeleej send friend request for further updateπ
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Originally posted by: jeshsaiii
It is so different from all other stories I have read! Very well done indeed!
I can't wait to read what happens next! I do hope you don't make us wait a lot xx
Originally posted by: parvaizbk
AWESOME UPDATE.
please continue soon dear
specially line..."Aisa kya karat rahe bedwa par ke bedwa hi toot gaya!Cricket khelat rahe kya?
Khushi π³ n Arnav π well arnav understand khushi l β€οΈ the bed but he prank some game that khushi accept
he said that she won't like n she said no l like it
wanna to read more. ...can't wait 4 next update. π
please update soon n please MP me 4 next update. π
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