mihika and ria---this was awesome. and you are absolutely right about sharon proposing to swayam part. he deserves a proposal.
and as usual...CVs should take ideas from ria, as i have told ya before. mihika i love your writing too...and the freshness of your works is a characteristic of yours. youguys are mindblowing
loved the os..but dont be offended, i dont think that slap part was really necessary to bring into the proposal.of course, sharon was penitent about how she treated him and all...and swayam reciprocated with a kiss, proving that love is never revengeful.
but although she deserved it for having treated him that way---love for him changed her. and she thought she would be slapped by him🤪as if she would even be able to bear that.
but as ria calls me her dii, i imagine i could tell her what i loved and did not.
i loved how i could not make out that this was written by two people.
i loved how rey steers the life of his two best friends.
loved how ypou made sharon he desesrves a proposal from her this time.
and i loved how true the realisation of love was.
and the new beginning----fresh and confident with a feeling of completeness.
and the way of writing...muaaahh.
love--medha
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