MG NEW SS SHATTERED HEART, PT-10,PG -64, MAR'22,2015 - Page 4

Interesting keep update soon n dn't end Hel in love ;-( b continue Tht 2.

congrats for new ss.its interesting.continue soon

Nyc part. Waiting more. Maan savitri ka pota h na. Aur raj ne apni hi bua ke beti se shaadi krli. Ye relation to galat huya na.

  Thanku friends for ur likes and comments.. for two parts bear with me friends.. after tat only my maaneet

           


      
                           
                 
                                         


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Three years back

Delhi, Km

Raj got up from his sleep : urmila, he went and stand near te window

Sonali came  inside te room  : Raj

Before she notices he wipes his tears : hmm sonu

Sonali : u didt sleep

Raj :  did Drasti came

Sonali : no, she is having her birthday party with her friends

Raj : hmm,

Sonali kept her hand on his shoulder : don't wory I have send Maan with her

Raj : im worrying for tat only, he went and  sat on te bed  

Sonali sat beside him and rest her head on him : don't wory Raj everything will be alright, Drasti is small girl, wen she grown up she will know everything

Raj smiles at her : I hope so

 

Here xyz hotel, a grand party from drastic to her friends for her birthday, te way area was surrounded by full smoke and te way all mingles each other, dancing , enjoying themselves

Drastic came with her new BF,celebrating her 17th birthday

Friend : hai Drasti, happy birthday

Drasti : thanku yar

Friend : like all years tis year too u rocked

Drastic : then wat ,  delhi ki hot girl ki birthday it can be some random parties

Friend 2 : were is ur Bg

Friend 1: he is not her BG, her finac Maan

Drasti : dare u say  it again, he is my finac , she started to laugh, nice joke,  my finac should have a class to be with me, not Maan   , see him, his style like 80's ,he is looking like a baby, a person marrying Drasti should be manly, hot , all girls should fall for him, not Maan,  u want me to marry him,  no way

Friend 1: but he look handsome naa

Drasti : leave him yar, now lets enjoy te party        

Drasti hug her new BF, and dancing with him, Maan who was standing there heard everything,  went out feeling suffocating.

Tis not  new to him, but he always  accompany her were ever she goes, even though she insults him, for his aunty sonali. He too have  feelings for Drasti,

wens he  born his aunty said she is made for u, his girl, from tat time he have been loving her as his misty. Drasti too love him and wants to be with him, but wen they grow, Drasti  cant see him as a her partner only her Bg,  some time she get irritates wen he follows her , but she cants ay anything as her dad will stop her if she didt take Maan with her

Maan too first thought due to age she is behaving but later she came to know she don't  have any feelings for him, so now he hide his love inside him.

Maan : did I look tat bad tat she avoiding me, wat went wrong , he was feeling hurt , but his one goal to bring kc no.1, and so he  decide to go uk to finish his studies

Friend2 : hmm ur BG went out were he should be

Drasti slapped her ,  all were shock to see her fuming eyes

Drasti : dare u say anything abt him, only I have  right to say anything not others, speak before knowing who he is, so better u control ur tongue  or I  have  to cut it

Friend 1 : Drasti leave it yar sory be half of her, don't spoil ur mood

Drasti went from glaring at her friend

Yes tis Drasti, she will insult Maan, hurt him  but she thinks only she has te right to do tat, if some one point finger on him, she will cut their finger

After some time  he came inside to se Drasti who was dizzy dancing , due to over alcohol. She was babbering some thing

Maan  hold her and  took her out , they reached km

Wen they reach, it was so dark

Maan (st) : thank god every one slept, but he didt complete wen lights are on

Raj  and sonali was standing

Maan : maamji, u still wake

Raj : yes , if u need my help in holding her

Maan : maamji she is not wel, before he finish

Raj : Maan,

Maan  tilt his head down

Raj : take her to her room

Maan took Drasti to her room, Sonali to follow them, Maan made to lye on te bed , covering her with duvet, ad sat beside her. Sonali came and caress Maan ki hair, Maan hugs Sonali  on her waist

Sonali : Maan

Maan : she didt love me maa

Sonali hugs him , Raj was standing out watching tis

Raj (st) : for my sin, my kids are suffereing

Next day,

Drasti got up with  heavy head : oh god

 Sonali came  with Lemon juice : take it

Drasti took te juice and drank it, at tat time Maan came

Maan : hapy birthday misty

Drasti : Maan pls don't cal me in tat name , I hate it

Sonali : Drasti wat is tis , last night u know I wat condition u came

Drasti : maa pls stop it, don't start it

Dadi came : hapy birthday beta

Drasti hugs her and  Dadi kiss her on her forehead

Dadi : Sonali morning itself u started

Sonali : ma coz of u only she is like tis

Dadi : ahh I know,

Sonali : Maa ur spoiling her , se one day wat she is going to do

Maan  stop Sonali , by placing his hand on her shoulder

Drasti saw Maan was resting himself on her maa, she snaps him

Drasti : my maa and she hugs her

Maan : no way my maa  ,he holds her tightly

Drasti : dadi see tis monkey

Maan : ahan dadi see tis donkey

Dadi : both are donkeys only, so now get ready, Raj is waiting for BF

Sonali hugs both of them, Drasti showed her tongue to Maan  and went to washroom

Sonali : Maan u always do tis, u know how to make others  calm

Maan : maa today is her birthday, so pls

Sonali smiles at him : ok cum down

Both went out,

BF

Raj was sitting reading newspaper, all settled for BF

Raj : hapy birthday Drasti

Drasti : thanku dad

Raj : Drasti I want u to apply medicine, I have  talk to te dean abt ur admission

Drasti : I don't want to do medicine

Raj started at her : wat u want to do, party at night, friends outing hmm

Drasti : no I want to do business, I want to help u in business dad

Raj : for tat Maan is there he will look after te business

Drasti : Maan, he don't nothing he is no.1 buddhu, business or Maan oh god, he cant speak properly to others how he will maintain so big business

Maan became sad ,

Raj roared : Drasti

All got shocked

Raj : dare u say anything abt Maan, wat u think of urself, if I didt say anything u can go and talk,wat u now is only coz of him don't forget it,  business is running In his blood not like u whose father is orphan

Drasti got sad and  run to her room

Dadi : Raj , wat is tis, wen im here how can u say u r orphan

Raj : then wat I will buaji, see te way she is talking

Dadi : Raj she is small kid, I will talk to her

Raj left te table

Sonali and  Maan look at each other

Drasti room, she is lying on Dadi ki lap,

Drasti : se Dadi how dad is talking to me on my birthday

Dadi : beta leave it , u know abt him, but he loves u so much

Drasti : dadi im saying I will not do medicine

Dadi : wory I will talk to him

Sonali came with food,

Sonali : now have it Drasti

Drasti : I don't want to eat

Dadi : beta have it naa

Drasti : no,

At tat time Maan came and sat on te bed

Maan : oh maa today my fav pasta I didt eat properly coz of her, now give me im so hungry

He took te plate from her, Drasti was seeing through her eyes, Maan was relisihing, suddenly she pull  te plate from Maa

Drasti : tat s my plate, u go and have urs

She started to have her BF,  Sonali was smiling at Maan

 

At te same time, Mumbai

a small chwal in mumbai

Urmila waking : Geet beta wake up

Geet woke up , urmila kissed her

Urmila : hapy birthday beta

Geet smile at her : thanku maa

Yash too came : hapy birthday gudiya

Geet : thanku bhaiya

Urmila : ok now get ready , u have to go to school

They got ready Geet went to school and yash to col

Geet ki friend : hapy birthday Geet

Geet : thanku

Friend2 : Geet today also u have to wear old dress, u can atleast  wored new dress naa

Friend3 : how cum she wear she don't have her father naa to buy new dress

Geet  felt sad and  rush to her class crying, tis is te thing she is facing from her childhood, all tantrums, which  brokes her small heart. At first she try to ask her mother why her father is not with them,   but urmila will be silent, later Geet use to it, but she too developed a hatred towards tat man coz of whom they were like tis

After one week

Yash and Geet  home, urmila who was cooking , stop seeing them

Urmila : wat Geet did u got admission

Yash : no maa they asking 10lakhs donation

Urmila : but she got nce mark naa

Yash : but for getting admission I bid medical col we need money

Urmila look at Geet who was standing sadly

Urmila : but it is her dream

Yash : how can we arranged ta much money maa

Geet wipe her tears : it is ok maa I wil try next year, I can get  more marks  and I will try to get it from scholarship

Urmila know her daughter , wat  her dream, Geet want to became a doctor, for tat she haved work hard to get te seat but , she cant, urmila started to cry and  stood In front of Raj ki photo

Geet saw her Maa, and  wink at yash

Geet : aur wase maa tis year I have too much work

Urmila look at her

Geet : we have  fix yash bhaiya ki marriage with meera bhabhi

Yash : im not getting married so soon

Urmila : no yash , now u got a job too, and meera ki father cant wait , he already had two attracks, so he want u to marry her soon

Geet :  bhai now u can romance ur meera with licence

Yash : Geet

Geet : wat Geet, I know wat u did behind tat

Yash closed her mouth , Geet bite him and runs , Yash chasing her

Yash : Geet ki bachi I want leave u

Urmila wipe her tears seeing her kids ki antics

Here delhi, airport,

Maan is leaving to uk for three years for his studies

Sonali and  dadi  was crying hugging him, Raj wa standing, Drasti was nodding her head seeing te two ladies ki emotional

Drasti : Dadi Maa let him go , he  too have to know at is life, how long he will running behind ur pallu, now atleast he have decide some thing use ful to him

Dadi : u naughty

Maan took blessings from Dadi and  Sonali,

 Drasti hugs him and whisper : Maan there girls will be so hot so better  chose one

Maan smiles at her

Maan went and hugs Raj, raj too hugs him

Raj : take care Maan

Maan : ji maamji

He bid to everyone and went inside

PRECAP :  PRESENT

Next part- PART 2 - PG 8

 

 

Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago

me first  yupiii    Edited by sumaiyariya - 10 years ago

nice start waiting for new maan

geet facing hard ships

Very interesting yar...
Nice concept... :-)
First i was confused reading cs .. As both drasthi n geet hav same sir name as handa... N same with urmila n sonali too...
First i thougturmila is raj sis but after the intro .. Came to know tat she is raj's first wife...
She is soo nice. ... She gave all her happiness to her frnd... :-)
Looking forward for the story to unfold :-)

awesome update
drasti is so arrogant always insult maan
maan truly loves drasti
geet dream shattered