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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Originally posted by: sumbulqaiser
RES

res kab unres hoga dear.

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

thankyou so much guyes for liking my ff

i am very much happy.

special thanx to these guyes

The following 30 member(s) liked the above post:

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srividhya68, Apples94, Arjunkibehen, zebbie0504, Jorja, khemanisarita, devildiva21,

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@priya di aka lizadavidum

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who helps me to plot this ff

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

PART-4

All are doing masti in whole night. After two hours they come outside from disko and roaming on the streat.

Riya: sir mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap itna accha nachte hain.

Shree: haan sir aaj aapne vakai mai kamal kar diya.

Chotu: haan sir aap kya dhasu nache.

Liza: haa sir.

Rathore: thanx guyes.

Ayesha; sir thanx to hame aapse kehna chahiye.

Rathore: vo kyun???

Ayesha: sir agar aap commissioner sir se chutti nahi lete to hame itni masti karne ka mauka nahi milta.

Rathore: guyes maine aisa isliye kiya kyunki mai janta hoon meri team ek sath 10 case solve karke thag gaye hain and you guyes need break thats why or main bhi thoda chief role se bahar nikalna chahata tha. He says this and winks.

All laugh at that. And goes towards there hotel rooms and slept.

In Mumbai

Same night

That man taking his wife photo and talking to her

That man: aaj mai mumbai aa gaya hoon. Mere do maksab hai yaha aane ka ek to tumhe doondna or doosra tumhe manake apne rishte ko aage badhana. Manta hoon mujhse bahut badi galti hui hain lekin main abh usse sudharna chahata hoon. he remembers flashback

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Man: tumhari himmat kaise hui meri cheezon ko haat lagane ki.

Girl; vo aapki shirts neeche giri thi to socha utha ke rakh doon.

Man: tumse kitni baar kaha hai meri cheezon ko haat na lagaya karo or tum fir bhi he hold her shoulder very tightly tum nahi sudhroghi.

Girl: almost crying main to sirf aaki help

Man: mujhe tumhari help ki koi zaroort nahi his gripped on her shoulder tight.

Girl: please leave me its hurting.

Man: push her and she fell on the ground and then hold her hair. Next time se meri cheezon ko haat mat lagana samjhe tum and he goes from there and the girl is crying very badly.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK ENDS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

That man: i am sorry jaan maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya na usdin tumhe kitni chot aaye hogi but i promise you ek baar tum mujhe mil jayo fir mai tumhare saare dard, sari narazgi sabh door kar dunga. its promise.

Next Morning

In Goa

All are eating there breakfast and talking random things and roaming some more place. After 2hrs they headed towards airport and goes Mumbai.

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Next Morning

In Goa

All are eating there breakfast and talking random things and roaming some more place. After 2hrs they headed towards airport and goes Mumbai.

All are headed towards there house for resting and next morning all are reached etf offfice an doing pending works but suddenly they got a case a girl is kidnapped all are searching for her and at evening they solve the case and doing paperwork.

Riya as usual making cofffee and give to everyone. All are thanx to her and again engrossed in there paper work.

At night all are work done so rathore call the day off. So all are headed towards that home.

same time at

Grossery Shop

That man is buying some important grossay for his house. A girl also came there and buy some grossary for her house to. But at time they both collided with each other.

Girl: move towards him and says sorry but she stopped.

That man: also sees her and shocked. He was thinking that he was seeing dream or its reality. But soon he realised its reality the girl his beautiful wife standing in front of him.

On the otherhand the stood there as numb. She feels disguesting and want to cry but stood there and her face shows that he dont know this man.

And boys wants to tke girl in his embarace and want hide her from the world and he approached towards her but someone came from behind the girl and dragged her towards the bike.

The girl came to her sences and sits on the bike and goes from there. The man also come to his sences and walk after her but she was gone.

That Man stood there and fell on the ground and cries out his heart kaha chali gaye tum abhi to mere samne thi kyun chali gaye. I want you to comeback to my life. I need you my angel i need you. After sometimes he stood up and wipe his tears and said abh mujhe pata hai ki tum yahi ho to main tumhe doondloonga or apne paas vapas leke aayunga. I promised you abh main tumhe apne aap se dur nahi jane dunga.

In one flat the girl is thinking yeh kaise ho sakta hai vo yaha nahi yeh mera vaham hai but vo agar sach main yaha hai to iss bar mai apne aapko kamzoor nahi padhne dungi. Main unka samna kar kar hi rahooni.

Both are detremining to eachtoher. But destiny ne tto kuch or hi un dono ke bare mai soch rakha hain.

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Both are detremining to eachtoher. But destiny ne tto kuch or hi un dono ke bare mai soch rakha hain.

Next Morning

In ETF office

All are in conference room and talking suddenly rathore phone rang all sees this and thinking they had to got a case. After talking on the phone rathore looks very angry.

All sees this and get feared.

Rathore: dammit

Ayesha: kya hua sir aap itne pareshan kyun lag rahe hai.

Riya: haan sir sab theek to hai na.

Rathore: vo commissioner sir samajhte kya hai kya mai akle team ko nahi sambhal sakta jo mujhe ek assistentent de rahe hai.

Shree: what do you mean sir?

Chotu: haan sir aapka assistant.

Rathore: haan mera assistant jo ETF ka second hand command hoga.

Liza: sir yeh to acchi baat hai abh aapki help ho jaye ghi.

Rathore: help vo ACP paagal hai. jab dekho gussa uske naak (nose) pe rehta hai. or apni zindagi mushkil mai dalta rehta hai. jabse uski wife usse chodkar gaye hai tab se uska dimag kharab ho gaya hai?

Riya: sir us acp ka naam kya hai???

Rathore: uska naam before he could speak receptionis came.

receptionist: may i comein sir?

Rathore: comin.

Receptionist: sir ek naya case aaya hai yeh uski file.

Rathore takes this and receptionist goes from there and reads file.

Chotu; sir case kya hai?

Rathore; ek ladke ki beech pe lash mili hain. He was 16 yrs old. We have to go. All are reached there and liza and riya examing body chotu and ayesha are talking with people and rathore and shree searcing clues.

Liza: sir

Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Liza: sir

Rathore: haan liza

Liza: sir iski maut poison se hui hain.

Rathore: what??

Liza: yes sir.

Riya: or sir yeh dekhiye iske right leg ka anguta kata hua hain.

Rathore and all are shocked and sees boys id card.

Rathore: shree or riya headquarters jao or unke bare main detail pata karo and liza, ayesha and chotu tum yahi ruko or forensic lab mai yeh body shift karvao.

All are nodded.

Shree and Riya return back to headquarters... found jeep outside their quarters... they wonder who's jeep it was because Rathore took black car while they had the white car.

Riya: According to my percentage, its not Rathore sir's car than who could it be?

Shree: I don't know. Let's go and see

Riya: Sure

Riya and Shree went inside and found a person sitting on Rathore sir's chair inside his cabin.

Riya: Who are you?

Shree: Why are you sitting in our sir's chair? Get up!

Shree march toward him, but his one stare pushed Shree behind Riya. Riya just stood there expressionless after meeting the gaze of the person standing in front of them.

Shree whisper in Riya's ear "I swear on you that he's more danger than our Rathore sir." Riya doesn't know how to react. She just stare at the person who stare at her with unknown emotions.

now i am tired.

my fingers are crying.

Continue soon...

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Edited by mastmegha22 - 12 years ago