Saras, it's your turn now

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Saras, it's your turn now

Not so long ago, 

When you did not want to get married to Kumud

You rejected her

She felt hurt

And what you did not know then was that she was almost in love with you


In ratnanagri, you were fascinated by her, and attracted to her

She too felt it

When all were against you

She stood by you and supported you

Proved your innocence

And what you did not know then was that she was in love with you


Your feelings for her grew stronger

You were tempted and wanted to give in

You once again turned your back on her

Another rejection

She still stood by you

And what you began to realise was that she loved you


Now, she seems to be pushing you away

Rejecting your feelings 

And questioning the purity of your love

What you do know is that she loves you


When you pushed her away, 

It was not due to any fault of hers

It was the battles of your mind

That you had to fight and conquer

Before you could give your heart

You had delve deep into your belief system 

Question it, change it

And then you were ready for love


Kumud today is standing at a similar crossroad

When she pushed you away

It was not that she blamed you

It is her value system that she feels she herself has violated 

She has to fight her inner battles

Before she finds peace

Today it's your turn to stand by her

Keep the faith, prove your love 



She turned you around 

With patience, persistence,perseverance 

She pulled you out of the fortress you had locked yourself in


Today, we want you to

Patiently, with love 

Brick by brick

Break down the walls she has built 

And restore her faith in herself

Because, what you are sure of is her love


Njoy!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow this is amazing :) I had to read it twice !!! You left me speechless. Love how beautifully you have phrased it. Thank you for sharing. Has to be one of my favourite posts on this forum !! ðŸ˜ƒ

HATS OFF TO YOU! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Really well phrased.  This is how the story should head too in case they want to retain and increase the TRPs.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarti4you

Wow this is amazing :) I had to read it twice !!! You left me speechless. Love how beautifully you have phrased it. Thank you for sharing. Has to be one of my favourite posts on this forum !! ðŸ˜ƒ


HATS OFF TO YOU! 


Thank you dear, I am so touched 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MoniToni

Really well phrased.  This is how the story should head too in case they want to retain and increase the TRPs.


Yes, I really wish this is what happens, I don't want him to turn away from her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yaayyy!!i am so glad that there are people who dont blame kumud..
Thanx for reminising how saras turned away twice..and how.kumud
Brought his love back..
It is saras turn..!!
Thankyou this was really really.goood
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asph

Yaayyy!!i am so glad that there are people who dont blame kumud..
Thanx for reminising how saras turned away twice..and how.kumud
Brought his love back..
It is saras turn..!!
Thankyou this was really really.goood


I really feel that now it's his turn to prove what he said. That he will always be there for her

ESP since she has done the same for him
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful!!
Saras will not turn away from Kumud. He loves her n she loves him so much too. Kumud is just not in the right frame of mind right now. Her conscience, the daughter in her, is torturing her for forgetting everything in that special moment and she is feeling guilty. Saras will always stand by her n he has promised kumud's parents that he will b there n keep her happy so he will.
Agree it's Saras' turn now.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Beautiful!!
Saras will not turn away from Kumud. He loves her n she loves him so much too. Kumud is just not in the right frame of mind right now. Her conscience, the daughter in her, is torturing her for forgetting everything in that special moment and she is feeling guilty. Saras will always stand by her n he has promised kumud's parents that he will b there n keep her happy so he will.
Agree it's Saras' turn now.


Absolutely, it's his turn to prove that he meant every promise he has ever made to Kumud and her family when he proposed to her. 

I hope to see a loving understanding Saras now! 
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully penned!

Saras...will come to Kumud
He is devastated...it may take sometime, but he will come...as he cannot live without her

She too took time to face him, after the rejection, so it is going to be role reversal here, but I'm curious to know his move.

It is going to be a worthy watch, for how Saras tries to solve the issue, how he changes her thinking and feeling as of now, I'm curious