AS LONG AS U LOVE ME ANSH-FF(chap 15 pg 25) 19.09 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
unless u people give ur views i wont be continuing ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
sorry for such late reply ๐Ÿ˜ณ...had to read all parts...really light and entertaining...wish it would happen in real also...why can't CVs make any thing funny...they have the guts to spoil HM for our favourite couple ๐Ÿ˜ก...anyway coming back to topic...update next part soon...such light moments of AnSh are really need of hour for usโญ๏ธ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: shash456

guys should i continue or finish it...pls let me know


Shash, you've written well,๐Ÿ˜Š
Make a story in mind, prepare well, not just romance

Include some more things and make it longer next time.
Update soon,๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by ananthesh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
superb yaar!!!๐Ÿ‘

but try to slow down the pace...its like u r moving so fast with ur story...๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great yaar...loved it and please continue...since i have stopped watching BV for sometime, I find your creatives very good. Please keep it up...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice.
Pls continue๐Ÿ˜Š
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(9:30 in the night)
all the ladies are making preparations for diwali. and all the men were talking to each other.shiv noticed that mahi was a bit upset.
shiv:kya hua mahi sab thik hai na?๐Ÿ˜•
mahi:baiyya wo...wo..
shiv: kya hua mahi? bata toh ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
mahi : baiyya lets go to the terrace .pls
shiv: chalo mahi...๐Ÿ˜ฒ
(in the kitchen)
ashima : anandi... i want to tell u something.
anandi:haan ashi??kya hua?๐Ÿ˜Š
ashima:wo...wo..nothing...forget it.
and ashima left from there.
anandi:๐Ÿ˜• kise kya hua.?
(in the terrace)
mahi: baiyya i...i ...need ur help.
shiv: tuje help aur vo bhi mhujse??what a joke...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
mahi:baiyya...i'm serious
shiv: tu aur serious...ho hi nahi sakta..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
mahi: baiyya...๐Ÿ˜ก
shiv:aacha bata...
mahi:baiyya,... wo ...wo mhuje ...na p...pyar ho ga...gaya hai?
shiv: aacha...pyar..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...kya thuje aur pyar?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
mahi:haan baiyya.
shiv: kise py...pyar karte ho tum.๐Ÿ˜ฒ
mahi : aap bhi use jante hai...
shiv : mein jantha hon?๐Ÿ˜ฒ kyun ho sakta hai?
mahi:wo...wo a...ashima.
shiv: kya?ashima๐Ÿ˜ฒ
mahi innocently nods his head.
shiv: usse pata hai...
mahi : pata nai๐Ÿ˜•
shiv : wo thumse pyar karti hai?
mahi: pata nahi...wohi to pata karna cahiye...๐Ÿ˜ก
shiv: toh jake puch..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
mahi: baiyya...mein aap ko anandi bhabi ko apne dil ki baath kahane mein maadad ki thi na...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
shiv:aacha baba...mein anandi se baat kartha hoon.
mahi: aap anandi bhabi se kyu baath karenge?๐Ÿ˜•
shiv: mein ja kar ashi se iss bare mein kase baath kar saktha hoon.๐Ÿ˜ฒ...iss mein anandi hi hamari maadad kar sakthi hai.
mahi: haan baiyya ...thank u soo soo much.
and mahi ran down.
shiv:iss mahi bhi na...๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
(ansh bedroom)
anandi had finished all her work and was making the bed.shiv came from back and hugged her.
anandi:๐Ÿ˜ณ
shiv: anandi mhuje aap se kuch baat karni ha..
anandi turned around.
anandi: kya hai shiv...bataiye..๐Ÿ˜Š
shiv: woh woh...kya hai na mahi ko pyar ho gaya hai..๐Ÿ˜‰
anandi:kya?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
shiv: haan.aap janthi hai usse mein.
anandi: mein janthi hoon...kyun?? ganga๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜•
shiv:nahi anandi.๐Ÿ˜ฒye kya kaha rahi hai?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
anandi: toh aur kyun ho saktha hai?๐Ÿ˜•
shiv:ashi...
anandi:kya ashi...?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
shiv: haan. apki thodi maadad chahiye.
anandi: kya shiv?๐Ÿ˜•
shiv: mahi ko pata nahi...ki ashi usse pyar karti hai ya nahi...aap pata karnege.?
anandi hugged shiv.he also hugged her.
anandi:pata karongi shiv๐Ÿ˜Š...(in her mind)wase ashi bhi aaj kuch ajeeb lag rahi thi.๐Ÿ˜•
(next morning)
anandi and shiv were happily sleeping in each others arms.it was a sunday.someone knocked the door.both anandi and shiv woke up.shiv looked at the clock.it was 6.
shiv:itni subh subh kyan ho sakhta hai?๐Ÿ˜•
anandi: mein dekthi hhon.
anandi got up opened the door and was shocked to see mahi.
anandi: mahi baiyya app?๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜•
shiv also came near the door.
shiv: kya hai mahi??๐Ÿ˜ก
mahi came inside the room ans looked the door.
anandi: kya hua mahi baiyya.?๐Ÿ˜•
mahi: bhabi mein raat bar so nahi paya...
shiv: roh hamari neend kyu karab kar rahen ho??๐Ÿ˜ก
mahi: bhabi...
anandi: shiv...aap bhi na๐Ÿ˜ก
shiv: aacha baata toh sahi hova kya??
mahi:bhabi apne ashi se baat ki.๐Ÿ˜ณ
anandi:๐Ÿ˜ฒ...๐Ÿ˜† mahi baiyya aap bhi na ...mhuje to kaal raat toh pata chala hai...mhuje thodi samay cahiye.
mahi:aacha๐Ÿ˜’...ap ajj nahi abi baath kijiye na...๐Ÿ˜ณ
shiv: mahi... kya bool raha hai tu??๐Ÿ˜•
anandi: diwali ho jaye mein ashi se baath karthi hoon.๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
mahi:aacha...โ˜บ๏ธ thank u bhabi...thank u baiyya,
and mahi ran away from the room.
shiv: yeh mahi bhi na...
anandi and shiv started laughing.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
both of them got ready and went down for breakfast.they wished everyone a warm good morning.and sat down for breakfat. anandi and shiv noticed that mahi was sitting next to ashima and was blushing.the both started to laugh.the others were surprised and counfused.๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•

to be continued ๐Ÿ˜Š

































Edited by shash456 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

Liked it very much

hope ashima enters the show soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: geekee

Liked it very much

hope ashima enters the show soon

First let them handle Sanchi.
Then I want Ashima for Mahi๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx

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