Arhi SS : Khamoshiyan [ Completed ] - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mints23


Awww... kaam chalu hai!!
Just writing Chapter 5... 😊


In the waiting list😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update, Mints. Sorry for the late comment but I just came to India yesterday for the summer holidays. So I was too busy packing etc.

Arnav has declared his love for Khushi but it is not going to be smooth sailing for him.
He'll have to work hard trying to get her back.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Beautiful update, Mints. Sorry for the late comment but I just came to India yesterday for the summer holidays. So I was too busy packing etc.


Arnav has declared his love for Khushi but it is not going to be smooth sailing for him.
He'll have to work hard trying to get her back.


Thanks Charu... And please don't apologize... I am thankful that you took the time out of your vacation and read the update and commented...
And truly Arnav will have to mend a lot of things to piece back Khushi's heart into a whole!
Btw... I am sure you are having a fun time on your Vacation... getting pampered at home...
So just relax and enjoy!! It's ok if you read and comment once you get back... 😊
Tk care!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mints23


Thank you Liza... you are now totally sounding like Vandana and Chitra!!
Everytime I doubt myself... they are behind me... to kick me back to my senses!! 😉



Soon we are going to start try outs to play football in a competitive level! 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar



Soon we are going to start try outs to play football in a competitive level! 😛

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Haha! You mean I doubt myself that much?? 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mints23

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Haha! You mean I doubt myself that much?? 😲



I will just let C respond to this...!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mints23

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Haha! You mean I doubt myself that much?? 😲


I am the only one who has faith in you Mints. See I am always there for you.
Yeh Vandy aur Liz aise hi hain, dekha na.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar



I will just let C respond to this...!

First Vandy...what do we do with her, tell me, please really!!!!!!!
Mints!!! A brick wall you certainly are not🤔
So then, why does my head feel over-wrought?
Oh my!!!😲 You don't suppose you could simply be very good
Gasp!!! Horrors!!! 😲 What if I have just misunderstood???
You write Mints, not one, but many different stories,
Weaving magic, that makes one forget all worries.
So please, we beg you, never ever must you doubt,
Stand up tall, smile, for you have done us all proud!!!🤗
Now a few words from my favorite character
Chup, bilkul chup...suna tumne????😡
tum bahut ajeeb ho, mints!!😕
kya kar diya tumne humaare saath, mints????
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chitrajay

Mints...tumhari khamoshiyaan chubne lagi hai ab

...Aagey ka update na jaane hoga kab?
THE FIRST STEP... by Arnav
Burdens released, but a guilt yet festers,
Not work, not family, nothing else matters.
To atone and repent for every little sin,
To heal her every pain, I will now begin.
My heart heavy with regret for all my mistakes,
I will win her love, however long it takes.
Her loving heart that I chose to often hurt,
Kindness repaid with many an unkind word.
The pain I gave her is more than one could bear,
Hurting me as much, but I did not care.
'Tis not the time to sit back in defeat..
She forgave me-now I must take the lead.
A light I see in front of this dark bleak tunnel,
Of keeping her forever, a hope flickers small.
A lightness in her I see, as if she was free,
A few glimpses of my real Khushi.
She speaks, she laughs, she flutters around,
Filling my home and life with her joyful sound.
Silently I watch her - my heart fills with peace,
To all our happiness, she holds the keys.
She changed my life and gave me reason to live,
Tender care and love is now my need to give.
But oh why is it so hard for me to show her?
"She is Mine"- I wish to say, forever and ever!
Unworthy of her I am, without a doubt,
I simply need to try, even after hope runs out..
All that transpired, I told Di that night,
How for her, I'd become a raging knight.
My words fill her with shock and hurt,
Words of deep pain I can now blurt
My regret pours out, at the harm I did
Hurts so much, these memories sordid
Broken I am, tearful and distraught
She is my life, deep inside my heart
Di soothes me with words and touch,
Comfort and peace, I seek to clutch.
Ma's warmth I seek, her face so dear,
Her smile I seek, wishing she was near.
Thoughts of her are always around,
Now I have to do her memory proud.
Released from my burdens, I now weep,
Exhausted finally, in Di's lap, I sleep.
A new dawn, a new hope beckons;
A NEw resolve is rising with the sun.
A plan I have, to put into action,
For which I'll need Man Friday, Aman.
Akash would handle matters at the office,
At home I stayed,so that naught went amiss.
A meeting I fixed with a woman in secret,
Impatient to meet her, I began to fret.
At breakfast, I see my radiant Khushi,
I smile to see her so relaxed and happy.
Had never dreamt, she'd one day be my life,
Never imagined, that she would be my wife.

I rush out quickly to meet another,
A meeting I wanted to keep from her,
Hence I'd decided to hold it outside,
From Khushi, this meeting I had to hide.
The meeting outside was a success,
Now 'tis time to plan all the rest.
Doing my bit for Khushi's company,
Giving it some well-deserved publicity.
A plan I have to make her stay away,
From our home, for a couple of days.

So it was, that both Payal and Khushi,
Went to stay with their parents happily.
Two days to finish my work in secret,
For Khushi to return, I could barely wait.
Tonight was when she was to return here,
By the pool I waited 'twas a night so clear.
A breeze I feel, that wonderful familiar feeling,
Finally come to put an end to my waiting'


C... why are you doing this to me?
What have I done to deserve such beautiful poetry?
Words that are perfect and flow in symmetry,
How you come up with these, is a big mystery.
All your dedications to my story, is my biggest victory!
To respond to your splendid poems, I write one too with liberty.
😊
Thank you Chitra... for such wonderful poems on Arnav and Khushi... and Anjali too!
Love you for all this!! Vandy and you are the best things that happened to me in a while!!
Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aj ek update de do pileej. I won't be active from tomorrow😭

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