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Sammy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: teenorchid
this is interestinggg
so wanna read moreee

thnx dear😳

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Sammy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet
wow different ff where shilpa is being held as criminal for leaving without talking to anyone n now old gang is back
love riya's character very nice one
n who is this london wala guy? sid toh nahi???
waiting for more

yup it kinda irked me k in dmg anything happened shilpa was to be blamed first...so this is like what happens when she comes back...after all shez a strong girl.

yup the old gang is back

i had to add some one for shilpa too,,,AR can have their gang...ofcourse i adore the whole gang,

you'll know soon

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Sammy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

very important note

i know I've been missing like a ghost..but i haven't left my ff's abandon...just need a perfect point to pick n start again...

actually i have a reason for the disappearance

my mom had severe back prob so i had to handle all her work in the house..all that cooking shooking,then had college to...which is still there..but i need something as my stress buster too,,right.,so m gonna continue this but ..

I hope i have not lost all my readers and you guys are still interested in reading this piece..you guys lemme know..,if still interested..then i'll put up the next part..

(the part is ready😉)

hoping with fingers crossed😊

love sammy

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sravz23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

u have to continue this asap...

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Jasmine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

what a question!I want quick updates

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Sammy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

here's the next part hope u guys like it

Part 4

Sanjeevani shimla

Riya:hi!!!!!!!!!!...so finally here..

Guy:hmm...missed you so much

Riya:haan haan pata hai...

Guy:arey seriously..bharosa nai hai kya?

Riya:uh hu ..bilkul nai..

Guy:what!!!...main bechara...

Riya(cutting off in between):who sab chodo...tumhe bhi abhi aana tha...jab meri shilpu yahan nai hai

Guy:shilpa yahan nai hai????!!

Riya:ha phir ...khair tum ghar chalo...mom is going crazy

Riya's house

Riya's mom:agaye beta...aur yeh pagli tumhe pick karne time se pahuch gayi thi.

Guy:ofcourse aunty...aur waise aap meri riya ko pagli mat bulayi yeh toh...

Riya:oh shut up...pata hai mujhe kya bolne ki koshish kar rae ho..shilpa bhi aise hi pareshan karti hai

Guy:bahut sahi karti hai...

Riya's mom:tum jaante ho shilpa ko?
guy:haan aunty...itna suna hai iss ladki se uske baremein...bas milna reh gaya hai...par ab woh yahan hai hi nai.

Riya:aajayegi kuch mahino mei..mumbai gayi hai wapis

Guy:wapis..

Riya:haan kuch kaam tha...kyun?

Guy:nai kuch nai

Riya's mom:haan toh mil aao na usko...accha hojayega...n trip bhi hojayegi tum log ki.

Riya:of course mom..uss duffer ko toh free hojane do..

Riya's mom:hmm..par isse shilpa ki photo toh dikhao...main jaa ke khaane ki tayaari karti hoon

Riya:arey haan...yeh dekho meri friend shilpa

Guy:yeh..

Riya:haan..dr.shilpa Malhotra..

Guy:yeh yahan thi!!!

Riya:tum jaante ho isse?..oh god tumhari friend ..mumbai mei..shilpa...I don't believe this!!!...sid!!

Sid:ab itna chila kyun rahi ho?..jaanta hoon...friend hai..girlfriend nai..

Riya:oh shut up..tumhari himmat nai hai usse apni gf bana ne ki...ek min...wow...mazza aayega..woh madam tumhe avoid kar rai hai na...ab tum chalo mere saath Mumbai ...phir uski shakal dekhne laayak hogi.

Sid:han haan...uski hi kyun...baaki sab log ki bhi...dekhne layak ban jayegi..

Riya:kya sahi darpok log ho tumlog

Sid:riyaa..tum nahi samjhti..

Riya:samjhti hu..k...ab kab tak tum sirf apne past ke wajah se Mumbai nai jaoge sid..shilpa bhi ab jaake gayi hai wahan...warna woh bhi..

Sid:aur pata nai bechari ka wahan kya ho raha hoga..

Riya:itni hi fikar hai toh chalo na Mumbai...main sir se baat karti hu...aur duffer chand ko bhi bolti hu.

Sid:tum yeh dufferchand kise bolti rehti ho...bechare pe aise hi taras aata hai.

Riya:jab miloge tab dekhlena n jaan lena ke kaun hai...phir decide karna dufferchand hai ya nai

Riya talked with her senior and messaged dufferchand that four days later ...they will go to Mumbai.

Sid and riya were going to Mumbai as two more docs. To help out shilpa with any work or just holiday.

Sid and riya

After leaving sanjeevani Mumbai sid took transfer too sanjeevani Delhi. He met riya during a doctor's meet there. They became friends and fell in love. Riya's parents and sid wanted them to get married as sid was going to new York. But riya insisted that she would get married only if shilpa too settles down with someone. So they are engaged. sid has told riya all about AR and his marriage with riddhima..But never said their names and riya also never asked...coz she was not comfortable. riya very well knows about this friend of sid named shilpa who helped him too...but never asked her full name..

Sid through riya's talks about shilpa was sure that this shilpa is the same shilpa Malhotra he met back at sanjeevani...but never tried meeting or talking to her as he knew shilpa also knows that sid is riya's fianc and she is avoiding him.

Now sid had to come back as he has to join sajeevani Delhi back... And also because he is irritated with this avoid game of shilpa. So now, he's going to join shilpa in Mumbai as he knows...She won't be too well in Mumbai now.

Precap

Sid riya and dufferchand in Mumbai..shilpa's reaction to this and AR's reaction to this.

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sammy

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sai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved Sid n Ria...sweet...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

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Jasmine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Thank god.Sid is happy with riya.want to know riya's reaction abt AR.missing AR n shiplap.wjhich actress pkays Riya?

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Sammy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

hi guys here's the next part

hope you guys like it

Part 5

Pathlab

Anjali was working there atul came.

Anjali:hi atul kya soch rae ho?

Atul:shilpa ke baarmeien

Anjali:uske baremei kya?

Atul:tch...anjali tumhe nahi lagta ke iss tarah se behave karna sahi nahi hai.

Anjali:kyun sahi nahi hai.,..how can she just behave like that...yahan humare pass aana chahti thi toh aayi kyun nai..aur phir chali kyun gayi ...aur gayi toh ab wapas kyun aayi...why this confusion

Atul:tum itna kyun chid rahi ho...uss bechari ko kitni himmat karni padi hogi...aur riddhima ne uske saath koi dhung se behave nahi kiya..

Anjali:that was a professional matter..main mili thi shilpa se jab ...sid aur riddhima dubara shaddi kar rahe the..tab toh they were fine..so plz riddhima ke naam se mat chilao

Atul:main blame nahi kar raha hu... main sirf yeh keh raha hu ki at the end galti Armaan-riddhima dono ki thi...kam zyada jitni bhi thi...galti indono ki thi

Anj:u r just making it a big issue..

At:issue main nahi humsab bana rahe hain...ab ek hafte hojayenge shilpa ko yahan aaye par hum mei se kisi ne bhi uss se dhang se baat tak ki hai kya?

Saying so atul goes away from there.

Locker room

Rahul was already there and muskaan comes.

Mus:oye kaankhajure kahan khoya hua hai..

Ra:hm...kuch nahi tu bol kya bol rahi thi.

Mus:yaar wo shilpa

Ra:ha..shilpa ke baaremei hi soch raha tha..god knows oose kaisa feel horaha hoga.

Mus(sarcastically):bada mazza aaraha hoga

Ra:muskaan..

Mus:aur nhi toh kya...yeh hero aur hero ki heroine dono aise behave kar rahe hain jaise shilpa khud inn doni ke beech mei aayi thi..

Ra:haan ..par baki sab kyun baat nahi kar rahe...

Mus(joking):kyun ki humlog uss ko jaante nai

Ra:seriously..

Mus:I know bada hi pidhhi sa reason hai..ek kaam karti hu...aaj shilpa se bat karne ki kosish karti hu...ab aise ghur kya raha hai?

Ra:kuch nahi..soch raha hu tu kabse sensible baatein karne lagi

Mus:maine humesha se hi sensible baat hi ki hai...ab sun ne wale sensible nai toh main kya karu?

She goes from there

Fire escape

Shilpa was sitting there.

Sh(thinking):kaam jeetne jaldi poora ho jayega...utna jaldi karti hu ...aur chali jaati hu...mujhe nahi rukna yahan

Armaan comes there.

Sh:oh sorry..main chalti hu.

Ar:mujhe tumse hi baat karni hai

Sh:huh

Ar:kya hai yeh sab

Sh:tum mujhse kyun puch rahe ho kya hai sab..yeh toh tum aur baaki sab decide karo..waise bhi for you info...main kyakar rahi hu, soch rahi hu woh meri problem hai

Ar:tum chali kyun gayi thi?

Sh:kyun ke mujhe samjh aagya tha ki tumhe kuch samjhmei nahi aaraha tha...yahan rukti toh mera aur riddhima dono ka dil dukhate ...and mujhe koi natak karne ka koi shok nahi hai.

Ar:really...mjhe toh jaise bahut hi sokh hai.

Sh:hoga shayad...waise ab mujhse baat karne mei itna interest kyun hai..mujhe koi baat nahi karni tumse

Ar:mujhe bhi koi shok nahi hai

Shilpa huffs and goes from there.

On the way she sees riddhima and gets even more upset.

She goes to the nurse station

Mus:oh hi ..shilpa

Sh:hm

Mus:main muskaan...muskan chadda...actually wo ...main rahul aur baaki sab bhi caf jaa rahe hai ...chalo gi humare saath

Sh:muskaan I ..i understand ki tum mujhse baat karne ki koshish kar rai ho..and all that..but filhal mera mood bahut kharab hai..i don't mean to sound rude..but ..baadmei baat karu..kal pakka join karungi.

Mus:umm..ya sure...waiise u fine na..

Sh:huh..haan

Mus:k

Sh(thinking):yaar main...kisi ko mujhse baat nahi karni...ek week hogaya hai yahan aa ke...main aayi hi kyun yahan(starts crying)seriously bas issi baat ki kami hai ke main sab ke samne rone lagon...Arey yaar...stop it...someone plz help( rubbing off her tears) she turns towards the entrance and sees someone entering.

Muskaan seeing her cry..thinks of going and consoling her.

But shilpa just runs off to that person.

Armaan bhi fire escape se bahar aajata hai aur riddhima bhi wohi khadi hoti hai.aur shilpa ko aise bhagta dekh confuse hojate hian

Shilpa runs past them.

They turn and see her heading towards a person and hugging him with all her might

Sh:thank god...tum aagaye I missed you so much...(pecking his cheek)I love you

Guy(wiping her tears):I love you too..you fine?(trying to kiss on her forehead)

Sh(pushing him back):humlog hospital mei hain.

Guy:accha matlab jab tum kiss karo toh chalta hai aur main karu toh hospital hai..waah madam kya logic hain aapke

Shilpa makes a puppy face...accha chalo..Cafe chalte hain.

Guy:kuch kaam nahi hai kya aaj?..aur nahi hai ,toh caf kyun...permission lo na ..kahin bahar chalte hain..

Sh:k..

Dr.keerti comes there..shilpa asks her and goes away with that person.

Armaan riddhima muskaan stand there confused.who was that guy.

howz the update..

.plz like the post guys.

maine kitne jan ko pm kiya tha but only a few commented,..agar promise nahi kiya hota toh itne jaldi update hi nhi deti😭

silent readers if any plz like the update,,and plz comment also

if you guys know anyone who could be interested in reading this ff..plz let em know.this is a AR -SHILPA-SID ff

ciao

sammy

Edited by sammy4u - 11 years ago

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Jasmine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

thx a lot 4 d quick update.shilpa is rly upset.and her come back is effecting everyone.armaan shilpa encounter was also sad.duno whats happening.happy 2 c Rahul muskaan back.who is that guy who brought smile back 2 shilpa's face?Is it Sid?i'm rly interested in this ff.olz update regularly